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Main Event:
James vs. Josh Drakmen

Winner: Josh Drakmen for obvious reasons. James didn't rp but I know why....so yeah

Match Six:
Midnight vs. Phoenix Winterborn

creativity: Not alot of creativity flowing out of either one of these two, I am going to have to go with Middy just because she split up her talking with some action, so it wasn't like somebody sitting somewhere and just talking for seventy minutes.
RP flow: I enjoyed reading Phoenix's roleplays more, Midnight seemed to ramble on or involve Rayvn, which got kind of old.

appearance: Both had good layouts, clean and precise. I could go either way on them, the colors didn't bother my eyes. I am leaning towards Phoenix, just because he used colors well. I know midnight said that she didn't have time to change the color codes on the last rp, but come on, I can't read a roleplay that is all white. Far too boring.

attention to details: One critique that I have for Phoenix, is split up the text of your character talking, do something, pace from side to side or something. If I have to go and read a roleplay that is all or 99 percent talking text, I get bored and just skim it. I am going to have to give this section to midnight
countering: Midnight countered Phoenix's insults well

consideration for deadlines: Not an issue.

use of SLs: I don't completely understand what is going on here. I mean sometimes Phoenix and Midnight are friends and in a stable, I blink and now they are feuding? I am so confused, it seems like their storylines jump around like a kid with adhd that refuses to take ridalin. Maybe it is some crazy vampire shit that I am not privvy to.

Winner: I am going to have to give the nod to Midnight, just barely. Phoenix is improving, and I hope that he continues and really breaks out for his ppv match against rayvn. Just split up the verbal part of your promos with some actions, nobody can sit still and talk for that long.

Match Five:
Roach vs. Lilianna Baxter

Winner: ???? Apparently Andrew was taking care of this. Or so he told me...

Match Four:
Akmed vs. Ideas Monrew vs. Wesley Ray

creativity: Nothing too exciting here, Wesley did a bit more that wasn't involved in cutting promos in the ring.
RP flow: I have talked about this before, having a roleplay done in first person mode never turns out very good. It is nothing against anyone personally, but for some reason it always turns out really crappy or boring.

appearance: I don't really like Wesley's banner, time for a change, I will have to give it to Ideas here, just because the poop brown layout that Wesley uses isn't really appealing. Unless you like poop.
attention to details: I didn't really see anything too detailed here.
countering: Ug, neither really countered each other. It seems as if they didn't read the other's rp. I don't like that, it makes for bad storylines.

consideration for deadlines: Not an issue

use of SLs: What storyline

Winner: This match wasn't very exciting to me. I mean these two could be really good, but they need a bit of practice. What I do before I roleplay is listen to really angry songs, it puts me in a fighting mood. I am going to give this match to Wesley, just for the simple fact that his roleplays were a little bit more put together. His roleplay with him and his father could have been really good if he had put real thought and effort into it.

Match Three:
Roarke Kavanagh vs. SVD

Winner: Roarke because SVD didn't show. Shame really.

Match Two:
Faith Rivers vs. Jade

Winner: Faith Rivers, because Jade didn't show.....

Match One:
L.A. Paramanov vs Jessica Stryker

creativity: I didn't see too much creativity from either of you guys. Just cutting promos, one in a hotel, the other I think at the arena. I would like to see different promos from people, I am not saying that you have to go to a graveyard and dig for bodies like the dark carnival does but there are better things to do than walk around the arena or in a hotel room.

RP flow: I am always a fan of what Amber puts out, something is very compelling about it. I am going to give it to her in this section.

appearance: I don't like the bright colors that jessica used, they hurt my eyes. I don't know if it is because I have a cold but the yellow and greens hurt my eyes. I liked the softer tones that LA Amber used. Bright colors are fun but they can be hard to read when you are reading long roleplays. It takes a toll on the eyes.

attention to details: There wasn't too much detail in either opponents roleplay. Jess threw more insults at her opponent and it seems like she put more time and thought into this match.

countering: Jessica countered her opponent well, she had a comeback for everything that LA threw out at her.

consideration for deadlines: Not an issue for either one.

use of SLs: Not much of a storyline, just new talent developing, much like elementary school insults. Jess put more into this match so I am going to have to give her this one.

Winner: Jessica Stryker. Not by much, Amber is deadly when she puts her mind to it, I don't know if she wasn't into this match or just didn't have the time. It just seems like she didn't put much thought into this match. When she puts forth the effort, she is really, really good. Jessica wins this round, but watch out for Amber, she is like a ninja, silent and deadly.

Ernie - Welcome to Chaos Theory, straight from the heels of Moment of Silence, we are coming to you live from the BUD Arena in Chicago. I am alone tonight as Ruthless Villain is at home nursing his injury that he sustained from the Dark Carnival just a few weeks ago. But aside from all of that, we have an interesting card tonight. Tonight, in the main event Josh Drakmen and James will go one on one to determine the GWE Evolution Heavyweight Champion. James who just won his Extreme Icon title at Moment of Silence against Jeffrina is here tonight and getting ready to face off against Josh.

- Match 1 -

L.A. Paramanov vs Jessica Stryker
Stips: Regular Bout
Backstory: The debut of L.A. and Jessica Stryker...One is the blood of the Legendary Jimmy Stryker and the other is looking to make the Management take notice...Will blood also bring talent or is Jessica about to be the victim of all hype and no substance?

Winner: Jessica Stryker

- Match 2 -

Faith Rivers vs. Jade
Stips: Regular Bout
Backstory: Faith has been quickly climbing through the ranks looking for her shot at the Bytch title in the near future, but first she must get by the returning BUD alumini Jade. Will Faith continue to head towards a shot at the Bytch Champion or is Jade about to put the brakes on this bus?

Winner: Faith Rivers

- Match 3 -

Rorke Kavanagh vs. SVD
Stips: Regular Bout
Backstory: Rorke has been gone from The Domain for quite awhile now dealing with the ongoing legals battles with his former manager, now he is ready to return to active competition and he isn't a happy camper...SVD is coming off a bad week on Hangover and hopes to make a comeback this Thursday in a big way...Who will prevail, who will taste the bitter pill of defeat.?

Winner: Rorke Kavanagh

- Match 4 -

Akmed vs Ideas Monrew vs. Wesley Ray
Stips: Triple Threat Match
Backstory: It is about time that we see who can cut it within the world of The Domain and who is destined for the free cheese line..Akmed has been on a downward slide since his loss at MOS, while the other three guys are still relatively new to the ranks of The Domain...Can Akmed finally put himself onto the winning track or will one of these new guys start to pull away from the pack and put themselves one step closer to a GWE title shot or their traveling papers to Hangover?

Winner: Wesley Ray

- Match 5 -

Roach vs Lilianna Kristen Baxter
Stips: Regular Bout
Backstory: Roach showed that she not only a pothead but a pothead with a violent streak when she attacked Jeffrina Baxter-Drakmen , now JMB's sister wants to show Roach you don't attack a Baxter without paying the price for it later. Can Lilianna avenge her sister or is Roach set to take out another Baxter?

Ernie Schivone" Welcome back to GWE presents Chaos Theory live on the WB network folks brought to you in conjuction with A-Hole Enterprises and The Domain wrestling federation. Remember you can catch us here every Thursday night at nine aswell as see several of our talented alumni every Monday Night on The Domain's Monday Night Hangover broadcast...Now that the cheap plugs are out of the way lets go back up to the ring for the next match of the evening..."

Chris "The Lion" De Leon is back in the ring before the raucous Chicago crowd." Our next match of the evening is for one fall with a ten minute time limit.."

T.R.I.C by Otep plays over the sound system and out onto the stage steps the lovely yet very strange femine fatale known simply as Roach. Her eyes look a bit glassy as usual and she has that I need some munchies expression on her pristine face. She smiles at the crowd and slowly walks towards the ring..

Chris" Coming to the ring first ,she is hailing from the outer limits of the human existance or the moon...whichever is closer...This is Roach"

Roach gets a few catcalls from the male fan base as she steps through the top and middle ropes and walks slowly around the ring looking out at the fans.

Ernie" Roach is still quite the enigma to us in the wrestling reporting business..One moment she seems like a harmless and ever so amusing stoner then in the blink of an eye she is lashing out at people with a violent rage. Speculation is once that high starts to wear off Roach we get the less mellow more violent side of her personality...Time of the disclaimer folks...GWE nor its Parent Company The Domain Wrestling Enterprises neither supports nor promotes open drug usage nor do we suggest that anyone should partake in illegal drug usage...In other words don't try this at home....Unless you are Tommy Chong"

'Sorrow' by Flyleaf hits the pa system. Lili walks out from behind the curtain. She smiles sweetly at the audience and begins walking down the ramp

Chris"Making her way to the ring, hailing from San Francisco, California. Lili Baxter!!!

Lili walks down the ramp, she walks up the stairs and bends over and steps through the ropes into the ring her eyes never leaving Roach in a sign that she has been taught well by her older sister.

Ernie"For anyone that watched the record setting Moment of Silence you know that Lili's sister Jefferina Baxter was attacked prior to that show by Roach here and I understand that on Monday night JMB's injuries from that attack were re-aggravated and she could be out of the ring for a week or two while she recooperates. In the mean time little sis has stepped up here tonight looking to defend the Baxter name against Roach"

As Chris is heading for the ring ropes Lili turns just momentarily to toss her ring jacket out to the floor and Roach sprints across the ring diving on Lili and sandwiching her against the turnbuckle....Roach pummels Lili to the back of the head dragging her from the corner by her hair and immediately going low with a chop block variation to the side of Lili's knee.

Ernie"Roach is trying to tear up those MCL/ACL ligaments in Lili's knee...Did we even have a bell for this match?"

Referee Naomi Banks tries to get in between the girls as Roach beats on Lili like she back getting whooped by her dead daddy..Roach shoves Naomi to the mat and quickly goes out to the floor looking for something

Ernie" That right there is going to cost Roach some of her stash money, you do not put your hands on the officials"

Roach goes under the ring coming back out with the torque wrench tool used to tighten down the ring turnbuckles when putting up the ropes...She rolls back into the ring pointing at Lili's knee and smirking

Ernie" This isn't even a match folks, Lili was blindsided by this girl before she knew what was happening and damnit now this girl is looking to try to injure another Baxter. I have no idea what this girl's problem is with the Baxters but someone needs to get out here and stop this little smoked out maniac from breaking Lili's leg"

Right on cue with Ernie's words the crowd that had been booing Roach's unsavory actions busts into a cheer as JMB comes from the back...She don't seem to be hundred percent but she isn't about to let her little sister get cripped by Roach either...Roach sees JMB coming and squares up with the wrench, but JMB doesn't stop..She rolls into the ring ducking under Roach's haymaker swing with the wrench and puts a boot to Roach's gut causing her to drop the wrench...JMB grabs Roach's head looking to give her a little taste of the Hokus Pokus(Twist of Fate) but Roach quickly scrambles away from her and out to the floor...She backs up the ramp grinning as JMB holds her ribs and leans down to check on her sister as several other GWE officials make it to the ring..

Ernie" Thank god JMB was in the building tonight to watch her sister perform or we might have seen another Baxter sidelined with injury."

In the ring JMB grabs the mic from Chris before he can announce anything and looks dead on at Roach.."You are just like the bug bitch...Once the lights come on you run away to hide. Soon though you are going to get caught in my spotlight and there will be no running or hiding for you"

JMB throws down the mic as Roach giggles blowing JMB a kiss before disappearing through the curtain..

Ernie" You have to believe this problem is going to come to a head very soon...Once JMB heals up those ribs you can bet she is going to be looking for a big ass can of Raid to take out The Domain's bug problem...I understand this match has been ruled a no contest folks...We will be right back with more Chaotic action live and only on Chaos Theory"

- Match 6 -

Midnight vs Phoenix Winterborn
Stips: Regular Bout
Backstory: With the Crow/Winterborn fued slowly building to a boil at Devil's Night next month we can see the first shots in battle beginning to be fired. This week the former Bytch Champion and all the time Ravyn Lover Midnight has stepped up looking to take the battle to Phoenix doorstep. Can she fire the first shots in this final battle or will Phoenix show his dominance over the Crow family leading into Devil's Night next month?

Winner: Midnight

- Main Event -

James vs Josh Drakmen
Stips: Extreme Icon and Evolution Championship Bout
Backstory: GWE has decided to combine the two belts. The winner will be declared the GWE Evolution Champion and will be defended only in GWE.

Winner: Josh Drakmen

After the match: As Josh is celebrating with his new belt raising it in the air as he is on the top turnbuckle. The lights in the arena immidiately go out. The entire crowd is estatic over this as they are anticipating the worse. Yes, they all love the worse.

Ernie - No big surprise there! Who is going to come out?

The lights in the arena come back on and Ruthless Villain is standing right behind Josh who turns around and gets cracked over the head with a bamboo cane. Josh goes down writhing his face in pain as Ruthless Villain is standing over the body with the stick held high up in the air. The entire crowd is estatic as they cant believe what has just happened. A commentator that is known for his assholish shenanigans just hit one of the clowns from the Dark Carnival.

Ernie - What the hell is he doing? Ari! Get the hell out of there!

Ruthless Villain immidiately gets out of the ring backing up towards the entrance way as he looks inside the ring at Josh who is starting to get up and shake the pain away.

Ernie - What the hell is going on in his head? I mean he did make those remarks about the Dark Carnival and they fired back by giving him the Wagon. But coming out here and beating the GWE champion like that? This is just incomprehensible.

The camera fades out to Josh in the corner of the ring confused as to what the hell just happened right now.

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