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From: MSN NicknameÑòváCåînË  (Original Message)Sent: 10/18/2008 12:16 AM
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Venue: BUD Arena - Chicago, IL
Date:  October 16th, 2008
Deadline: 10:00 PM CST-USA
Theme: Black Sheep by Saliva
 
 
  • The 24 hour rule is null and void only for Thursdays
  • You have to win 3  matches in order to either advance to Mondays or stay in GWE and win a title shot. If you choose to go to Mondays, you start over from the beginning. If you lose 3 consecutive matches on Mondays, you go back to Thursdays and start from the begining. If you choose to stay on Thursdays for the title shot whether you win or lose the title match you have a choice of staying or going to Mondays,but only after winning 3 matches.
  • If you are gone from GWE for one month you must start over and your record is wiped clean.
  • If you no show to two matches, you are released from the company.
  • GWE now has one title the Evolution Championship(Current Champ: Josh Drakmen)
  • If you beat NPC's they count as half a point.
  • If you are in a tag match and you win, it also counts as a point
  • If you lose a tag match, it does count towards your 3 match victories just as winning the match does so make sure to not leave your partner hanging
  • Storylined matches will be discussed with the GM of Chaos Theory and in the case of needing a count out or a no contest match to further your Storyline you both will recieve a half a match point.
  • There is no longer Disqualifications in GWE...We are the Empire of Extreme so we don't need to be taking the easy way out.  However constant  run-ins and attacks without some direction will be dealt with by the GM. 

This Week On Chaos Theory:
The Evolution Champion title on the line, several new faces to take part in the Chaos,  Tyler Russell in the ring!!  Plus the major shocker that has been worked out between Roxy and Russell for the October 23rd show.

Main Event

Josh Drakmen(c) vs. Ruthless Villain
Stips: Evolution Title match
Backstory: Last week Ruthless Villain shocked the wrestling world when he defeated the champion even if he had help doing it.  This week Drakmen puts the title on the line for one more shot at putting the Villain to a violent ending.

- Match 7 -
BreAnna Black, Big Tone and Tyler Russell vs. Faith Rivers and Serphim
Stips: Handicap tag match
Backstory: In a shocking turn of events last week BreAnna Black turned on Faith and sided with Russell allowing Faith to almost fall victim to the walking skyscraper Big Tone and a flaming table...Thankfully Seraphim was still in the building and saved her friend from serious injury.  This week Russell continues to try to punish Faith and now Seraphim for butting into his business.  Will the new found friends be any match for a man that weighs as much as both of them put together, the Bytch champion and the prick with power?

 
- Match 6 -
Taylor Lynn vs. Jenny Bowen
Stips: A paddle on a pole match
Backstory: Jenny Bowen was suppose to sign her exclusive contract with GWE last week, instead she got kicked in the head by the Queen of Mean Taylor Lynn.  Now upon Taylor's request this match will be a paddle on a pole match because Russell likes the idea of two girl's spanking each other and more importantly because he is very scared of Taylor.
 
- Match 5 -
Jessica Stryker vs. Kimberly Caine
Stips:
Backstory: We now know that Russell plans to torment Jessica until she gets her legendary brother to re-sign with GWE.  This week Tyler attempts to smack two bitches with one stick.  If Kimberly tortures Jessica she will be on the road to perhaps asking Jimmy to come back to Chaos Theory, but if Jessica pulls off another victory Russell gets even with Caine for tearing up his toy plane.
- Match 4 -
Korey Karnage vs Drew Stevenson
Stips: Regular Match
Backstory: On the last Chaos Theory show Drew Stevenson showed up and messed up Tyler's plans to torment Jessica Stryker.  Now Tyler is  going to punish Drew by putting him in a match with the brutal Korey Karnage.  A man that last week took a pick axe to Ideas Monrew's head.

- Match 3 -
Open invitation ladder match
Stips: Winner of the match will recieve a special booking
Backstory:  More will come out about this match on Thursday, but lets just say if you aren't in a match and are in GWE then you want to win this one.  Be the first to climb the ladder and retrieve the briefcase and you will be a very happy person come October 23rd.
 
- Match 2 -
Lylah McQueen vs. Karime Atora
Stips: Regular Match
Backstory: Lylah suffered defeat last week and Karime watched her man lose to Creed.  Lets put both of these women in the ring with each other and see what happens.

- Match 1 -
A'lani Chambers vs. Ashley Caswell
Stips: Regular bout
Backstory: Two new arrivals into The Domain, both look very talented but who will be the one to impress the most?
 

*What came from the Roxy/Russell Meeting that was said to have lasted to late in the morning?  Big announcements are rumored to be on there way.



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Black Sheep by Saliva hits the air and we go live with Chaos Theory for another exciting week of chair swinging, blood bringing, and ass kicking action. We see the shockers from last week's show as it rolls through on a montage...BreAnna Black turning on Faith Rivers, Jenny Bowen getting laid out by Taylor Lynn, Ruthless Villain getting that upset victory over the Evolution Champion Josh Drakmen and finally the appearance The Domain owner Foxy Roxy to close out the show. We go live inside the historic BUD Arena in the heart of Chicago to a near sold out crowd on hand...

Ernie" Welcome Ladies and Gentlemen to another two hours of mayhem that only Chaos Theory can bring to you. What a show we got on tap for you tonight, Kimberly Caine is back in the building again, Taylor Lynn and Jenny Bowen finally settle their fight in a paddle on a pole match , not to mention the big handicap tag match we got later on tonight when General Manager Tyler Russell will get into the ring with Big Tone and the Bytch Championess BreAnna Black to take on a very pissed of Faith Rivers and the street smart sweetheart Seraphim....But the Main Event tonight is the one I want to see...Last week Ruthless Villain had help to pull off the upset victory, this week he gets an Evolution title match against Josh Drakmen. Drakmen has refused to talk to anyone today and it is quite apparent that the man that once was known as the chubby clown isn't taking this match lightly. Drakmen wants to be taken serious in The Domain and I think his first step to being a true champion is to put down Villain.....However the topic that is on everyone's mind isn't wrestling related , it is the same question being asked over and over...What did Foxy Roxy want?"

The footage from the close of last week's show with Roxy making her surprise appearance on Chaos Theory rolls followed by the shouting match that happened on Monday night Hangover when Russell made his appearance there.

Tyler turns all sheepishly and Roxy glares at him bringing a mic up to her lips" Russell...We need to talk"

Ernie" After the show went off the air Tyler and Foxy Roxy went to his office and by most reports were in there for most of the night talking about something that sounded pretty heated at times. Personally I was hoping Roxy had stepped in and fired Russell for his antics, but that is to no avail because Russell is here tonight"

Real American by Rick Derringer kicks in right on cue followed by ninety nine percent of the BUD arena audience erupting into boos.

Ernie" Speak of the devil and he shall come a knocking"

Out through the curtain steps Mongo and Wrath leading the way down the ramp as the seven foot monster Big Tone follows and finally out steps Tyler Russell with BreAnna Black at his side. Tyler is looking the dapper dickhead as always with Bre looking radiant, both sporting these coy little smirks that just beg for you to slap them. Russell wraps his arm around Bre's waist and though she flinches slightly she pulls in close to him as they walk that aisle.

Ernie" I still can't get over BreAnna Black's actions last week here on Chaos Theory. She not only turned on Faith but she has apparently sided with Russell and his misfits. No word on what Bre's girlfriend White Trash thinks of this situation but I'm sure it'll be discussed in great detail very soon."

Russell leads Bre up the ring steps and props open the middle and top ropes for her...Bre steps through making sure her ass is facing towards Russell and looks back towards him with a wink. Russell fans himself smiling ear to ear.

Ernie" I think the weasel is getting over heated and really who can blame him? BreAnna Black is gorgeous, she don't exactly keep the kind of company that would make her dearly departed sister all that happy but she is still gorgeous nonetheless"

Mongo and Wrath circle around the ring on the floor like a couple guard dogs just waiting for someone to fuck up and come into their yard. Big Tone retrieves the mic from Chris De Leon and hands it to Tyler who gives the big man and nod and steps to the center of the ring with Bre right there next to him.

Tyler" Cut the music"

Real American fades and we are left with the chorus of boos still rolling on from the Chicago crowd.

Tyler" Thank you, thank you...What a wonderful ovation."

Ernie" God what a prick"

Tyler" I know the question on everyone's mind has to do with what me and that Hangover Hack Foxy Roxy discussed last week and I will get to that in just a moment, but first I want to discuss what a beautiful job Miss BreAnna Black did last week"

The boos kick up again and Bre takes a little half curtsey, half bow...

Tyler" Did you see the way she lured that stupid trollop Faith into actually believing she would help her against my army? How she was right there beating up those two jabronies IRH ,but best of all was when she lit up Faith with a shot that I'm sure rocked her world...Before coming backstage to rock mine"

Bre blows Tyler a little kiss

Ernie" I think I'm going to be sick"

Tyler" I told you Faith that I have all the power and make all the rules, and tonight I'm going to continue your systematic decimation with my new head of security Big Tone and the best Black sister BreAnna. You are going to see that I'm not a man to be messed with tonight Faith and unfortunately that is a lesson that dear sweet Sera will have to learn as well...I tried to tell you Sera to pick your friends wisely but obviously Faith has gotten you to buy into her hype and now you will face the same kind of punishment she will...Get Ready girls and say your prayers because tonight you will not be leaving this arena under your own power."

Bre leans over speaking into the mic" I'll call 911 and let them know to send a couple ambulances and put the trauma unit on standby"

Tyler and the rest of his misfits laugh as the fans continue to voice their displeasure.

Ernie" The abuses of power this man is making is just unreal"

Tyler" Now onto the exciting news of tonight...Last week Foxy Roxy and myself conducted rather long and strenuous talks about something that I hold very near to my heart...This show right here and I'm happy to announce that next week October twenty third GWE Chaos Theory will be a nationally televised special event in the history of The Domain's former show Totally Toasted Thursday...We will be seen worldwide as both Hangover and C.T. talent compete right here in this ring to be culminated in a very special match. The main event of that evening will be a twenty person Chaos Theory Gauntlet match...two people start and every two minutes after that another person enters until all twenty have been into the ring...elimination will be by over the top rope and the winner will be the last person standing in the ring"

Crowd chants" Royal Rumble...Royal Rumble"

Tyler" Shut up...Its a Gauntlet match, but that isn't all...The winner of that gauntlet match will be the official Chaos Theory entrant into the Devil's Night Main Event with a chance to win either the Budvision or Heavyweight titles"

Ernie" Wow, what a bombshell...Chaos Theory is going to be involved in the main event of Devil's Night"

Tyler" I will be selecting the people that shall go into this special gauntlet match as the night continues...Thank you and enjoy the show...Oh and just a little message out to Foxy Roxy. Next week you will be in my yard again and let me assure you that if you ever speak to me in the manner you did last week with my show going off the air I will not only succeed in making Chaos Theory the top show in The Domain, I will bury you, that ugly little kid of yours and every inbred member of your family that falls out of the woodwork around here. Just a little demonstration if you please"

The big screen lights up with a doll standing in the back and a picture of Roxy's face taped to it...Another of Russell's misfits Juggles steps into camera view and beats the hell out of the doll with that shovel he carries...The stuffing from inside the doll flies all over with the crowd booing any kind of action against their favorite daughter Roxy....Tyler laughs shaking his head side to side.

Tyler" He is a bit of an overzealous fellow Miss Foxy, but I'm sure you get the idea..Now as for the other business we discussed I'm still very interested and I hope you make the right decision...Don't confuse my Olive branch as weakness because that same branch could find its way right through your black heart...By the way how is that nice chap NovaCaine....He still reportly dead because of YOU!!..."

Real American kicks back in and the entourage heads for the back.

Ernie" Next week folks Chaos Theory is going national for a special Hangover/CT co-production and the main event will be Chaos Theory superstars dueling it out in a twenty person gauntlet match to decide the final spot in the main event of Devil's Night...Russell's weasely tactics have apparently paid off finally, but those harsh words to The Domain owner Foxy Roxy are bound to have consequences...We will be right back with the opening match of the evening...Wow I can't wait for next week"

 


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- Match 1 -
A'lani Chambers vs. Ashley Caswell
 
Ernie" Welcome back folks and what an exciting time you have picked to tune into the Chaos Theory experience. General Manager Tyler Russell has just announced the biggest show in Chaos Theory's history for next week right here in Chicago pitting both CT talent and Hangover talent against each other right here in this ring, but the biggest match of the night will be the main event of the evening with a twenty person Gauntlet deciding who will be the fifth and final competitor in the Chamber of Horrors match at Devil's Night Eight live and only on pay per view...Lets go up to the ring for our opening match of the evening, the new girls on the block inside Chaos Theory going one on one"

Chris 'The Lion' De Leon "Welcome Ladies and Gentlemen to another action packed two hours of outside the box wrestling to the extreme."

The crowd pops because everyone loves violence

Chris" Our first match of the evening is scheduled for one fall with a ten minute time limit"

All the lights in the arena go out startling some. "Pain" by 3 Days Grace begins to play across the arena. The lights start to flicker further scaring the weak at heart. Ashley appears on the ramp way head held down low.

Chris" Coming to the ring first she is from Los Angeles, California...This is Ashleyyyyyyyyyyy Caswelllll"

Ashley has her eyes rolled back in her head. She finally sets her eyes straight and begins to run down to the ring. She slides into the ring jumping up immediately. She goes to the nearest turnbuckle and jumps up onto it. She holds her arms back into the air displaying the rocker sign. She then does a back flip off the turn buckle. Standing there awaiting her opponent.

Ernie" Not so sure about that eyeball thing but she obviously has some high flying skills with that beautiful back flip from the corner like that"

Chris holds his hand to his ear getting some directions through his earpiece...

Chris" Ladies and gentlemen I have been informed that A'lani Chambers is no longer with the company at this time so she will be replaced here tonight by the bat swinging bitch...Jinxxxxxx!!!"

Riot Girl by Good Charlotte plays as Jinx comes racing from the back with her bat in hand and charges into the ring swinging the bat at Ashley who ducks out of the way...

Ernie" A'lani has apparently taken her make-up case and went home, but the CT original Jinx is always ready for a fight...Just the other day I seen her attacking a soda machine just because it was there"

The ref gets the bat away from Jinx and calls for the bell...Jinx goes running after Caswell, who hits a beautiful drop toe hold on Jinx sending the wild child's head bouncing off the mat...Jinx pops back to her feet rubbing her forehead and turns right back into a chick kick to the gut that doubles her over and sets her up for Ashley to springboard onto the ropes and drive Jinx' head into the mat with the bulldog.

Ernie" I was told she calls that the Black sky and I think the sky just fell on Jinx"

Caswell moves in for the pinfall...

One...Two....Three....Ashley wins

Ernie" An impressive victory for Ashley Caswell in her debut match on Chaos Theory."

Chris" Here is your winner...Ashleyyyyyyyyy Caswelll!!!"

The big screen over the stage lights up with the image of Tyler Russell sitting his office...He is gives a little clap and smiles.

Tyler" Congratulations Ashley on making quick work of Jinx...I like you and I think you have" Tyler's eyes scan Ashley's tone body licking his lips" quite a future in Chaos Theory and The Domain...Especially after seeing that perhaps you don't like Faith Rivers anymore then I do. Next week though you will be in the main event of Chaos Theory and the Gauntlet match...Win darling and you will go from opening match to main eventing the pay per view....Good luck"

The screen goes black

Ernie" Wow...Ashley Caswell is one of the first we know about that will be in next week's big main event...What an opportunity for this young lady's future in The Domain. We will be right back with Lylah McQueen taking on Karime Atora"

Commercial Break


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Ernie" Welcome back to Thursday night Chaos Theory and folks I know I say this every week but if you are just joining us then you should be ashamed of yourselves because you have missed a helluva show so far...We have countless things to talk about but wait I understand we are getting an arrival to the building that could possibly be in that big ladder match later...Lets go out to the parking lot now."

We watch the car door open on a sharp little sports car out steps Phoenix Winterborn...He glances at his watch and hurries across the parking lot.

Ernie" No doubt Phoenix is running a little late tonight and doesn't want to miss his Fiancée in action next"

Phoenix is about to the middle of the parking lot when high beam headlights pop out of the darkness and a slick black caddy comes barreling across the parking lot. Phoenix is probably a little pre-occupied with getting inside to his lady love that he don't see the Caddy until it is almost upon him...Just before the car can make contact though Phoenix sees the car and is able just to dive out of the way crashing to the pavement with a thud as the car rips out of the parking lot and we get a glimpse of the personalized license plate that reads Crow..

Ernie" JESUS!! We need help outside for Phoenix, that damn car just about hit him"

Phoenix is laying there on the ground kind of dazed from the fall when a pair of dirty old tennis shoes appears in front his face and a hand comes down next to his face offering him some help getting up. The hand looks like it hasn't been washed in months but Phoenix reluctantly takes the hand and is pulled up to his feet coming face to face with a dirty homeless guy wearing some tattered jeans, a long wool overcoat over a ripped shirt...His grimy hair his tucked up under a Red Sox cap and his face in masked with a beard that would have Santa envious...Phoenix nods his head "Thanks"

The bum doesn't let go of Phoenix's hand though, if anything his grip gets tighter...The bum mumbles at Phoenix with the air around them filling with the stench of stale cigarette smoke and whiskey..." Have you seen my dog?"

Phoenix looks at the guy like he has just grown a second head and tries to pry his hand away from the guy without having to punch him..." Nope...I really need to get inside"

The bum looks at the arena and chuckles" Dog hangs around places like this....yep sure does..."

"That's nice...Can I have my hand back?"

The bum suddenly pulls Phoenix face to face with him until their chins are almost touching..."Fear allows the black bird to fly, heart will rip him apart..."

Several crew members come running up at that moment along with Karime who is dressed in her wrestling gear and throwing her arms around her man's neck...Phoenix smiles rubbing her lower back and whispering reassuringly" I’m fine babe..."

The crew guys are all checking over him and until Phoenix brushes them off..."I'm fine...It takes more then a speeding car to slow me down, the old guy here helped me up and I'm good as new..."

Phoenix looks around frowns" Hey, where did that bum go?"

"What bum?"

"I didn't see anybody"

Karime looks at Phoenix" Are you sure you are ok?"

"Yessss...I'm fine, there was this homeless guy out here that helped me up and was babbling about his dog and black birds...."

One of the crew guys takes Phoenix by the arm" Maybe we should get you checked out Mister Winterborn"

"I'm fine damn it...I seen the guy and I think he was trying to tell me something...In fact I know he was"

Phoenix jerks away from the crew guy and heads for the building with Karime right beside him...The crew guy steps over next to his buddy.

"Did you see any homeless guy out here?"

"Are you kidding? Mister Russell pays bonuses if you chase off some vagrant out here...I guess the homeless scare him quite a bit....No way in hell there was anyone like that out here, I think Phoenix there just hit his head and is seeing a lot of things that aren't there"

The crew guys laugh heading back for the building to call the cops and get a report from Phoenix on what happened.

Ernie" We will be right back with Karime taking on Lylah...Right after this quick break folks"


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- Match 2 -
Lylah McQueen vs. Karime Atora
 
Ernie" Welcome back folks , we do understand that Phoenix did agree to being checked out and is doing just fine...Question remains now is will Karime be able to focus on the match with what just happened outside. I know Ravyn Crow was in that car and I hope this time they are finally able to catch up with that freak and put him behind bars for good...Though I think Phoenix has his own bars he wants to put him behind at Devil's Night in the Hardcore Heaven match...."

Chris" This next match of the evening is scheduled for one fall with a ten minute time limit"

As the music begins, the lights dim and a pink spotlight shines on the entrance. The music explodes as Lylah walks out onto the stage staring at the masses with the corner of her mouth curled into a half smile. She raises her fists into the air, allowing them to drop slowly to her side.

Chris" Coming to the ring first and hailing from Europe this is Lylahhhhhh McQueennnnnnnn!!!"

Lylah then walks down the ramp toward the ring. Sliding in she sits in the middle, on her knees, combing her hair back with her hand, staring at the faces.

Ernie" Lylah wasn't too happy with her performance last week and has been suffering from a lot of personal issues behind the scenes. Tonight I hope this transplant from across the pond can get her game back in gear and find those victorious ways again, but she has no easy task against Karime"

The arena goes dark and the lights flash purple and red. As the tron plays, "The world is darker" plays and there is smoke blocking the entrance. Karime is seen coming out and then there is black confetti falling on the ring entrance.

Chris" Her opponent is from parts unknown...This is the Voodoo Princess....Karimeeeeeeee Atoraaaaaa"

Karime takes off her jacket and throws it aside. She takes off her shades and looks around. She makes her way down the ramp and throws her shades aside as well. She then makes it to the end and almost looks at the ring. A confident smirk is on her face as she goes to the stairs. Her long black boots walk up the stairs and once she is there, she enters through the second rope. She then places her hands on her hips and does the pose with a fierce look in her eye. Then she walks around to get warmed up and then gets to one end of the ring.

Ernie" You can see the concern in Karime's eyes about what just happened with her man Phoenix but now is the time that you split personal from professional and concentrate on getting the victory"

Lylah starts out the match quick taking advantage of Karime's mind being on other things and is able to drive Karime's head into the mat with a vicious piledriver that has the fans gasping and holding their own heads.

Ernie" Lylah is showing a much more violent streak here tonight then I'm use to seeing for her in the past."

Lylah mounts Atora's chest and slams the back of her head into the mat over and over with such ferocious intentions that the ref steps in pushing Lylah off of Atora.

Ernie" No call for the ref to get physically involved, that usually just leads to more conflict"

Lylah jumps up getting in the ref's face and yelling at him with the ref yelling back and pointing as his shirt telling her that he is the law in the ring and she will obey it...Lylah gives the ref the one finger salute and turns her attention back to Atora.

Ernie" I don't think Lylah was telling the ref he is number one there"

Karime is climbing to her feet when Lylah comes back at her...Lylah swings at Karime's head and Karime ducks getting Lylah around the waist and taking her over with the Northern Lights Suplex bridging for the pin attempt ,but Lylah is able to smash Karime in the gut and reverse the pin just as the ref moves in for the count

One...Two...Three....

Karime kicks out but it is just a split second to late leaving Lylah finally picking up a victory even though she seems really pre-occupied as her name is announced.


Chris" Here is your winner...Lylah McQueennnn"

Karime gets out of the ring getting met on the ramp way by Phoenix who picks his lady love up in a big hug and is trying to comfort her knowing that she was to focused on him then on the match. Karime is still holding her head and looking a little groggy as the couple turn to head towards the back.

Ernie"Lylah just pulled off the win but by the looks of things her downward spiral continues and frankly I'm getting quite concerned for her well being"

Lylah is sitting in the middle of the ring rocking back and forth laughing...When the ref moves in to check on her she springs to her feet and busts him square in the face with a hard straight right that sends the blood flying from his nose...Lylah knocks the ref down and starts putting the boots to him with the fans booing her like mad until the security hits the ring and pulls her off the ref.

Ernie" Lylah McQueen has snapped here tonight, I just think she can't take it anymore...There is just to much bothering this young girl that I'm not even sure she is safe to be in the ring with as violent of outbursts she is having lately"

The big screen lights up with Tyler once again sitting at his desk

Tyler" Nice try Karime and I believe you almost had her and to show my continuing drive to make everyone better, you will be in the gauntlet match next week as well as your man there Phoenix...Sorry about Crow trying to turn you into road pizza...I would like to help you out, really I would but Crow isn't a member of our roster...Hell I'm not sure Ravyn is even on either roster, he just sorta hangs from the rafters...Anyway I will see you two lovebirds in the main event next week and I truly hope love can survive gold lust..." Tyler looks to the ring" As for you Lylah...I'm going to let you into the match as well simply because The Extremist is still in lock up and I need a crazy in the match...Learn to control yourself young lady before I have them put you in a straight jacket...Drinking binges and violent outbursts only work if your name is Stone Cold and you aren't that washed up has-been...So get a grip before I have to have you taken behind the woodshed."

The screen goes black

Ernie" The names continue to grow for next week's twenty person gauntlet and by my count we are already up to four people with just sixteen left to go...We will be right back with the open invitational ladder match"

 


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Ernie" Welcome back folks to Chaos Theory....There is a buzz in the air about next week's big nationally televised show and the big twenty person over the top rope gauntlet match that will decide who is the fifth and final entrant into the Devil's Night Chamber of Horrors match...What an opportunity one lucky GWE superstar could win, going from a Thursday night show in Chicago to perhaps the main stream with the Budvision or even the Heavyweight title around their waist...Nothing gets bigger then those two titles and I can't wait for next week...It is time for the open invitation ladder match but I understand we have something going on it the back"

The big screen lights up and we see Tyler Russell sitting in his office relaxing on his leather sofa with the Bytch champion BreAnna Black snuggled up next to him...gently rubbing the palm of his hand.

Tyler" I promised tonight's open invitation ladder match would have big prizes for the winner and so it shall...The man or woman to pull down the briefcase hanging above the ring will automatically have number twenty next week and I don't think I have to tell you how beneficial that would be to your chances of winning...Good luck to everyone and remember I'm watching"

Ernie" Wow...Another bombshell just got dropped, the winner of this match will be number twenty next week and will in fact be the most rested person to enter the ring. Suddenly this match just got some high stakes....Lets go up to Chris "The Lion" De Leon for the opening intros. "

- Match 3 -
Open invitation ladder match

 
Chris looks at the ladder in the middle of the ring and at the briefcase hanging above the ring and shrugs his shoulders

Chris" Ladies and Gentlemen the next match of the evening is the open invitation ladder match with the winner recieving the number twenty spot in next week's main event gauntlet match...The participants are...."

Chris looks up the ramp and no one appears....

Ernie" I can't believe no one took a chance on being number twenty next week....People just wasted a golden opportunity"

The big screen lights up with Tyler sitting in his office on his sofa with BreAnna close by.

Tyler" Since no one wants this free pass to be last I will send someone out there that does want it..."

Tyler nods to someone off screen and the screen fades to black again

Ernie" I wonder what he meant by that? Who is back there that would be hanging out with..."

Walk by Pantera hits and Ernie falls silent as the Seven foot two monster Big Tone walks down the ramp to the ring and climbs in over the top rope...He wastes no time shoving Chris and the Ladder out of the ring and actually reaching up over his head to pull down the breifcase without the need of a ladder....Big Tone holds the briefcase up to the displeasure of the fans and lets out a long primal yell.

Ernie" Good lord this big man just has gotten number twenty next week...Who will be able to throw him out especially when he will be rested and ready? That right there could be the your winner next week....We will be right back with the match I have been waiting for Legend versus Legend Korey Karnage going one on one with The Emerald Drew Stevenson"

The show goes to commercial with Big Tone exiting the ring holding the briefcase that just made him number twenty next week.


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- Match 4 -
Korey Karnage vs Drew Stevenson
 
 
Ernie"Before our next match I just want to send some get well wishes out to one of our very own here in Chaos Theory. Last week Ideas Monrew was cut deeply during his match with Korey Karnage and I understand it took several dozen sutures to close the wound. Ideas returned home to England this week and is there now re-cooperating...We here at Chaos Theory wish him a speedy recovery and a quick return to the ring....Now lets go up to Chris for the next match of the evening featuring Korey Karnage taking on Drew Stevenson in what Russell is calling a punishment match for Drew."

Chris" The next match of the evening is scheduled for one fall with a thirty minute time limit"

Fuel" begins to blast over the P.A system.. taking over the airwaves as sort of a concert like feeling begins to come over the sold out crowd. Walking out from behind the black curtains with his arms extended at each side is non other than Korey Karnage himself. He wastes no time as he jogs down the ramp and slides underneath the bottom rope Edge style.

Chris" Coming to the ring now , he is a BUD Domain legend and known as the violent one...Hailing from parts Unknown this is Koreyyyyyy Karnageeee"

Korey parades around the ring for a few seconds... bouncing off of the ropes feeding off of the negative reactions he's receiving from the fans.

Ernie" This man is just a brutal beast inside that ring, last week he damn near killed Ideas with a Pick Axe that you can bet is somewhere close by ,but this week he is taking on a pure wrestling warrior and you got to wonder what will prevail? The wrestling or the violence?"

Drew Stevenson comes out whistling the tune from the Andy Griffith show while the crowd says boy I wish he would make his stats easier to find then he wouldn't have to come out like this..

Chris" Coming the ring now , he is from Mayberry and is also a BUD Domain legend this is the Emerald Drew Stevensonnnnnnn"

Drew climbs up onto the ring apron wiping his feet before stepping into the ring, his eyes never leaving Karnage who stands opposite him pacing back and forth like a pitbull waiting for his leash to be released.

Ernie" This match right here is a main event anywhere in the world and we have it right here on Chaos Theory....This one is going to be a good one"

Fast Forward

Ernie" I bet this is going to be a really good match when we see it , but  alas there was a snafu with the cameras at that moment and we will just have to wait...All I can say is congrats to Karnage on a hard fought victory and good luck to both him and Drew in the Gauntlet Match next week.

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Ernie" What a match we just witness with a past legend and a curtain legend taking each other to task. That is the kind of action you can expect every week here on Chaos Theory. We bring you the best mix of old and new that you will find anywhere in the world. Now just to address a rumor going around The Domain right now, yes it does appear that at this time Team DOA member Cross and the management of The Domain cannot come to an agreement on what his role should be within the company or what his split on monetary proceeds from merchandise sales should be. Mister Cross refused to come to work this last week for Hangover and I understand at this time has made no mentions of returning to The Domain after leaving for Michigan and a spot within the newly formed Four Horsemen. No word has come from Team DOA leader Dante Cross on this matter as of yet, but we will try to keep you updated...Now lets move to our next match, well actually lets go to the back where we have something going down"

The camera shot switches to the back with Tyler Russell still sitting on the sofa with BreAnna Black leaning against him. He has hand on the front of her jeans toying with the zipper and she is pushing his hand away.

Bre" No candy for you until you show me that information you said you had"

Tyler smiles at Bre running his hand along her stomach.

Tyler" I told you babe that I have to get in contact with the guy and he will bring over what you want to see, but for now come give Tyler what he needs"

Bre smirks leaning into Tyler kissing him deeply, their hands starting to trail over each others bodies when there is a slam of a door off camera and both jump as there is standing Jessica Stryker in front of them.

Tyler" Don't you knock?"

Jessica" Not often, no...I don't know what kind of shit you think you are pulling pipsqueak, but I have only one match left and when I win that match here tonight I'm gone from GWE for good...There will be no talks of contracts with you or this hellhole, I'm going to Hangover and just to make sure you don't get any bright ideas I'm letting you know right now that I will rip you limp from limp should you try to get yourself , your goons or " Jessica looks at Bre" your whore involved in my match"

Bre moves to get up ready to throw hands with Jessica, but Tyler holds onto her thigh giving it a soft reassuring squeeze

Tyler" Such a pity that you wont be with us much longer, but you tell your brother that I would love to discuss his future in GWE anytime he wants. I think he will see that I'm the boss he wants to deal with because I can see the Legendary Icon for the greatness that he is and not some washed up has-been like Hangover has been treating him...I can help both of you out Jessica, but you got to help me out. I'll wash your back if you wash mine honey"

Jessica rolls her eyes at Tyler" If you come near my back I will tear your spine out through your nostril..."

She storms out of the room and Tyler shakes his head "Such a shame she won’t listen to reason"

Bre kisses Tyler on the neck" Should I go discuss things with her?"

Tyler chuckles holding Bre close" Nah you got to help me get ready for our match in a little bit...I got someone else that is just itching to make the boss happy"

Ernie" Now what does he mean by that? Jessica Stryker has her biggest challenge to date against Kimberly Caine up next, but I don't like it when Tyler gets that look in his eyes..."

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- Match 5 -
Jessica Stryker vs. Kimberly Caine
 
Ernie" Up next is Jessica Stryker going one on one with Kimberly Caine. The bad blood between the Caines and The Strykers goes all the way back to three years ago at Master of Domain when Jimmy Stryker took on NovaCaine. Jimmy has contended to this day that he was robbed in that match and Nova has constantly badgered the Legendary Icon when given the chance. You can see that bad blood is still boiling with Jessica's comments this week and mentions of Nova running from people that I have never heard of and I have followed the career of NovaCaine for many years. Nevertheless it is time for the Caine/Stryker feud to be taken up by the ladies...Nova is nowhere to be found with more and more disturbing reports coming out about him daily and Jimmy Stryker was told to stay home by his sister. It looks like these ladies will be going one on one with the bad blood a rising again."

Chris" Ladies and Gentlemen this match is scheduled for one fall with a thirty minute time limit."

Lights flicker as the song Born to raise hell by Motorhead starts and Kimberly appears out of the curtain...

Chris" Coming to the ring first, she is from the city of Lost Angels and is a member of the infamous Caine Clan...This is Kimberlyyyyyy Caine"

Kimberly taunts the crowd before slowly and methodically making her way down the ramp and towards the ring ignoring the boos from the crowd... Inside the ring she just waits for her opponent to show leaning in the corner taunting the crowd with that classic Caine smirk in effect.

Ernie" Such a shame that a girl with the kind of ability Kimberly Caine has would get involved with the likes of The Clan and really become the leading force behind a movement that has suffered severe setbacks since the departure of Mason Caine and the disappearance of Andrew Caine.....She continues to champion the cause though, but I think the girl coming to the ring now is ready to put a huge dent in that cause"

Paradise City by Guns and Roses plays and out through the curtain steps the beauty with a brutal streak Jessica Stryker...She struts to the ring looking at the fans with this you wish you could touch me attitude...

Chris" Her opponent is from Las Vegas, Nevada and is a member of the famed Stryker wrestling family....This is Jessica Strykerrrrrrrr!!"

Chris heads for the floor with a quickness as these ladies aren't waiting to tear into each other and take out their anger in a back and forth exchange of punches that would put down some men.

Ernie" I knew this was going to be a slugfest...To much tension between these ladies for it to be any other way"

Kim's experience gives her the early advantage in the match and she gets a couple near pinfalls but Jessica shows that tenacity that had her squaring up toe to toe with that lunatic The Extremist allowing her to battle back. The match continues on for nearly twenty minutes before fatigue perhaps becomes a factor and Kimberly makes a game changing mistake. She sends Jessica into the ropes and ducks her head for the backdrop, it isn't something Kim would normally do but this one time she let her guard down and it costs her as Jessica stops short grabbing Kim's head and planting it into the mat with The Enigma finisher(X-factor)...

Ernie" Oh my god she hit that out of nowhere...This could be the biggest upset of Jessica's young career"

Jessica rolls Kim into the Mahistrol Cradle and goes for the pinfall.

One...Two....Three....

Ernie" She did it...Jessica Stryker just beat Kimberly Caine....I can't believe it"

Chris" Here is your winner...Jessica Strykerrrrrrrrrrr!!!"

Kim rolls to the floor in utter disbelief at what just happened...She looks more upset with herself at making a rookie mistake then she does at anyone else. Jessica is in the ring celebrating her victory when sprinting from the back comes a face that hasn't been seen on GWE in awhile...Akmed rolls into the ring and instantly attacks Jessica from behind...

Ernie" What the hell is he doing? Akmed hasn't been seen on Chaos Theory since the Loser's Ball match, he is back and he is beating the hell out of Jessica Stryker"

Akmed locks on the Sweet Dreams submission hold (Kokina Clutch) choking out Jessica who flails around trying to fight back.

Ernie"Damn him!!! Jessica Stryker just had a grueling match and is half this man's size and now he is out here attacking her....We need some help out here immediately"

Finally the security force shows up and is able to pull Akmed off of Jessica with the fans reaching riot stage and wanting Akmed's blood for the dastardly thing he just did...Akmed smiles at the crowd and rolls out under the bottom ropes strolling towards the back leaving Jessica Stryker motionless in the ring now getting attended to by the paramedics.

Ernie" We will be right back folks with the Paddle on the Pole match..."

We head to commercial with a split screen shot of Taylor Lynn and Jenny Bowen each leaving their dressing rooms.

Ernie" You don't want to miss that ass cracking action...Stay Tuned"


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- Match 6 -
Taylor Lynn vs. Jenny Bowen
Stips: A paddle on a pole match

We come back live to Chaos Theory with a shot in the General Manager's office. Tyler is dressed in a black and grey sweat suit, along with the fingerless MMA gloves and boxing head gear. He is dancing in a circle with Bre holding up punch gloves for him to take swings at.

Bre" Stick and move....Stick and move"

In the background you can see the silent giant Big Tone leaning against the wall with his tree trunk size arms crossed over his chest...

We cut away from that view to a split screen of Sera and Faith stretching out and getting ready for the match in their locker rooms.

Ernie" It looks like the Boss is going to get into the ring tonight, but what the hell is up with that get up he has on? I think he might prove to be a hindrance to Bre and Tone more then an asset, but with a man the size of Tone on your team who knows if he will even need Bre and Tyler to help him out....That match is still come tonight, but up next is the final fight in a feud that started over Jenny Bowen getting a little grabby on Taylor Lynn's man Allen Creed. Let’s take a look at what led up to this Paddle on a pole showdown"

The footage rolls of Jenny Bowen grabbing Allen Creed's jewel bag and giving it a hard squeeze....Taylor taking out Jenny Bowen later that night....Jenny and Taylor fighting all over the stage....Finally we see last week's contract signing that saw Jenny getting blasted by Taylor and left out cold setting up this match to settle it all...The Queen of Mean versus the Ball Buster.

Chris" Ladies and Gentlemen this next match as a forty minute time limit and is a Paddle on a pole match. First person to get the paddle may use it to obtain the pinfall of submission victory..."

Lights flicker very fast as the song "Not Going Away" rips through the PA system. Jenny comes out, cocky smile and all and heads down to the ring, not caring what the fans think.

Chris" Coming to the ring first from Springfield, Missouri...She is the ball buster Jennyyyyy Bowennnn"

Jenny stops at the bottom of the ramp and makes a shooing motion to one of the fans who try to get a hand slap from her. She then turns her head and heads for the ring, sliding in and then flipping off the fans. She then leans down some, hands on her knees as she goes left to right, waiting for her opponent to come out her eyes glancing at the pole and the paddle that hangs at the top of it...

Ernie" Jenny has changed her appearance quite a bit since she officially dropped her claims to be a Transsexual wrestler; a gimmick that was not well received by her other wrestlers or the media in general. Jenny needs to make a new start of it in The Domain and I think going exclusive to Chaos Theory was a start ,but she really needs to prove herself in the ring here tonight but that is easier said then done when facing competition like Taylor"

Suddenly the arena turns pitch black. The density of the darkness is disturbed by seductive blue lighting, marking the presence of THEEE Queen of BUD. The crowd goes absolutely crazy at this point, all rising to their feet and yelling ''Taylor Lynn'' chants at the top of their lungs. They love the spiteful whore and are gagging for her to make her entrance having been away from the ring so long. People shout ''We love you Taylor Lynn'' and '' Spank us hard, Taylor Lynn'' and ''We're not going anywhere till you insult us, Lynness!!'' They are itching for the ultra gorgeous Playboy Queen to make her entrance. Suddenly '' Secrets Don't Make Friends'' by From First to Last blasts through the PA system and the crowd are more excited than ever. Nothing could be more gratifying than this moment-Taylor Lynn-back in the wrestling scene permanently?

Chris: '' Ladies and gentlemen please welcome, the multiple times Playboy Cover girl, and she is Bud’s Main Eventer...TAYLOR LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!''

This place is a bloodbath
and we won't be taken alive
we stand alone
under fictitious skies

Taylor walks out from behind the curtains at this point, pouting sinfully and seductively at her adoring fans. Fuck, do these Mongols EVER stop drooling? YUCK.... Still, it was fun to have a bunch of servile nobodies at your feet, licking and worshipping the ground that you walked on. Gorgeous Tay Tay decides that she would oblige them by blowing them a sultry kiss. They all melt when she does that...man, did she have to be soo beautiful?

You were always my enemy carefully crafting my demise
You were always my enemy carefully crafting my demise
Our hearts beat strong under fictitious skies
You were always my enemy, you suck the life out of me

Your words are deadly weapons
Killing me, destroying me
Your words are deadly weapons
Scatter my brains across the wall


Taylor continues to catwalk down the steel ramp, stopping midway to kiss her fingers and touch her ass.

You were my compass
Leading me to nowhere fast
Promises were lonely roads
I followed you down like a map (like a map, like a map)

You were always my enemy carefully crafting my demise
You were always my enemy carefully crafting my demise
Our hearts beat strong under fictitious skies
You were always my enemy, you suck the life out of me


Even though Taylor touches her ass in a derogatory manner at the fans, this only serves to turn them on more, and they chant her name louder, still reaching out for a tag

Your words are deadly weapons
killing me, destroying me
your words are deadly weapons
scatter my brains across the wall

Even though she's a vicious heel, her infamous reputation has given her quite a face factor. People love to hate her, and they adore every bit of her mean, sadistic personality-even though they would never admit it. With that, Tay Tay does what she has never done before-she tags the hands of all her fans, causing the excitement factor to rise unaccountably. In place of the usual ''Bitch'' chants and accusations of the incorrigible things that Tay Tay has done, people were showing just how much they loved and appreciated the spiteful vixen.

Fuck you
Secrets don't make friends
Secrets don't make friends
Secrets don't make friends
Secrets don't make...

Your words are deadly weapons
Killing me, destroying me

Your words are deadly weapons
Killing me, destroying me
Your words are deadly weapons
Scatter my brains across the wall.

At this point, Tay Tay realized one thing-no matter how horrifically she acted and how spiteful and mean she was, her fans would love her- and that was a fact. Seeing a 15 yr old chubby child, polluted with gruesome acne, Taylor Lynn would usually vilify the girl for being so fat and ugly. This time though, Taylor tags her hand and pouts seductively at her, causing her sensitive heart to melt. As her music is dying down, Tay Tay catwalks up the steel steps and gets into the ring

Your words are deadly weapons (Secrets don't make friends)
Killing me, destroying me
your words are deadly weapons (Secrets don't make friends)
Scatter my brains across the wall

Secrets don't (Secrets don't make friends) make friends
(Secrets don't make friends)
Secrets don't (Secrets don't make friends) make friends
(Secrets don't make friends)

Ernie" One of the best entrances in wrestling bar none...There is only one Taylor Lynn and thank god for that because one her works our censors overtime, two would cause a major meltdown"

The match starts and it is pretty obvious that for all her fighting skills Jenny is outclassed in this kind of match. Taylor takes control and doesn't look like she is going to relinquish it anytime soon...Taylor takes down Jenny beating on her before she goes for the corner and to climb the pole, she is about half way up the pole when Jenny gets up and gets a hold of Taylor pulling her down off the pole by the seat of her pants giving the crowd a peek at Taylor's panties and sending some old men into heart failure at just the sight of that body and peekage.....

Ernie" Thank you very much Jenny Bowen...Always nice when you can see the panties without having to pay up front"

Jenny goes on the offensive trying to get up the pole herself only to have Taylor Lynn go into her bag of dastardly tricks...As Jenny is climbing the pole grabbing for the paddle Taylor rolls to the floor and goes under the ring coming out with her own paddle...A special made Taylor Lynn paddle no doubt that has had studs drilled into the wood making it look like one ass tearing up piece of violence.

Ernie" She isn't allowed to do that...Jenny doesn’t know Taylor has another paddle, she thinks she is bringing the only one into play. That is the problem with facing someone in the match that have made famous, they always know all of the tricks"

Jenny grabs the paddle from the pole jumping down into the ring to the delight of her fans, a delight that is quickly turned off when Jenny turns and Taylor busts her in the head with her own paddle bringing the wood right over Jenny's head and dropping her like a sack of rocks in a pond...

Ernie" Good lord she could have killed her with that shot...Damn it Taylor"

Taylor stalks around the lifeless and bleeding Jenny Bowen before putting a foot right in the center of her chest and going for the pinfall.

One...Two....Three

Ernie" Jenny Bowen never seen that shot coming, she could have a severe concussion from that shot"

Chris steps into the ring" Here in your winner...Taylorrrrrrrr Lynn!!!"

Taylor drops the broken paddle and picks up the one Jenny and gotten from the pole. She hits Chris on the ass with it sending him scurrying to the floor like a cockroach when the lights come on...Then she turns her attention to the ref who hits the floor without even needing some persuading...Taylor then turns her attention to Jenny, she pulls the Ball Buster over to the ropes and drapes her over the second one leaving Jenny's ass open for Taylor to tee off on with a series of hard, brutal spanks.

Ernie" Jenny is going to have trouble sitting down in the morning after this trip to the woodshed"

Taylor drops the paddle and goes for the front of her tights to the delight of the male fans.

Ernie" Good lord I think she is going to piss on Jenny"

The big screen lights up just then with Tyler once again appearing

Tyler" Not so fast Taylor...Wait until you get to the little girl's room before you use the bathroom"

Taylor looks up at screen half pouting half pissed off that she got stopped before she could have some real fun.

Tyler" Awww I know it breaks your heart but perhaps next time when you barge in on me taking care of matters you will do the right thing and stay around to help me release the tension."

Tyler smirks and Taylor gags.

Tyler" However to make it up to you about being unable to give Jenny a Golden Shower...I'm going to let you into next week's Gauntlet main event and if you can track down your muscle bound freak tell Creed he is in as well...Good Luck"

Ernie" More people continue to be added into next week's Gauntlet and it is shaping up to be quite a fight with some stellar talent involved...We will be right back with the Handicap tag match"

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Ernie" Welcome back folks and what a match you just missed if you are just getting here. Taylor Lynn taking on Jenny Bowen lived up to the hype but now it is time to switch gears to the big handicap tag match tonight"

In the back we see Tyler walking out of his office with Bre at his side. He still is dressed in the headgear and MMA gloves looking like he is a sparring partner for Michael Bisping and not about to wrestle a match tonight.

Bre" I thought you said your guy would be here with the information. Where is he Tyler?"

Tyler shrugs, spitting out his mouth piece into his hand

Tyler" He must have gotten lost babe, don't worry I promise you that he will be here next week for you"

Bre steps around to face Tyler stopping him from heading down the hallway.

Bre" Listen here Russell, you promised me something and I don't like people that break their promises. Until I get what I want, you won't be getting anymore of what you want"

Bre storms off down the hallway with Tyler chasing after her.

Tyler" C'mon babyyyyyyy...Don't be like that"

Ernie is laughing when we go back ringside

Ernie" Looks like Tyler just got cut off until he produces something he promised Bre....I wonder what Tyler could have that Bre could want?"

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Tyler is running around looking for Bre when he comes across Jessica Stryker instead....Her neck is bruised and she has this I'm going to kill you look on her face that has Tyler making an about face and heading the other way hoping she hadn't seen him.

"RUSSELL!!"

Damn I guess that hope is for nothing. Tyler turns around trying to look all concerned and giving Jessica that I'm your friend smile.

Tyler" Jessica, I was just coming to see you. I seen what happened out there in the ring and really that is just horrible, absolutely horrible"

Jessica is speaking through clenched teeth" Where the hell is that tub of goo Akmed...I'm going to kick his ass so hard he will be spitting out my boot laces for a month"

Tyler nods still trying to keep that compassionate face going as he steps in closer to Jessica.

Tyler" I think he left the building, I tried to stop him with my crack team of security personnel but obviously he had a getaway plan that got him out of here before I really could bring down the power of my authority on him. Don't you worry though I will get him for what he did" Tyler looks away "It is just a shame that you won't be here to see...By the way congrats on winning your final match you needed...I know you will do great on Hangover"

Jessica looks down at the floor" Thanks...I guess. Damn that Jimmy for not being here tonight when I needed him, I wouldn’t have to worry about fat pricks like Akmed if Jimmy had been here like he should have been"

Tyler seemed to recall her telling Jimmy to stay away from the arena but he wasn't about to bring that up now.

Tyler" Really he should have been here...I know if I had a beautiful, young sister such as yourself I would be here looking out for her. I wouldn't want disgusting toads like Akmed touching her.....Just horrible, absolutely horrible and to think I was going to offer you a spot in next week's gauntlet match but now with you leaving I guess that won't happen either...Well it's been real nice talking to you Jessica, make sure to keep in touch...Send us a postcard sometime"

Tyler turned to walk away playing the odds that Jessica was as greedy and gold hungry as anyone else..." Wait"

Bingo...Tyler turns around all innocent looking" Yeah?"

"What would I have to do to get into that match next week?"

Tyler walked over to Jessica putting his arm around her waist and pulling her in close" Oh I'm sure we could work something out"

Jessica pushed Tyler away looking all disgusted" Not in a million years Pipsqueak"

Tyler chuckled though he was thinking you know you want this, all women love power" Of course not, I was just thinking that maybe we could work out a match situation...I know you have the contractual ability to sign matches for Jimmy and I think it would only be right that he show up to defend his sister. So what do you say to a little contract signing for Jimmy to work for GWE this next week, one night only just to see how we like it and maybe we can go from there...A little wash my back and I will wash yours"

Jessica stands there for a moment and then she does something that probably has her fans standing up screaming at their televisions and pleading for her to not do it...She walks in close to Tyler and smiles putting the tip of her index finger to her lips and then placing it on the tip of Tyler's nose...

Jessica" You show me signed papers stating I'm in next week's gauntlet match and I will deliver my brother for next week...One on one against Akmed, but I want it to be something nice and brutal....Lets say a barbed wire bloodbath match"

Tyler grins" I like the way you think...Consider it done"

Jessica smiles walking away down the hallway with Tyler watching her leave. You hear her voice off camera" Quit staring at my ass Russell...The answer is still no"

Tyler shrugs turning to head the opposite way muttering" Just because I can't dine, doesn't mean I shouldn't be allowed to look at the menu"

Tyler gets a little further down the hallway and takes his cell phone out of his boot; ya know just because he likes to have it with him everywhere he goes even the wrestling ring. He dials a number from the phone memory and waits for an answer...

Tyler" Yeah...its me....You did very good tonight...Consider yourself up for a bonus, just make sure you carry out your task next week"

Tyler hangs up and walks off.

Ernie" I can't believe what I just witnessed...Jessica Stryker just sold her brother down the river for a spot in next week's gauntlet match, she told Jimmy to stay away and now she is blaming him for the attack...I don't know what is going through that vindictive little vixen's head but you can bet Jimmy Stryker isn't going to be a happy camper when he sees this....Next week not only do we have the gauntlet match but now we got a Barbed Wire Bloodbath match...The ropes will be replaced with razor wire and the ring will be filled with various weapons all wrapped in barbed wire....This is not a match for the weak of stomach or the faint of heart....Stay tuned folks we got tag team handicap action up next....Who was Tyler talking to on the phone anyway?"

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- Match 7 -
BreAnna Black, Big Tone and Tyler Russell vs. Faith Rivers and Seraphim

When we come back live it is a shot of Chris De Leon in the ring ready to introduce the next match.

Chris" Ladies and Gentlemen the next match of the evening is scheduled for one fall with a thirty minute time limit and is a handicap tag team match."

The opening riffs of "Skinny Little Bitch" tear through the speakers, and catch the attention of the audience in attendance. The lights begin to flash bright pink and from out of the curtains steps Seraphim, commanding the stage with nothing more than her presence.

Chris" Coming to the ring first, she is from the City of Industry...This is the street smart sweetheart, Seraphimmmmmmmmmm!!

Sera glances out at the capacity crowd, before marching down the ramp in her knee-high buckled combat boots. Reaching the bottom of the ramp, she pauses to glance out at the crowd again before nimbly leaping up to the apron. Stepping in between the top two ropes, she leans back to pass her torso through, earning herself a few catcalls from the lucky bastards in the front row who just got an eyeful down her Victorian-style corset. She simply struts to the centre of the ring and stands there patiently, her hip cocked to the left and her hand resting comfortably on it.

Ernie" She is definitely a unique young lady, but one has to wonder if she hasn't bit off more then can chew taking sides against a power hungry prick like Tyler Russell and his cohorts"

The lights go out as "Faith" by Limp Bizkit begins to come out of the PA system. Faith Rivers walks out and stands at the top of the entrance ramp. As the chorus of the song hits, 'You Gotta Have Faith' she jumps up a little and as her feet come down on the ramp again, fireworks go off behind Faith, just before she runs down the ramp and slides into the ring. As she gets to her feet, Faith runs into the corner and gets up on the second turnbuckle. She taunts the fans a bit before jumping down and walking over next to Sera waiting for their opponents to make an appearance.

Ernie" Faith is more then just T and A no matter what Russell says, she has an ability that could someday propel her to the highest titles in The Domain but first she must settle her business here tonight and again one on one with Big Tone at Devil's Night. Faith has the proverbial deck stacked against her, but if I was betting on anyone to pull the ace it would be her"

Real American by Rick Derringer plays as out onto the stage steps Tyler Russell dressed in his Karate gui , head gear and those fingerless MMA gloves, behind him steps the Seven Foot Two walking wall Big Tone...

Chris" Coming to the ring first, he is the General Manager of Chaos Theory and his partner is the new head of security they are Tyler Russell and Big Toneeeeeee"

Russell and Tone stop at ringside looking up the ramp as the music selection changes.

Ernie" It is time for the Bytch Championess to make her appearance, but she sure didn't seem to happy with Russell in the back and one has to wonder if that will play a factor in this match"

Psycho by Puddle of Mudd plays at BreAnna Black comes out onto the stage dressed in her skin tight shorts and tank top ring attire with Black emblazoned on the ass of the shorts. She struts down towards the ring holding the Bytch title in the air as she gets closer to ringside and the boos really start to kick in.

Chris" Their partner is from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma and is the current reigning and defending Bytch Championess...This is Breannnnnnnnnna Black"

Bre stops at ringside next to Tyler and Tone...Tyler leans over trying to kiss Bre but she quickly jumps up onto the ring apron giving Tyler the cold shoulder.

Ernie" Ohhhh I smell trouble in the Lovebird's tree...Tyler might have just picked the one partner that isn't impressed with his power"

The bell rings and we are underway with Faith and Bre starting out the match in a back and forth wrestling exhibition that has all the fans on their feet counting along with each back and forth near fall the girls get on each other.

Ernie" We are seeing a wrestling clinic and I must say I'm a bit surprised we would see such action when I expected nothing but a brawl."

Faith scoop slams Bre and looks for the elbow drop, Bre quickly rolls out of the way coming up to her feet and looking for a kick to the head, Faith blocks it catching the ankle and taking Bre over looking for the ankle lock, Bre rolls through as Faith comes to her feet trying to cinch in the ankle lock and goes for the pinfall

One...Two...T

Faith kicks out and both girls come to their feet to a standing ovation.

Ernie" What an opening to this match I'm breathless just watching it"

All of that wrestling quickly ends when Faith Irish whips Bre into the ropes, Bre reverses and Faith gets kicked in the back of the head by that little weasel Russell. The ref is over yelling at Tyler for interfering and Bre tags in the big man Tone...Who takes over total control of Faith throwing her around the ring like a rag doll.

Ernie" My god look at the power of this big man...He is effortlessly throwing Faith around like she weighs nothing at all"

Tone sends Faith flying into the corner and charges in looking for the big splash, Faith moves out of the way at the last second and Tone hits the turnbuckle full on...

Ernie" The damn ring just moved a foot"

Faith makes it to her corner tagging in Sera who lays in a series of forearms and then hits the ropes diving at Tone with a big hammer fist sorta shot that seems to have very little effect on Tone who brushes Sera away and staggers towards his corner getting the tag to Bre who comes in stomping on Sera and taking her over with a vicious snap suplex pointing to the top ropes perhaps going for the Fall from Grace(Moonsault) when Tyler sticks his hand out for the first time in the match calling for the tag. Bre points to the ropes but Tyler continues to jump up and down calling for the tag

Ernie" Look at Mister Bravery now that Sera is down...He didn't want into this match at all when Faith and Sera were both fresh and ready to fight"

Bre reluctantly tags in Tyler who lays in several kicks to Sera's ribs and then goes into his little Kata pose...

Ernie" Oh good lord someone get the Karate Kid out the ring before he goes for a Crane Kick"

Tyler goes for another kick as Sera comes up to her knees but the street smart sweetheart catches his boot and knocks him off balance...Tyler tries to scramble away to his corner but Sera hooks his leg dragging him kicking and screaming towards her corner and Faith who is begging for a tag to the delight of the sold out crowd.

Ernie" I think Russell is about to take a trip to the woodshed..."

Faith gets the tag and comes in as Sera lets of Russell and he scrambles to this feet getting spun around by Faith...Tyler swings at Faith who ducks his looping left hook and buries a shot to his gut that has the power doubled over coughing and choking like an asthma patient in a marathon. Faith picks Tyler up and slams him down hitting the ropes and dropping a knee to his head ala Ric Flair...Russell rolls around on the mat grabbing his head and the fans are going nuts...

Ernie" Faith is finally doing something so many people have wanted to do, she is kicking Tyler Russell's smarmy ass"

Faith goes for the pinfall...

One...Two...Thre

Bre is in the ring breaking up the count and starting to battle with Faith as the ref tries to break them up...Big Tone comes in over the top ropes ready to destroy Faith when Sera runs along the ring apron leaping up to the top ropes and jumping onto Big Tone's back trying to take him down...

Ernie" All hell is breaking loose out here...The ref has lost complete control of his match"

Russell gets up onto his hands and knees at a very bad time as he actually trips Tone up causing the big man to fall to the mat for the first time looking like a damn Redwood falling.

Ernie"Timmmmmmmmmmmmberrrrrrr!!!"

Faith and Bre battle out onto the floor with the ref yelling at them to get back in the ring...Russell gets to his feet going into his tights and pulling out a piece of metal that he tucks up into the forehead part of his head gear.

Ernie" What did Russell just stick into his head gear?"

Tone shrugs Sera off again trying to get to his feet with Sera right back on him trying to get him down by going after the knees...Faith dispatches with Bre coming back into the ring and charging at Tone going high on him as Sera goes low and once again the big man goes down like a ton of bricks...Bre throws a chair into the ring and then grabs another with the ref stopping her at the ropes trying to get the one away from her and missing the pin attempt on Tone by Faith....Russell moves in kicking Faith in the side of the head and grabbing for the other chair Bre had thrown into the ring...Faith gives up on the pinfall racing towards Russell she hooks his head and plants him in on his face with running DDT...She grabs the chair now and goes to hit Tone who is now getting back up...She blasts Tone upside the head with the chair sending an echoing thud throughout the building.....Tyler gets up but Sera is back in and shoves him out of the way coming up behind Faith who mistakenly thinks it is Tyler coming up on her again and turns quickly blasting Sera with the chair by accident.

Ernie" No!! She just hit the wrong person and damn near took Sera's head off with that shot"

Faith looks stunned staring down at Sera when Tyler launches himself at Faith head butting her with whatever he shoved into his headgear...Faith goes down like she got shot but evidently whatever it was knocked Russell for a loop as well...He staggers around the middle of the ring disoriented with Bre coming through and shoving him onto a lifeless Faith as the ref was putting the first chair back on the floor.

Ernie"Noooo, not like this damn it"

One...Two....Three....

Ernie" Son of a bitch they just stole this match...Russell don't even know where he is"

Chris" Here is your winners...BreAnna Black, Tyler Russell and Bigggggggggggg Tonneeeeeeeeee!!"

Crowd litters the ring with trash but it does no good as Russell and his cohorts have just stolen a victory over Faith and Sera....Bre and Tone back up the ramp looking at the ring with Russell slung over Tone's shoulder like a fifty pound sack of potatoes...

Ernie" He sure looks like winner huh folks?"

In the ring Faith and Sera finally start to get up with Sera reaching her feet first holding her head...Faith walks towards her obviously trying to apologize for the mistake but Sera shoves Faith away and heads out of the ring leaving Faith standing there lost at what to do next.

Ernie" It was an accident but I don't think Seraphim realizes that or if she does she is really pissed off at the moment and I just have gotten word that both Faith and Sera will be entered into next week's gauntlet match....as well as BreAnna Black and Big Tone.....What a main event we are shaping up to have next week, but first we have a main event to decide tonight....The Evolution title is on the line next!!!"

Commercial break with a final shot of a dejected Faith Rivers leaving the ring and slowly walking towards the backstage.


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 Message 14 of 15 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameÑòváCåînËSent: 10/18/2008 12:32 AM
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Main Event
Josh Drakmen(c) vs. Ruthless Villain
Stips: Evolution Title match

Ernie" Welcome back folks and that was indeed the last commercial of the night, all of the bills are paid and we are ready to watch an Evolution title match. Josh Drakmen has been talking a lot lately about not getting the kind of respect he deserves but I don't expect he will get much more respect tonight from his very unlikely challenger. Ruthless Villain use to sit at my side for many years calling Monday Night Hangover, Pay per views and finally GWE Chaos Theory. Now Villain has left the announcer's table and stepped into the ring. He got lucky last week with the help of Martie but I think this week his luck has finally ran out, let’s take a look at the closing of last week's controversial match"

The footage of Martie helping Ruthless Villain put down Josh Drakmen is shown and then Tyler announcing this week's big main even title match. We cut back live with a shot at the back entrance doors and the Gay Icon Martie walking into the building grinning ear to ear.

Ernie"Martie has just arrived at the building, we still don't know why Martie helped out Villain last week but with him in the building I think Josh Drakmen needs to grow eyes in the back of his head. Let’s go up to special guest ring announcer Hangover's very own Lily for this Championship match up"

Lily steps to the middle of the ring getting a nice ovation for her surprise visit to Chaos Theory this week.

Lily" Ladies and Gentlemen it is now time for the main event of the evening...It is scheduled for one fall with a one hour time limit and is for the Evolution Championship."

Asshole" by Denis Leary is heard on the speakers and out walks Ruthless Villain towards the ring.

Ernie" I can't believe the man that once sat beside me learning the ropes to be a color commentator is now in the ring about to challenge for the highest title on Chaos Theory. It is just surreal to think that this man could somehow walk out of here tonight as the GWE Evolution champion when he know less wrestling holds then I do. "

Villain gets into the ring and stands in his corner taunting the fans around ringside and smiling so assholish that Syck himself would be proud.

'Broken Wings' begins to play over the public announce system, green pyro rain onto the stage in a shower of light and Josh steps out from behind the curtain. He takes a moment on the stage to drink in his surroundings, as the pyro thin and then stop, before making his way down the ramp. As he walks down the ramp on either side of him colorful signs wave widely, people scream and yell, and occasionally a member of the audience flips him the bird...When Josh reaches the ring he hops up onto the apron and steps into the ring between the top and middle ropes and makes his way to his corner his eyes locked on Villain with a dead pan stare.

Ernie" Josh Drakmen has been called a lot of things but tonight I expect to see him finally start to shine as an Evolution Champion. He holds the highest and only belt in GWE and I think it is time for the Clown Prince to show he knows what it takes to be a champion."

Lily steps back to the center of the ring as the ref takes the belt from Josh and holds it up for everyone to see and then takes it over for Villain to get a close look at it.

Lily" Standing in the corner to my right wearing the white wife beater and dark jeans, and weighing in this morning at two hundred and forty six pounds...He is from Hollywood, California please welcome the challenger....Ruthlessssssss Villain!!"

The boos kick up from the crowd.

Lily" His opponent standing to my left wearing the Juggalo jersey and black baggy shorts and weighing two hundred eighty five pounds. He hails from Oakland, California and is a member of the famed Juggalo movement as well as a founding member of the Dark Carnival. He is currently the reigning and defending Evolution champion; please join with me in welcoming the Clown Prince....Josh Drakmennnnnnnnn!!"

The boos change to mostly cheers now.

Ernie" The champion has a decided size advantage and experience level as well as being eight years younger then Villain. As for Villain his only hope in his match is to turn it into a brawl earlier and hope that he can outlast Josh in a fight because if Villain sticks to his limited wrestling abilities this match is going to be over quickly"

Lily exits the ring and the bell rings.

This match is pretty much a rerun of last week's match...Villain has the upper hand earlier using those brawling techniques to get him into a position to try to capitalize for a pinfall on the champion but Josh is able to use his considerable more wrestling skills to take control of the match and dominate Villain for several minutes until he has Villain down and practically out on his feet.

Ernie" Listen to this crowd getting behind the champion, Josh Drakmen has become somewhat of a cult hero here in Chicago because he don't look like he should be in a wrestling ring let alone be a champion. Josh Drakmen is odd but he is also an everyday person and I think that is what makes the crowds like him so much"

Josh takes Villain down to the mat with a diving shoulder block; he goes for the pinfall attempt

One...Two...Thre

Villain gets his shoulder up at the last second to the surprise of everyone

Ernie" I can't believe Villain kicked out, he is getting beaten like a red headed stepchild and yet still he refuses to quit."

Josh pulls Villain back to his feet whipping him into the ropes and looking for the a side salto slam only to have Villain suddenly go airborne and drive his knee into Josh's chest knocking the champion off his feet for the first time since the early minutes of the match.

Ernie" Villain is back in control...Oh my god my announcing cohort could be the Evolution Champion"

Villain pulls Josh up to his feet looking for the DDT, only to have Josh drive him into the corner burying his shoulder in his gut. Josh pulls Villain from the corner and calls for a little Ringmaster time (Choke slam)

Ernie" This one is over with I think"

Josh lifts Villain into the air when Martie comes sprinting from the back towards the ring.

Ernie" Not him again, the gay icon is trying to interject himself in another match"

Josh tosses Villain aside meeting Martie as he leaps up on the apron and blasts him with a left/right combination that sends the gay icon crashing back to the floor to the delight of the fans

Ernie" Josh was waiting for him this time....The Juggalo wasn't about to get caught a second time"

Martie staggers to his feet trying to get back up on the ring apron as Josh tries to go out after him....The ref gets into the middle of this ordering Martie back to the floor Josh turns around as Villain comes to his feet having went into the pocket of his jeans and pulling out a pair of brass knuckles

Ernie" Villain has something in his hand...I don't think Josh sees it"

Villain swings at Josh with the knucks, but the champion ducks allowing for Villain to spin completely around thanks to the momentum. Josh takes Villain up with a belly to back suplex and Villain uses this chance to fire off a shot with the knucks right to the top of the champion's head dropping Drakmen in his tracks and allowing Villain to land on him.

Ernie" Damn it...Villain just hit him with those brass knuckles..."

The ref turns and goes for the count

Ernie" Noooo, not another robbery here tonight"

One...Two....Three...

The crowd falls into utter stunned silence.

Ernie" I can't believe it...This just didn't happen"

Lily" Here is your winner and NEWWWWWWWWWWWW Evolution Champion....The Ruthless Villain!!!!"

Ernie" Oh my god we got an announcer as champion"

The ref hands Villain the title and he holds it above his head with tears running down his face living the dream that so many small boys have each and every night. Martie comes rolling into the ring right then and shatters Villain's I'm going to Disney World moment by jerking the title away from Villain and holding it up himself...

Ernie" What the hell does Martie think he is doing?"

Villain stares at Martie all confused for a second before jerking the title back from him and holding it...Martie grabs it back and we have a tug-o-war in the middle of the ring for the Evolution title.

Ernie" Villain just won the title but I think Martie is saying the title should be his because Villain wouldn't have won without him, but obviously Villain don't see it that way"

Real American plays over the sound system out onto the stage walks Tyler Russell all smiles and happy.

Ernie" Here comes the prick with power again, he is smiling so I guess him and BreAnna must have made up"

Tyler pulls a mic from the inside pocket of his suit wincing slightly as he moves...

Tyler" Cut the music"

Ernie" Looks like Russell is still suffering the effects of a Sera/Faith asskicking"

Tyler" Before I have the GWE title ripped in two and have to fire both of you and have my misfits disembowel you both...There is a real simple way to settle this, Josh Drakmen has pretty much decided that he wants to be on Hangover I believe and that leaves me with out a rematch contender...So Josh while I will allow you into next week's gauntlet match, I think it foolish to give you a match for a title you don't even want. So how about we do this, next week I will have a contract and you two will sign it so that at Devil's Night it'll be Ruthless Villain defending his title against Martie..."

Both men freeze with their title tugging and start glaring at each other.

Ernie" Villain and Martie for the title at Devil's Night...This could be very short title reign for Villain"

Tyler" Now with that settled it is time to cover the final list for next week's Gauntlet match....We will have Ashley Caswell, Karime Atora, Phoenix Winterborn, Lylah McQueen, Kimberly Caine, Jessica Stryker"

Ernie" Who sold out her brother earlier tonight for that spot"

"Taylor Lynn, Jenny Bowen, Drew Stevenson, Korey Karnage, Faith Rivers, Seraphim, Lilli Baxter, Allen Creed, BreAnna Black"

Ernie "No surprise there, but wow what a listen of potential winners we are getting here"

"Josh Drakmen, Claudia Zacchera, Sayten, Big Tone and finally the person I just received a contract for after some long negotiations with Foxy Roxy about keeping a certain subject quiet and agreeing to giving her a talent to be named later...GYPSY!!!"

Ernie" Holy Shit Roxy has traded Gypsy to Chaos Theory...."

Tyler turns walking through the curtain...

Ernie" We are out of time folks, make sure you tune in next week for the big Gauntlet match plus Akmed taking on Jimmy Stryker in a Barbed Wire Bloodbath match as well as so much more...See you next week folks"

Show fades...


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From: MSN NicknameÑòváCåînËSent: 10/18/2008 12:33 AM

Taylor Lynn vs. Jenny Bowen

Winner:Taylor Lynn

Taylor continues to show off her writing talents that she has been hiding behind those profanity laden tangents for all of that time. Jenny is a good rper but she really just seemed to be pre-occupied with other things or gave up the match because there was very little from her and Taylor just ran away with the match. Taylor Lynn will be a character everyone will be mentioning going into next year because I wouldn't be surprised if she isn't carrying gold very soon. Jenny you need to get focused again and back on track, you have changed up the character so now it is time for you to do something with it...I know you got potential to be a winner so go with it and be a winner.

creativity: Jenny just kind of phoned it in if you ask me and Taylor is always an entertaining character especially moreso now that you seeing more of the writing ability and not just a long line of profanity.
RP flow:Jenny only did the one but I do think Taylor's rps flowed together nicely there wasn't no long unexplained time spots like suddenly you go from China to Chicago in the span of one rp..
appearance: I had no problem reading either's rps and that is always a bonus for me when I don't have to squint to read.
attention to details: I think both always do a nice job of this, not overly detailed where they describe walking up the stairs for ten paragraphs but just the right amount to me.
countering: Jenny did nothing else so Tay was left to counter and did a good job of it.

consideration for deadlines. Taylor was late with that last rp but I don't think it really played a lot of bearing on the outcome of the match because it felt as if Jenny had just lost interest and there was no heated back and forth where a deadline would have a lot of bearing.

use of SLs: This was a storyline created on GWE and it played out pretty nicely until the ending which was a little bit of a let down but it was still a nice story I think.

 

Drew vs Karnage

creativity: I enjoyed reading both threads...would have really liked to have seen more from both based on their rich history. Due to the minimal effort by these legends, what they did post was semi-creative. Karnage raised the brow when he hit below the belt with the whole validity of Drew's reign.

RP flow: Both threads flowed nicely.

appearance: Nice simple layouts. Drew's layout is one that deceives. If you were take his RP and post it in a normal layout, he's have like 5 lines. I think those HTML layouts should be outlawed from the fed.

consideration for deadlines: They posted their first RP in time. Posting within 15 minutes of the deadline is not giving your opponent time to RP/counter.

Countering: Karnage was able to counter Drew's first RP very well and even threw in a little extra.

use of SLs: I like how they both played off the Legend thing. Nice work.

I would like to award Drew the win but with Karnage's first RP, not even considering his second, he did the job in beating Drew only by an hair. Had Drew given the match more effort than his 8 paragraphs of dialogue, he might have had this in the bag. He did a good job, like I said earlier, I enjoyed the read. I believe had Keith posted another RP, he might have gotten the win. This win goes to Karnage.

 

Kim vs Jessica

creativity: I'm a Kim fan and even though she only had one RP, I liked the thought process she used. Jessica's RP was also an interesting read...I do think she needs to step out of Jimmy's shadow and stand on her own...but I guess the same can be said of Kim but she doesn't use her family that often...only mentions them.

RP flow: Kim's one RP ran smoothly, Jessica did as well.

appearance: Nice simple layouts. I do have to ask...Jessica...what's up with the colors?

consideration for deadlines: Posted with time.

Countering: They worked well together, kim and jess. Kim countered Jessica's two but Jessica was able to put out more fire power in the third...not a lot but enough.

use of SLs: Kim used her SL in her set-up...Jimmy is using outside SL which is a nice twist, would like to see more elaboration on that.

I'm giving Jessica the win because she was able to come back at Kim....although Kim was right on and had she continued would have buried Jessica.

 

Lylah vs. Karime

creativity: Hmmm....both characters�?r/ps had a creative edge to it. Karime’s character is very dark and evil, which I love, while Lylah’s character has tons of attitude. Her ‘fuck you�?attitude is rather intriguing...lol.

RP flow: Lylah’s one r/p was very good, and Karime’s two r/ps flowed nicely together. She seemed impervious to what Lylah had to say in her promo....very nice indeed. What I would say though, Karime, is that try to add more length to your r/ps. Your ideas are very nice but your posts need a little more depth. When a judge reads r/ps, he/she likes to see more than just a few lines. Your r/ping is getting better though

Appearance. I like both Karime’s layouts... they both illustrated her dark, witchy persona. Lylah’s were....okay

attention to details: Um yeah....

countering: . Karime’s countering of Lylah would be okay, but her r/ps were a little short for my liking. Lylah countered Karime very nicely, dismissing Karime’s spooky, eerie persona

consideration for deadlines. Good

use of SLs: Lylah used the fact that her drop in status drove her to the bottle

Overall, this match is very close. I feel that Karime would have had this if she added a little more length wise, but I’m sure she will get better at this as she continues to r/p. This was a very frustrating match to judge. It’s bad enough that I had to be NICE for once, while judging. I think I’m gonna puke. o.o

Winner: Lylah McQueen


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