creativity: I would have to give this one to WT, her rps were about as creative as you can expect from a two post thread, she was doing the classroom thing and the fans watching her victory deal while Jimmy was just kind of standing there. I never can understand with Jimmy's rps if those little hitters in between talking are suppose to be like his personal thoughts or like narrations sometimes I think it is his thoughts and other times it seems like it is narration. I was really hoping Jimmy was going to continue with what he had started NC and do something about the old legend getting fed up with the way the new breed is working and not even sure he wants to be in the ring anymore. That stuff he was doing was really interesting to me but he went back to that I'm a monster and you can't beat me stuff and I just really have a hard time buying into that stuff anymore. He needed to keep with his NC ideas because I really feel like he has something more with that.

RP flow: They both seemed to have nice flow, there was no jumping around or confusion between the rps they stuck pretty well to a timeline.

appearance: I didn't have a problem reading either's rps, but I would really suggest to Jimmy that he might think about a new layout. I know those slimline layouts are the big thing these days but personally I dislike them. I think they make the writing look bunched and don't really look right to me, it isn't a real big thing to me when voting so it isn't like I'm taking points away in my head but it is a suggestion to anyone that uses those slims...Don't.
attention to details: Again i gotta go with WT...She painted a nice picture and she set the scene, it kind of boggled my mind that Jimmy wasn't doing more of this because I have seen him do some really good rps in the past where he sets up a nice scene and it flows with his talking really well. I don't know if it was time constraints or he just wasn't into the match but I really didn't feel like he went into much detail with his work beyond the talking
countering: Nothing really impressive to me here WT went with the old man angle something that has been used over and over against Jimmy and Jimmy went with the stupid redneck stuff that has been used against WT. I would have liked to have seen more talking from Jimmy about his past accomplishments and how he is ready to be the champion and WT just couldn't handle that kind of pressure, talk about how it feels to have a target on your chest twenty four seven and how it changes who you are as a person. He should have went to something he knows about that she doesn't and that is being the champion. I think WT would have been better served to talk about Jimmy's recent personal problems and not wanting to show up for matches anymore, to question his heart and if he really had the drive to do it anymore. She should have talked more about him as the person and how his body has to be hurting after all of these years of abuse and how even his sister is out to step beyond him to be the next Legendary Strkyer...They went for the obvious routes and I think I would give this to Jimmy simply because his stuff about the Trailer park was pretty funny.

consideration for deadlines: I am deducting some points from my overall tally against WT because I do feel she was pretty close to that deadline and while I don't really think she was trying to sneak in a last word it doesn't really look good to have postings like that. I would like to see a rule that you can't post in say the last ten minutes before deadline unless you can somehow show you have been working on the posting for at least a couple hours before the deadline. Most rps don't take that kind of time anymore so I wouldn't think it would be to much of an issue personally.

use of SLs: Didn't really see either using Storylines, not really sure if WT even has one beyond her stuff wtih BreAnna Black and I was really surprised that Jimmy didn't incorporate more of his issues with his sister or his issues with even returning to the ring.