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From: MSN NicknameÑòváCåînË  (Original Message)Sent: 10/25/2008 3:33 AM
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Venue: BUD Arena - Chicago, IL
Date:  October 23rd, 2008
Deadline: 10:00 PM CST-USA
Theme: Black Sheep by Saliva
 
 
  • The 24 hour rule is null and void only for Thursdays
  • You have to win 3  matches in order to either advance to Mondays or stay in GWE and win a title shot. If you choose to go to Mondays, you start over from the beginning. If you lose 3 consecutive matches on Mondays, you go back to Thursdays and start from the begining. If you choose to stay on Thursdays for the title shot whether you win or lose the title match you have a choice of staying or going to Mondays,but only after winning 3 matches.
  • If you are gone from GWE for one month you must start over and your record is wiped clean.
  • If you no show to two matches, you are released from the company.
  • GWE now has one title the Evolution Championship(Current Champ: Josh Drakmen)
  • If you beat NPC's they count as half a point.
  • If you are in a tag match and you win, it also counts as a point
  • If you lose a tag match, it does count towards your 3 match victories just as winning the match does so make sure to not leave your partner hanging
  • Storylined matches will be discussed with the GM of Chaos Theory and in the case of needing a count out or a no contest match to further your Storyline you both will recieve a half a match point.
  • There is no longer Disqualifications in GWE...We are the Empire of Extreme so we don't need to be taking the easy way out.  However constant  run-ins and attacks without some direction will be dealt with by the GM. 

This Week On Chaos Theory:
Tonight Chaos Theory gets is chance to shine on a National Stage.  We have the big 20 person Gauntlet match, Jimmy Stryker in a Barbed Wire Bloodbath against Akmed, Fall out from the major Gypsy demotion to GWE and of course Hangover talent is in the house.

Main Event

Twenty Person Gauntlet match
Stips: Two people start and every two minutes another person enters. Over the top eliminates with the last person left winning it all.
Backstory:GWE's way of showcasing the talent of Chaos Theory.  The winner will become the fifth and final person inside the CoH match at Devil's Night with a chance to walk out with either the Heavyweight or Budvision strap around their waist.

- Match 4 -
Jimmy Stryker vs. Akmed
Stips: Barbed Wire Bloodbath
Backstory: Jessica Stryker surprised everyone especially her brother when she agreed to getting this match made for her shot into the Gauntlet match. With a ring designed for carving up your opponent filled with everything possible to be found wrapped in razor wire...Someone better stock up on bandages.

 
- Match 3 -
Dante Cross vs. Zarek Lyle
Special Ref: DSL
Stips: Non-Title Pay Per View Teaser
Backstory: Tyler Russell was livid when he heard Dante was coming to Chicago for this show, but by order of the Queen Bytch this match was made. Apparently Foxy Roxy isn't to happy with her Heavyweight Champion at the moment and no one is ever happy with Dante.  Will we see a peek of what is coming inside the CoH match or will Roxy's attempt to punish fail miserably
 
- Match 2 -
Faith Rivers vs. Kit Black
Stips: Softening up the River with a Black Barricade
Backstory: Kit Black could leave Devil's Night as the Franchise champion which really wouldn't be all that good for Tyler's attempt to bring more title matches to CT, but he also don't want Faith at a hundred percent going into the Gauntlet match to prevent her from getting her hands on that brass ring and really screwing over Russell's dastardly plans.  One of two cross talent matches on the card who will reign supreme?
 
- Match 1-
White Trash vs. Vanessa and Claudia Zacherra
Stips: Two on One get out of Chicago handicap match
Backstory: One might think this is a little message to White Trash.  Russell is obviously a very jealous man and with White Trash being so close to BreAnna he probably isn't to have to have the Trashy one in town.  Claudia annoys Tyler and Vanessa has yet to show her face, tonight these two girls could serve him well and send a message to WT...Can this be Claudia's first win every or is White Trash going to take a win and Tyler's candy away all in the same night?
 
- Opening-
The Contract signing for the Evolution title match at Devil's Night
Backstory: Martie has helped Villain get two victories over the now former champion Josh Drakmen.  However it would seem now that Villain isn't ready to just hand over the title to Martie like that new rubber pecker Martie asked Santa for.  This isn't the season to be giving, unless it is a beating and tonight we sign the contract to make that fight all legal like.
 

 



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We go directly to the live feed and we are greeted with a shot from the roof of the Historic BUD arena where Tyler Russell is standing dressed in a Tuxedo next to him is his head of security Big Tone and several of the Misfits security force.

Tyler" Tonight is a record setting night in the brief history of GWE being apart of the Chicago wrestling landscape and it is thanks to me that this moment is happening. When Syck brought GWE to Chicago it was a dying horse on its last leg ready for the dog food factory. Syck went out looking for a man to guide the rebuilding of GWE and Chaos Theory into a viable wrestling show and he found Jake Frost" Tyler rolls his eyes shaking his head" Frost is an extreme icon and can take plenty of abuse to make the fans cheer happily but he lacked the vision, the know how, the fortitude to make GWE anything but a place talent wanted away from as fast as they could. Now under my rule, my power this company has seen new life, it has seen the arrival of such talented greats as Taylor Lynn, Korey Karnage, BreAnna Black and even briefly Drew Stevenson before he ran away. It has seen the arrival of the next generation with people like Jessica Stryker, Faith Rivers, Allen Creed and so many more. This has become a place of rebirth for the careers of people like Akmed, a launching pad for people like Josh Drakmen. It has been my blood injected into the dying veins of this company that has made this night possible. One of the Chaos Theory talent will win tonight's Gauntlet match and they will go on to taste their dreams in the main event of Devil's Night...I have made the possible for them and I'm confident that soon the loyalty I have shown this show will be repaid as more and more of my talent elect to stay behind and make this nationally televised show not just a one time thing but the landmark of a new day for this federation. So much can be said about my greatness and my ability to turn a rag tag company into a viable product but I invite all of you to watch tonight's show whether you are a long time viewer or a first time convert I want you all to pay attention to how I run a show and most of all enjoy the Chaos"

The opening Montage rolls to the C.T. theme of Black Sheep by Saliva and we see highlights of last week's exciting show from the opening match to Taylor Lynn spanking Jenny Bowen, to Tyler Russell pinning Faith Rivers and finally Ruthless Villain becoming the Evolution Champion.

Ernie" Welcome Ladies and Gentlemen to a very special episode of Chaos Theory, I'm Ernie Schivone and for the next two hours plus I will be calling the action from here at ringside for you. We have a heck of a show on tap tonight with the Main Event being the one to set us apart...A twenty person gauntlet match to decide the final entrant into the Chamber of Horrors Elmination match at the Devil's Night pay per view. Tonight someone could go from obscurity to main eventing the pay per view that started it all for BUD back in Two Thousand and One. Not only do we have that exciting main event but we also have several Hangover stars in action here tonight including The Domain Heavyweight Champion Zarek Lyle,plus we have the brutal Barbed Wire Bloodbath match between the Legendary Icon Jimmy Stryker and the Samoan Slaughterhouse Akmed...This show is going to be non-stop folks so get ready to take a ride on the Chaos Train...We will be right back with the contract signing for next week's Evolution title match...I still can't believe Villain is the champion. That just goes to show you how wild this show can actually be"

 


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Ernie"Welcome back folks to this special edition of Chaos Theory, we have an exciting show ahead of us but first it is time to conduct a little business. When Ruthless Villain first attacked former Evolution Champion Josh Drakmen everyone thought he had went insane but now he is the Evolution Champion and while the case can be made that Martie helped him out quite a bit Villain is the one holding the title, but for how long? Lets go up to the ring and the often forgotten Leilonie Kayleigh for the special contract signing between Champion and Challenger."

The ring is set up with the table and two chairs across from each other with another chair at the head of the table with a clipboard laying in front of this position on the table.

Leilonie" Thank you ladies and gentlemen for turning out for this prestigious moment in GWE history. Next week the Evolution title will be on the line at Devil's Night and we are here to sign the contract to make that match happen...Please welcome to the ring first the challenger...He is known the world over as the Gay Icon, this is Martieeee"

The BUDvision flickers to historic comic book superheroes and stops at one. The Gay Icon. The lights in the arena turn green and "Superstar" by Lupe Fiasco hits the speakers. Out walks Martie with green leather tights on and runs his way towards the ring. He slides in and jumps on the top turnbuckle and does a backflip and lands on his feet getting a mixed reaction from the fans with more leaning towards boos then cheers.

Ernie" He looks funny and he likes boys, but you can't take away from this man's atheletic ability inside the ring. I always thought homosexuals had good taste in fashion...Green Leather Tights?...So not stylin' and profilin' "

Martie walks around standing on the side of the table so that he facing the ramp and watches intently

Leilonie" At this time please welcome his opponent at Devil's Night, he is the current reigning and defending Evolution Champion....This is Ruthless Villainnnn"

Asshole" by Denis Leary is heard on the speakers and out walks Ruthless Villain towards the ring with the Evolution title draped over his shoulder. He smirks all cocky and confident at the fans only inciting them to boo him louder.

Ernie" This man has changed drastically since the days he sat beside me calling the action, I don't even know who Ari is anymore,but I can tell you that he better be learning to wrestler if he wants to keep that title for any period of time longer then a couple weeks."

Villain steps through the ropes into the ring and walks to the table going practically face to face with Martie as he lays the Evolution title long ways down the middle of the table in sort of a taunting gesture to Martie.

Leilonie" Gentlemen if you will please have a seat we can get this signing underway"

Villain's music fades as both men slowly take a seat their eyes never wavering from each other. Leilonie pushes the contract to Martie first who doesn't even bother to read it just flips it open to the backstage and signs his name before jerking the mic away from Leilonie keeping his eyes locked on Villain

Martie" I hope you are enjoying your little title reign champ" The word champ dripping with sarcasm" but that reign will be over next week at Devil's Night. I put that title on you and now I'm going to take it away from you. By hook or by crook at Devil's Night I will be leaving the new Evolution champion"

Martie drops the mic on the table shoving the clipboard over at Villain.

Ernie" Serious words from the man that once traveled with a monkey. I think Martie is trying to show everyone that he isn't a joke and has every intention of becoming the new champion one way or another"

Villain flips slowly through the contract appearing to read every paragraph before reaching the back page and picking up the pen. Villain jots his name across the contract and picks up the mic in his other hand.

Villain" You know everyone said I was a deadman the first time I got into the ring with Clown Shoes, then they said I had no chance of winning the title the second time I got into the ring with him, but I proved them all wrong. Words don't mean a damn thing unless you got the balls to back them up, and while I know you are an expert on balls Martie, that don't mean you have what it takes to out fight me. See Martie make no mistake about it come Devil's Night you won't be coming the ring for a wrestling match, you will be coming for a fight. "

Villain slams the pen down onto the table actually sticking it right into the wood.

Villain" This is my title and its staying around my waist"

Martie" Not for long troll"

Villain" We will see Leprechaun"

Both men jump to their feet knocking the table over and sending Lei running for the floor...Villain has his belt and Martie has the chair he was sitting on and they are having themselves a good ole fashion staredown when the security hits the ring breaking it up before it can start to the disappointment of the fans who start to chant " LET THEM FIGHT!!!"

Ernie"Some heated words between Champion and Challenger going into the eve of Devil's Night. We will be right back with a little two on one handicap match...Hangover's Hillbilly Hottie White Trash in action next against the Zacchera family"

The show goes to the commercial with Villain and Martie still having a staredown and trying to get to each other as security pulls them apart.

 


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When the show comes back from commercial we are taken to the backstage area where a giant tumbler has been set up with the Misfits standing around guarding it as Tyler Russell spins it....Phoenix Winterborn steps into view and reaches into the tumbler taking out a number and looking at it and shrugs

Phoenix" Could always be worse"

He walks away just as Kim Caine steps into view she glares at Russell and the Misfits reaching into the tumbler and pulling out her number...

Kim" Gonna be a long night"

She steps away with Tyler checking out her ass as Faith Rivers walks in

Faith"Pay attention Weasel"

Tyler gives Faith that I hate you look as she reaches for the tumbler, he quickly cuts in front of her though reaching into the tumbler appearing to grab a number out only to palm the one he already had in mind for her and hands it to her.

Tyler" There you go Faith...I'm sure you will be happy with that selection"

Faith looks at the number and sighs before crumbling it up and tossing it at Tyler..

Faith" You can keep trying Pipsqueak but you aren't breaking my faith or my drive"

She walks away and we go back out to ringside

Ernie" The number drawing for tonight's match is underway and it looks like Russell is still up to no good when it comes to Faith Rivers...That man holds a helluva grudge"

Chris "The Lion" De Leon" Ladies and Gentlemen welcome to a very special edition of Chaos Theory being shown around the world tonight in the great history of its predecessor Totally Toasted Thursday."

Crowd cheers

Chris" Our first match of the evening is to be contested under two on one handicap rules..."

The lights in the arena go out and the song "Trailer Fabulous" by Rehab comes on the speakers. Out walks the redneck bitch known as White Trash with a cowboy hat on as she struts her way to the ring to the beat of the song and the Chicago crowd goes wild.

Ernie" A very unlikely hero is emerging in The Domain and it is a small redneck girl from the sweet potato pie and hush my mouth south. White Trash enters into the Chamber of Horrors match at Devil's Night with a chance to become Heavyweight Champion but first she must get through the Zacchera cousins."

Chris" Coming to the ring first from Birmingham, Alabama this is Whitttttttteeee Trashhhhhhh"

The crowd starts in with a chant of "BAMA, BAMA!!"

WT slides into the ring between the middle and top ropes getting the catcalls and wolf whistles from both the male and female fans. She struts around the middle of the ring winking at Chris De Leon before stepping towards a corner.

Chris" Her opponents are from...."

The big screen over the stage lights up with a camera view of the backstage hallway where Claudia and Vanessa Zacchera are shown beating the hell out of each other as security tries to break them up.

Ernie" Hmmm looks like Tyler should have checked some Bios before making this match, it would seem that his plan to put the Zaccheras into the ring to send a message to WT has failed as apparently the cousins don't get along so well."

WT stands in the corner smirking as the crowd cheers Claudia and Vanessa beating on each other up. Chris looks around and the ref shrugs her shoulders.

Chris" Due to the Zaccheras not being able to make it to the match here is your winner by default...Whit"

"Not so fast Lester.."

The big screen lights up yet again to put a face to the voice as Tyler Russell is seen sitting his office with Big Tone nearby.

Tyler" I don't give out free wins around here, this isn't Hangover...So just because the boss over there has a thing for girls now and likes the way you wiggle your ass inbred doesn't mean you get that kind of treatment on my show. I'm sending a little message to you tonight Miss Garbage...BreAnna Black is now MY PROPERTY!!!"

The veins bulge in Tyler's forehead" Since you have apparently refused my offer to come spend the evening in my Penthouse with myself and BreAnna...I must make sure you are spending your evening in the emergency room..."Tyler looks off camera" Get out there and kick her ass"

Out from the back comes sprinting the little seen Jakobie O'Connor obviously trying to impress the boss so he will get booked more on the show. Jakobie hits the ring and immediately goes after WT.

Ernie" Tyler Russell is such a vindictive human being ,but the rumors backstage are that very soon we will be having an announcement that could very well change the scope of wrestling in Chicago forever. "

WT was waiting on the very over zealous Jakobie and is able to quickly side step his charge going low with a drop toe hold that sends his head boucning off the second turnbuckle in the corner with a nasty thud.

Ernie" Ohhhh I think the Irish eyes just got crossed"

WT is waiting for Jakobie when he staggers to his feet and stumbles out of the corner..She leaps grabbing his head and puts him down face first into the mat with a little Trash'd(RKO/Diamond Cutter) action.

Ernie" Jakobie wont be kissing the Blarney Stone anytime soon after the way he just kissed that mat"

WT slowly rolls over the much bigger Jakobie and goes for the pinfall

One...Two....Three.....White Trash wins

Chris" Here is your winner...Whiteeee..."

Tyler"Shut up!!!"

Tyler is back on the big screen a fuming as WT looks his way and blows him a kiss in a very sarcastic manner. Tyler chuckles shaking his head side to side very slowly.

Tyler" Very cute, but since your match is over for tonight and I don't think you need to be hanging around here looking for BreAnna....See ya later"

Before WT knows what is happening out of the crowd comes Juggles, Wrath, Mongo and Scratch swarming the ring and grabbing a hold of White Trash...The crowd boos as their Redneck warrior is practically carried out of the ring kicking and screaming heading in the direction of the nearest exit.

Tyler grins returning the little blowing kiss to WT" This is my world and my woman Ruby...You should embrace my power, not fight it"

Ernie" What a despicable piece of crap our General Manager is...We will be right back with Faith Rivers and Kit Black in action"

Commercial

 


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After the White Trash/Jakobie match we go to a camera shot backstage of Faith Rivers standing in front of door with the name placard on it reading Seraphim and knocking..

Faith" Noella can you open up please? I really think we need to talk about what happened last week"

More knocking

Faith" Please Noel...It was an accident what happened and I really want to apologize"

The door opens up slowly and Faith smiles feeling a sense of relief that at least she is going to get to talk to her friend but that feeling of relief turns to dread when she sees who is standing the door..Tyler Russell looks back at Faith grinning ear to ear like the cat in the canary cage.

Tyler" Hi again Faith, I'm so sorry but Sera really don't want to talk to you right now. She said to tell you that what you did was just horrible and she don't know if she can ever forgive you for that. "

Faith tries to step inside

Faith" Where is she? What have you done with her?"

Tyler keeps the grin a going

Tyler" She is just fine and says that you should really leave her alone now"

Tyler slams the door before Faith can get inside making sure to flip the lock Faith knocks several more times before taking off down the hallway looking all dejected. Inside the dressing room Seraphim steps from the private bathroom having just grabbed a shower to wash off the road wear of a long journey back to Chicago from one of her many trips around the country communing with the street people. She pulls the towel wrapped around her perfectly sculpted body a little tighter looking at Tyler.

Sera"What the hell are you doing in here?"

Tyler eyes Sera up and down wish he had some super powers to make that towel fall but when his jedi move things with your mind thingy fails he sighs and shrugs plastering that fake smile back on his face.

Tyler" I'm so sorry Sera, I just came by to check on you and the door was unlocked." At least it was after he used his pass key" I really think we need to talk "

Sera" I got nothing to say to you, and don't even start about last week. I know what happened was a mistake and as soon as Faith gets here we will talk it out"

Tyler looks all somber and concerned now

Tyler" Faith has been here for hours Sera"

Sera stammers" What?"

Tyler"Yeah, she was at the building before I got here. I guess she was bragging to a lot of people that you shouldn't have gotten in the way but that she was still on her way to Hangover after the pay per view and that sometimes you got to break a few eggs to make an omelet"

Sera slumps down onto the sofa looking a little hurt and very shocked...Tyler slinks his way over to her and sits down beside her

Tyler" I know it hurts when a friend betrays you,but I still got a lot of faith in your talents Sera and I think it is time you open your eyes to the truth around here and start listening to some reasoning"

Tyler rests his hand on Sera's knee and she don't flinch or punch him stupid. She looks down at his hand and sighs..

Sera" Maybe you're right"

Tyler grins reaching into his pocket and taking out a piece of paper.

Tyler" Here, I brought you your number for tonight's main event...I think you will see that if you are friends with me , good things happen for you"

Fade

Ernie" That dirty, underhanded prick. Faith was just there trying to apologize and now Russell is getting Sera to believe his lies...I swear the man could sell refrigerators to Eskimos....We will be right back with Faith in action against Hangover's very own Kit Black...Stay turned folks"


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Faith vs. Kit Black

Ernie" Welcome back folks to a very exciting night on Chaos Theory, we are live in the BUD arena as always but tonight is extra special because we're being nationally televised for the first time in the brief history of Chaos Theory in Chicago,and as much as I hate to admit it a lot of the reason we are national tonight is because of the new General Manager Tyler Russell ,but even more credit goes to the lovely lady sitting in VIP suite above us right now"

Chris De Leon steps to the center of the ring

Chris" Before we begin our next match ladies and gentlemen I would like to direct your attention to the VIP suite above us on the left here and the very special guest we have in attendance tonight. She is often known as the mother of Chicago based wrestling and a legendary woman in a predominantly male business, she took a fledgling company over back in two thousand and one and made it into the national powerhouse it is today...Starting out as Burnout's Ultimate Domain and quickly transistioning into Bytches Ultimate Domain before finally becoming simply The Domain, she is the CEO and Owner of The Domain and share holder in the parent company of GWE...Underwood United...Please give a warm welcome to Foxy Roxy!!!"

The spotlights shift from the ring up to the suite where Roxy is shown seated with her daughter Rayne and young son AJ along with several cable network VIP's and security. The crowd gives a huge standing ovation for Roxy as she stands and waves to the crowd.

Ernie" A real class act in the sport...Her and her former husband Syck are the ones that gave me my start in this business and I will be forever thankful"

After several minutes of applause the crowd finally settles back down.

Chris" Our next match of the evening is scheduled for one fall with a ten minute time limit."

The lights go out as "Faith" by Limp Bizkit begins to come out of the PA System. Faith Rivers walks out and stands at the top of the entrance ramp

Chris" Coming to the ring first, she is from Miami, Florida and weighs in at a one hundred and twenty five pounds this is Faithhhhhhhhhh Rivers"

As the chorus of the song hits, 'You Gotta Have Faith' she jumps up a little and as her feet come down on the ramp again, fireworks go off behind Faith, just before she runs down the ramp and slides into the ring. As she gets to her feet, Faith runs into the corner and gets up on the second turnbuckle. She taunts the fans a bit before jumping down. Faith begins to loosen up her arms before leaning back against the ropes. As her music fades, Faith looks up towards the entrance ramp and waits on her opponent.

Ernie" Faith looks a little frazzled tonight and I hate to say it but I think it is because Tyler Russell is getting in her head with all his mind games. She is a lovely young woman and talented beyond belief inside that ring but Russell is a weasel and worst of all he is a weasel with power. Faith needs to worry less about Seraphim and that situation and more about her opponent here tonight and the monster Big Tone waiting for her at Devil's Night."

Say Goodbye" by I Killed the Prom Queen begins to play over the sound system

Chris"Her opponent is from Apple Valley, California and weighs in at one hundred and twenty pounds she is Kitttttttttttt Blackkkkkkkkk"

Ernie" Kit Black is on the eve on perhaps her biggest match to date in The Domain, she goes into Devil's Night when a chance to win the currently vacated Franchise Title but first she must get by Faith here tonight and then set her sights on Gypsy and that title. "

No one appears through the curtain at the top of the ramp and the fans standing to cheer for Kit look around confused.

Chris" This is Kittttttttttttttt Blackkkkkkkkkk"

Still no sign of Kit as her music fades and starts up again.

Ernie" Seems someone needs to go tell Kit it is time to go to work"

The big screen comes to life with Zachary Chase , referees and paramedics running down the back hallway.

Zach" We have had some kind of altercation back here folks, I'm trying to get word on what just happened "

The group turns to corner to show Kit Black laying outside her locker room door unconcious and the words Mafia: The real Franchise of The Domain spray painted on the wall above her. The paramedics rush in to check on Kit as Zach and the camera man fight to get in closer

Zach" Who did this? Does anyone know who did this?"

Back out in the ring Faith looks on speaking to the ref and Chris.

Ernie" Someone has laid out Kit Black before her match here tonight folks and it appears the Mafia is sending her a message....We will try to get word on Kit's condition as soon as we can..We will be right back"

The show goes to commercial with Chris announcing that the Faith Rivers/Kit Black match has been ruled a no contest.

 


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When the show comes back we are greeted with a camera view back at the tumbler with Mongo now turning the tumbler I guess because Tyler is still away talking to Sera. Into view steps Jessica Stryker who pulls her number and smiles.

Jessica" Tonight another Stryker becomes Legendary"

Away she walks into view steps Lylah McQueen guzzling from a flask and looking all glassy eyed...She pulls her number and belches.

Lylah" I think I'm going to be sick"

Lylah runs off with her hand over her mouth and Mongo giggles

Mongo" Girls with puke breath like me more...Heheh...Hehehe"

He runs off and into view comes the one and only Gypsy...She reaches into the tumbler taking out a number and dropping it back in, she takes another and then another and then another tossing them all back before finally finding one she likes...She looks at the camera and blows a kiss

Gypsy"After I win that main event at Devil's Night I'm coming home Rox and your ass is had"

Gypsy storms off and we go back to ringside.

Ernie" I think Gypsy just got her own luck of the draw thanks to that goon Mongo wandering off...We can inform you that Kit Black seems to be ok but was taken to an area hospital for further evaluation....It is now time for the Tag Team Champions to step into action against the Budvision champion...I like to call this match a Title-tacular, and we will be right back with the action."

 


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Dante Cross vs. Zarek and Gypsy with DSL as special ref.

 

When the show returns we aren't greeted with Ernie Schivone but instead Ronnie Tricks and Kevin Pierce.

Kevin" Welcome back to Chaos Theory and seeing as how this is a Hangover match..Foxy Roxy only thought it appropiate that the A-Team of announcing excellence call this match.

Ronnie" We kicked Chevorlet to the curb from some real talent"

Kevin" Schivone"

Ronnie" God Bless You"

Kevin" I wasn't sneezing I was....Nevermind lets go up to this exciting match with four of the five combatants for the Chambers of Horrors match in the ring"

As the match goes on, Gypsy and Zarek are dominating over Dante. They begin to double team him and the ref isn't doing anything about it. Gypsy is really showing off during her first match on Chaos Theory, showing off for the fans.

Kevin: I can't believe Roxy pulled this shit! Putting up Dante against Gypsy and Zarek knowing he didn't have a partner!! That's low even for her.


Ronnie: Are you sure about that? There's a rumor about her...going 'low'.

Gypsy is about to land her trademark move when a masked wrestler comes running down the ramp unknown to Zarek and Gypsy and slides into the ring knocking Gypsy's feet out from underneath her.

Kevin: Who in the hell is that??

Ronnie: We spoke to soon!! Dante DOES have a partner!!

Zarek jumps into the ring and tries to go to Gypsy's aid but is broad-sided by Dante who tackles him to the ground. Gypsy and the masked wrestler start going at it in the ring as Zarek and Dante fall out of the ring to take their fight outside. As Chaos Theory goes to a commercial we see Dante and Zarek going blow for blow outside and Gypsy holding her own against the surprise guest.

 


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We are back from commercial and the lovely BreAnna Black is seen walking into the arena dressed in a tight hip hugging jeans and a skin tight shirt showing off her ample breasts under a leather jacket...She has her gear bag slung over her shoulder and looks ready for tonight's big Gauntlet match....As she passes by the dumpsters behind the buildings a hand darts from the darkness grabbing her shoulder, as she jumps from the startling touch that hand turns into an arm wrapping around her shoulders and pulling her back into the darkness...A voice raspy and thick with the stench of stale cigarettes and booze speaks in a hushed tone right next to her ear.

"You are forgetting this..."

The hand slaps against her chest right over her heart

"To use this to get your own way"

The hand slips down grabbing her nether regions right above that honey pot.

"Your heart will guide you to a new day but selling yourself short will lead you to the wrong way. I know what you seek and I know what will find....It'll all be clear in certain time...Be who you are , not who they want you to be"

Bre jerks away spinning around ready to kick someone's ass...She hears the scuffling of feet and sees a shadowy figure running away from the building cackling like the Mad Hatter...

"Your eyes are blind to the truth ,but still they know where to find your proof"

Bre shakes her head cussing as she heads into the building ready to rip Tyler a new one for his poor security outside the building.

Fade.

 


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Barbed Wired Match.
Jimmy Stryker vs. Akmed

When the show returns from commercial the scene is set on the ring where crew guys are removing the ropes and adding in the strands of razor wire making sure to be very careful with stringing it so as not to cut themselves open. The ring is being filled with the instruments of torment each object wrapped in the same flesh peeling razor wire...There is a kendo stick, a baseball bat, several steel chairs, a table and various other weapons that looks like someone just cleaned out their tool shed to get.

Ernie" I am remaining silent folks as you watch the ring being prepared for the Barbed Wire Bloodbath, I advise every family at home with small children in the room to please remove them as this match isn't going to be for the faint at heart or those of a fragile mind. Let's go to the footage that shows what led up to this match"

The footage rolls of Jessica Stryker pulling off what some would an upset victory over Kimberly Caine only to be surprised by the Samoan Slaughterhouse Akmed , who hadn't been seen on television in several weeks since Tyler Russell put the challenge out to him that it was time be something more then a curtain jerking loser. We then go to the footage of Jessica Stryker making the surprise deal to get Jimmy Stryker put into this match against his own wishes to never be seen on GWE again. Finally we are taking to a split screen shot of the back where both men are seen leaving their dressing rooms with their hands heavily taped up and dressed in street fighting attire.

Ernie" It time for the blood to flow folks, get ready for the chaos"

Chris De Leon is standing ringside away from the ring ready to brutalize someone, he pulls the mic to his lips and clears his throat.

Chris" Ladies and Gentlemen it is now time for the Barbed Wired Bloodbath match, the winner is decided by pinfall, submission or either man failing to answer a standing ten count. "

Paranoid by Dope begins to play and Akmed steps through the curtain at the top of the stage...He is dressed in a shirt dotted with red letters reading "Got Blood?" , jeans and the heavy wraps on the hands to allow for him to grip the wire plus he has painted his face with the traditional inscriptions of the samoan warrior getting ready to head into battle.

Chris" Coming the ring first, he is from the Isle of Samoa and a relative to the famed Samoan wrestler Afa, this is the Samoan Slaughterhouse Akmeddddddddddd"

The boos for Akmed are near deafening but he seems oblivious as his attention is locked on the ring.

Ernie" I understand the writing on Akmed's face is actually a prayer often recited by Samoan warriors before going into battle in belief if they died their souls would be saved from damnation with that prayer in place."

The ref inside the ring is covered up in layers of protective clothing and reaches down holding up the strand of wire to allow Akmed to slither into the ring under the bottom strand. Akmed gets up bouncing around on the balls of his feet waiting for his opponent to show.

Chris" His opponent is from Las Vegas, Nevada and is known as the Legendary Icon of this sport"

The lights go out, as the loud guitar sound hits. Right Now by Korn blares throught the arena. With every guitar riff, the spotlights seem to mimick the motion, as Jimmy is seen stepping out onto the ramp, in his patented ray bans, his bandana, and his normal wrestling gear replaced with street clothes and the same heavily wrapped hands as Akmed... He flaunts himself to the crowd, showing them his complete egotistical, yet very somber and humbleness.

Chris" This is Jimmyyyyyyyyyyyy Strykerrrrrrrrr!!!"

Jimmy just slides into the ring under the bottom rope the same as Akmed did with the ref's help and all hell breaks loose as Akmed picks up the barbed wire back and goes after Jimmy catching him across the shoulder blades and tearing into his flesh before Jimmy takes Akmed down with a double leg and both men start beating the bejesus out of each other.

Ernie" Rumor has it that Jimmy Strkyer is calling this his last match and if that is the case you can bet that he don't intend to go out with a defeat"

The match goes back and forth with both men being busted open and bleeding like stuck pigs.

Ernie" Losing this kind of blood will make a person very light headed and can lead to passing out real easily. Which is something you don't want to do with someone else swinging a chair at your head"

Akmed gets Jimmy down and slowly climbs up onto the strands of barbed wire standing on the ring post and the turnbuckle supports more then the actual wire. Akmed has a barbed wire chair in hand ready to brain Jimmy for it when he gets up.

Ernie" The big Samoan is ready to fly...Look out Jimmy"

Jimmy grabs something from the mat as he comes to his feet very slowly and Akmed leaps off the ropes looking to take out Jimmy for good when Jimmy swings from the fences with an iron also wrapped in the same razor wire...The iron connects with the chair with a tremendous thud sending it flying back into Akmed's face and dropping him like a ton of bricks.

Crowd" HOLY SHIT!!! HOLY SHIT!!!"

Jimmy his favoring his hand now perhaps having broke it hitting the chair like that, he falls over on top of Akmed going for the pinfall.

One...Two....Thre

Akmed kicks out and the crowd's chant goes back to booing.

Ernie" I can't believe it, Akmed actually kicked out"

Jimmy looks a little surprised but is quickly back on the attack slamming Akmed onto a trash can and then setting up the table also...yup you guessed it...wrapped in the wire...He rolls Akmed onto the table and then pulls over the ladder leaning it against the corner the big man climbs up to the top strand much in the same way Akmed did and grabs a hold of the ladder intending on riding it down onto Akmed and sandwiching him between a barbed wire ladder and barbed wire table.

Ernie" Good lord if Jimmy hits this Akmed isn't going to be doing anymore C-4 stunts for a very long time"

The crowd pops for Jimmy as he leaps riding the ladder down only to have Akmed roll out of the way at the last moment and Jimmy go crashing through the table landng on top of the ladder with neither man moving.

Crowd" THIS IS AWESOME!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!"

Akmed slowly moves just as Jimmy crawls from the rubble of the table and ladder...Jimmy is up onto his hands and knees when Akmed leaps to his feet and sends himself flying through the air landing on Jimmy's back with the senton splash using all of his weight to smashing Jimmy against the ladder again...Akmed slowly rolls Jimmy over going for the pinfall...

One...Two....Three.....Akmed wins

Ernie" I can't believe what I'm seeing Akmed has just beaten the Legendary Icon Jimmy Stryker...What a match we have just witnessed from both men"

Akmed is helped to his feet by the Ref, having to wipe the blood from his eyes to even realize what just happened. He looks all groggy eyed and is barely able to stand up on his own.

Ernie" Both of these men have lost a lot of blood and it seems to be having a huge effect on them."

The big screen lights up just then with the General Manager of Chaos Theory Tyler Russell sitting behind his desk

Tyler" Bravo Akmed...Bravo on a very hard fought victory against a man that I wanted to sign so dearly to this show before he announced he is quitting. I'm proud that Chaos Theory is standing strong here tonight in this match and to show my appreciation next week at Devil's Night I have made an executive decision...You have just earned your way into the Evolution title match Akmed...Villain versus Martie has just became a triple threat...Good luck"

The screen goes black

Ernie" Wow, what a big night in Akmed's career, not only has he just pulled off the upset but he could be leaving Devil's Night as the Evolution Champion"

Chris " Here is your winner....Akmedddddddd!!"

Akmed raises his hand in victory his theme music being drown out by the boos that quickly turn to cheers. Akmed turns looking kind of confused only to catch a boot to his gut and get taken sky high for the Supreme Killing(Batista Bomb)...Jimmy slams Akmed down viciously into the mat leaving the big Samoan unconcious to the delight of the fans

Ernie" I think Tyler's go to guy just got gone over..."

Right Now hits to a standing ovation as a very bloody and very battered Jimmy Styker leaves the ring and slowly makes his way towards the back.

Ernie" We are witnessing a very emotional moment here tonight, this is the end of an era folks"

Jimmy stops at the top of the stage turning to wave to the fans as everyone is now standing including Roxy and company in the sky box and Ernie at ringside...

Ernie" Enjoy that last ride Jimmy..."

Jimmy smiles walking through the curtain and we go to commercial.


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20 person Gauntlet Main Event

Ernie" It is time for the big main event of the evening a twenty person over the top rope Gauntlet match to decide who will be the fifth and final combatant in next week's Chamber of Horrors match. That show is already sold out folks but you can still be a part of Devil's Night eight live from the Charlotte's Bobcat Arena. Just contact your local cable or Satellite provider and tell them you want to be apart of Devil's Night. Devil's Night was the very first pay per view in BUD history and this year's show is shaping up to be quite the blockbuster as well. Lets take a look at the line up while the ring is turned back into a ring."

A camera shot shows the ring crew taking back down the wire to put up the ropes and changing the canvas on the ring to get rid of all the blood splattering...We go to a line up for Devil's Night with a little Legion of the Damned playing in the background

GWE's Faith Rivers taking on the seven foot monster Big Tone with her fate hanging in the balance...If she wins she not only gets an Evolution title match but also her freedom from Chaos Theory, if she loses she becomes an exclusive talent of GWE for the rest of her time in The Domain

The much anticipated Hardcore Heaven Cage Match between one time friends now bitter enemies Phoenix Winterborn and Ravyn Crow. Ravyn has been playing mind games with Phoenix for months now and it finally all comes to a head at Devil's Night...Will the Firebird fly free or is he about to be a victim of the vampire bite?

The Domain Bytches Title on the line championess BreAnna Black takes on former champion and her current lover White Trash in what shall be a match with a lot of consequences. Bre and WT haven't spoken openly about Bre now keeping company with GWE G.M. Tyler Russell. Will lust and lesbo lovin' beat out power and prestige? Are we about to see some HLA or just a good ole fashion fight?

GWE's Evolution title on the line as new and unlikely champion Ruthless Villain puts his strap on the line against the Gay Icon Martie and now the Samoan Slaughterhouse Akmed. Can Villain's luck continue to hold strong or is he about to be a transistional champ?

We will finally have a Franchise Champion, after the title being held up due to the controversial ending to last month's pay per view match we will finally have a new Franchise Champion crowned. Will it be the former champion Gypsy or the young lioness Kit Black? Someone is leaving Devil's Night with not only new gold but a new moniker....The New Franchise of The Domain.

Then the Grand daddy of them all..Single Elimination Cage Style match known as the Chamber of Horrors. With all weapons legal this match is sure to be a bloodbath from the opening bell. Five competitors, two titles and a chance to be the Heavyweight Champion hanging in the balance. Who will be taking home the Heavyweight title and who will leave with the second place, first loser prize of the Budvision belt? Can the Hardcore Canuck Dante Cross end his run back to the big belt with a victory, will the redneck hero White Trash come out of the chamber a winner and possible double champion? How about Da Sweet Lunatic, will her dreams of gold finally be achieved or will her lust for Dante blind her path to the title? Perhaps the silent champion Zarek Lyle will creep back out of the woodwork to retain his title or perhaps the winner of tonight's Gauntlet match will upset everyone's plans and go from second rate show to first rate title...???

We go back to the live shot of the ring now all cleaned up and Chris De Leon standing in the center of it.

Chris" Ladies and Gentlemen, it is now time for the main event of the evening and it is a twenty person Gauntlet match with the winner getting entrance into the Chamber of Horrors main event at Devil's Night. Those two combatants that pulled number one and number two will open for two minutes and every two minutes after that another person will enter the ring until all twenty have been into the ring. The only way to be eliminated is over the top rope with both feet touching the floor....Now here is number one"

Fuel by Metallica plays to the boos of the fans and out to the ring comes Korey Karnage.

Chris" Please welcome Korey Karnageeeeee"

Karnage gets into the ring and starts pacing back and forth looking very focused and ready for tonight's high stakes match.

Ernie" We knew about Karnage getting number one long in advance as he announced he had gone to Russell requesting the number earlier in the week"

Chris" At this time please welcome number two.."

Faith by Limp Bizkit plays and out to the ring comes Faith Rivers to the cheers of the fans.

Chris" Please welcome Faith Riverrrrrrrrrrrsss"

Ernie" I would bet a month's worth of paychecks that Tyler Russell had a lot to do with this number selection for Faith"

The bell rings and Karnage goes right after Faith trying to immediately throw her over the ropes but Faith is able to use some of those spider monkey skills and come right back in between the top and middle ropes driving a shoulder into Karnage's gut pushing him back from the ropes and hitting him with a running high knee shot that takes the legend down. Faith tries to pull Karnage to his feet perhaps looking to try to throw him out but Karnage buries a shot to Faith's gut that doubles her over and puts her right in spot for a little Evenflow DDT...Faith is able to shove Karnage away though and the fight continues.

Ernie" It is never easy to be the first or second person into a match like this and one would think they would be trying to conserve injury for later in the match but these two are going all out on each other."

The big screen has a clock counting down and when it reaches the final ten seconds the fans join in with the countdown.

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one..."

Buzzer sounds and Riot by 3 days grace plays and out comes Mad Mongo

Chris" Mad Mongoooooooo"

Ernie" I understand Mongo is a replacement for former Evolution Champion Josh Drakmen who no showed tonight's event and has subsequently been suspended by The Domain until further notice."

Mongo is giggling like a mental patient stalking towards the ring when someone jumps over the security railing behind him and bashes the rotund one in the back of the skull with a steel chair...The Extremist lets out his primal war cry and races towards the ring...

Ernie" Good lord he is out of his cage again"

The Extremist jumps up onto the ring apron turning to taunt the crowd and before springboarding into the ring...He turns and catches a clothesline from Karnage that sends him back out over the top rope and to the floor in what has to record elimination time.

Chris" The Extremist has been eliminated"

Ernie" Ahahaha now that was funny"

The Extremist bangs his hand on the ring apron and tries to climb back in but Mongo is there now waiting for him and the two fight off into the crowd with Karnage watching and laughing...His laughter is cut short though as Faith dumps him over the top ropes and Karnage has to scramble back under the bottom rope just inches from falling...

Ernie"Karnage's cocky confidence almost cost him his chance at the Heavyweight title"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Kiss me Deadly by Lita Ford plays

Chris" Claudia Zaccheraaaaaaaa!!"

Claudia comes sprinting from the back hitting the ring and immediately going after Karnage as a little girl unity forms quickly with Faith and Claudia working together to put Karnage down with a double clothesline before Faith quickly turns on Claudia catching her with a left and right combination and whipping her into the ropes trying to throw her over...Claudia is hanging onto the top rope for dear life when Karnage comes back to his feet attacking Faith again and in the process actually saving Claudia from elimination.

Ernie" Close call for Claudia there and her unlikely savior turns out to be Karnage"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Born to raise hell by Motorhead plays and the fans give off a mixed reaction

Chris" Kimberlyyyyyyy Caineeeeee"

Kim races down to the ring going right after Karnage who seems to be everyone's target at the moment, this allows Faith and Claudia to start fighting with each other...Kim sends Karnage into the turnbuckle following him in and eating a big boot for her trouble...Faith Irish whips Claudia only to have it reversed and Claudia catch Faith with a clothesline that rocks Faith and has Claudia trying to put her out over the top rope..

Ernie" As this ring starts to fill up things are going to become more dangerous in there and you are going to have to have eyes in the back of your head to keep from getting tossed out"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Riot by 3 days grace plays and out comes another of Russell's creepy misfits

Chris"This is Wrathhhhhhhhhh"

Wrath stalks to the ring and comes in over the top ropes...Claudia charges at him and is scooped up into the air military press style tossed over the top ropes like a rag doll.

Chris" Claudia Zacchera has been eliminated."

Wrath beats on his chest like King Kong taunting Claudia and finds himself out on the floor as well as Kim Caine comes up behind him and dumps him over the ropes...

Chris" Wrath has been eliminated"

Karnage hits Faith with the evenflow DDT out of nowhere and then comes after Kim trying to dump her out only to eat a back elbow for his trouble and the fight continues on..

Ernie" This is some fast pace action here with bodies flying everywhere"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Riot by 3 days grace plays and another of the Misfits appears

Chris" This is Jugglesssssss"

The creepy clown of the Russell Misfits slowly walks to the ring stopping to stare at the fans several times and to lick the shovel he is carrying with him.

Ernie"Ewww he is licking that shovel...What a weird creature this guy is"

Juggles rolls in under the bottom rope and Faith comes after him wanting to take anyone associated with Russell out of the match quickly...Faith charges and Juggles catches her with a sidewalk slam with his four hundred plus pounds crushing the much smaller Rivers...Juggles comes to his feet and shoulderblocks down Kim Caine before going toe to toe with Karnage.

Ernie" This man is just massive and I think he just broke Faith in half with that shot"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Ashley" I think she left " Caswell comes running out to some random music.

Chris" Ashleyyyyyyy Caswellll"

Ashley goes right after Karnage and Juggles who stop swinging on each other and look at the girl then at each other then at the girl before spinning around and both hitting Ashley so hard she flies over the ropes and ends up somewhere in row three of the crowd.

Chris" Ashley Caswell has been eliminated"

Ernie" A very short stay for Ashley in this match as well as The Domain. Some people just don't like to hang around I guess"

Karnage and Juggles go back to fighting with Kim and Faith going toe to toe again...

Ernie" I can't believe Karnage and Faith are still in this match coming in from number one and two, they have to be starting to feel the fatigue of this constant fight"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Black Sheep by Saliva plays

Chris" Coming to the ring Saytennnnnnn!!"

Ernie" The seven foot three powerhouse Sayten entering the mix, he was a replacement for Jenny Bowen who was the victim of a heinous crime last week following our show and is in ICU at a local hospital...I understand she is beginning to wake up but has yet to identify who was her attacker"

Sayten hits the ring taking down Kim , Faith , Karnage and Juggles with a series of big boots...Sayten puts his fist up into the air playing to the crowd and takes a low blow from Kim Caine for his trouble that doubles over the big man for Faith to bulldog down and Juggles to hit with a big splash...Karnage uses this opportunity to get behind Juggles and nail him in the back of the head knocking down the big clown and the fight continues onward.

Ernie" Sayten looked on the verge of cleaning house until Kim Caine rattled his twig and berries from that tree."

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Devour by Shinedown plays and the fans go into their booing.

Chris" The Genetic Freak.....Allennnnnnn Creed"

Creed strolls to the ring stopping to jaw jack with the fans before finally reaching the ring and the fight...Sayten is waiting looking to put him back on the floor with the big boot, but Creed sidesteps causing Sayten to crotch himself on the top rope and leave him open for a big time Creed style clothesline that sends Sayten tumbling to the floor.

Chris" Saytennnn has been eliminated"

Creed flexes his muscles ot the fans and Faith comes up behind him taking him down with a hangman's style leaping neckbreaker.....Juggles powerslams Karnage into the mat and is slowly getting up to his feet wheezing like an asthma patient on a treadmill when Kim hits him with a super kick right on the jaw and we go back to an all out beat you stupid brawl.

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

We made it by Busta Rhymes plays and the crowd goes nuts..

Chris" Phoenixxxxxxxxxx Winterbornnnnnnn"

Phoenix races to the ring and makes a beeline right for Allen Creed as these two have some history against each other...Phoenix takes Creed off his feet with a flying forearm and is dropping anyone in his sights...Faith ducks under a looping left hook from Karnage pushing him back into the turnbuckle with a shoulder to his gut...Kim gets taking down by a dropkick from Phoenix who races right at Juggles, the big man tosses Phoenix off like a fly on an elephant and tries to throw him over the ropes...Phoenix is holding on to the top ropes when Creed charges in looking to put Phoenix out...Phoenix slips out of the way and Juggles catches the force of Creed's shot and goes tumbling over the top rope with Phoenix slipping back into the ring between the middle and bottom ropes and shoving up onto Juggles with feet adding that extra momentum to put him out to the floor.

Chris" Juggles has been eliminated"


Ernie" The big boys aren't doing so well in this match right now as it seems to be a match for the quick speedy talent so far"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Psycho by Puddle of Mudd plays...

Chris"The Bytch Championess....BreAnnnnnnna Blackkkk"

Bre takes her time getting to the ring looking to be in no hurry to get into the middle of that fight. In the ring Phoenix and Creed are fighting , Kim and Faith are fighting and Karnage is slumped down in the corner looking like he is trying to catch his breath...Faith whips Kim and BreAnna sees her chance to be under handed...She leaps up onto the ring apron pulling down the top rope and watching Kim go tumbling out hitting the back of her head on the floor in the process...

Chris" Kimberly Caine has been eliminated"

Bre comes to her feet smirking and winking down at Kim, she turns to step into the ring and Faith hits her with a text book standing dropkick and that has Bre laying on the floor next to Kim.

Chris" BreAnnnnna Blackkkkk has been eliminated"

Bre leaps to her feet trying to get into the ring after Faith who mocks her...

Ernie" Bre is livid over getting taken out like that, you can bet that Russell isn't going to be happy at what just happened to his woman."

Bre almost gets into the ring before Kimberly pulls her back and the two start fighting towards the back with White Trash coming out of the crowd to blindside Kimberly...Leaving Bre and WT at the top of the stage staring at each other before both step through the curtain in an embrace that leaves the audience wishing for a backstage dressing room camera and probably has Russell rethinking his claim on BreAnna.

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Secrets don't make friends From First to last plays and males audience members instantly break out into a sweat..

Chris" Please welcome the Queen of Mean....Taylorrrrrrr Lynnnnnnnn"

Taylor plays to the crowd much like she always does before getting into the ring and heading right for Karnage who is pre-occupied fighting with Faith and don't see her coming and until Taylor leans back and brings her foot up punting Karnage right in the family jewels...The violent legend goes down like he has been shot grabbing his crotch and Taylor is putting the boots to him like he stole her favorite paddle...Faith starts for Lynn but gets blindsided by Creed who takes her down.

Ernie" Taylor obviously took exception to some of the words Karnage had for her this week and it trying to put her size seven right through his chest for it. "

Taylor starts directing Creed to hold up Karnage and she once again delivers a ball busting kick that will definitely leave Karnage in need of several ice packs. Phoenix comes flying in from the side hitting Creed as Taylor was about to land another kick and Faith spears Taylor to the mat leaving Karanage once again laying in the ring trying to find that second or fifth wind.

Ernie" Karnage and Faith are still going after being in the ring nearly thirty minutes so far, I know that don't seem like a lot but you got to consider this is a constant brawl"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

World is Darker by Artist plays

Chris" This is Karime Atoraaaaaa"

Karime comes into the ring heading for Taylor Lynn as her soul mate Phoenix is fighting with Creed and Faith is going around with Karnage yet again. Karnage ducks a shot from Faith pushing chest first into the turnbuckle...Karime takes Taylor down and the two go rolling across the mat beating on each other with Creed now having the upperhand on Winterborn and taking him over with a powerslam that rocks the ring.

Ernie" I will do my best to keep track of this action folks but it is getting to be a full house in there and everyone is fighting with everyone else"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

I'm so sick by Flyleaf plays

Chris" This is Lylahhhhhhhh McQueeennnnn

Lylah comes staggering out of the backstage area carrying her new favorite friend...her flask. She takes a big drink before staggering on into the ring and getting into the brawling...

Ernie" I'm not so sure Lylah is any shape to be in this ring right now,she looks like she made a stop at the bar before coming out here"

The lights suddenly go out in the arena leaving it in pitch black darkness except for a few lighters in the audience that begin to come on.

Ernie" What the hell is going on now?"

The lights come back on just in time to see Ravyn Crow in the ring throwing a very surprised Karime over the ropes to the floor and going out after her...He picks her up looking for the Hell's Fury(Last Ride) only he don't get that chance this time as Phoenix finally sees what is happening and sprints across the ring diving over the top ropes with a big time suicide plancha and taking out Ravyn...Crow scurries to his feet trying to get away but Phoenix is tired of the mind games and has his hands on Crow finally...Phoenix sends Crow flying into the barricade at ringside and takes him over it with a flying clothesline that has the fans going nuts...

Ernie" I think that proverbial straw that broke the Winterborn's back just happened and he is taking it to Ravyn Crow, but in the process has eliminated himself from the match as well as Karime who is getting some medical attention as we speak.."

Chris" Phoenix Winterborn and Karime Atora have been eliminated"

Allen Creed is standing at the ropes looking down at Karime and taunting her with a little pelvis action when Karnage comes up behind him and tries to dump him over the top...Creed is holding on and Karnage is shoving with all he has when Taylor comes up behind them both and tries to dump them both out...Creed falls hitting the floor but Karnage somehow manages to hang on with one hand with his left foot touching the floor and his right foot dangling...Taylor shows that killer instinct then biting Karnage's hand trying to break his grip and making him scream out in pain...Lylah knocks over Faith and for some reason in her drunken stupor hits Taylor allowing Karnage to once again save himself from near elimination.

Chris" Allen Creed has been eliminated"

Ernie" I wonder if Creed knows that his own woman was the one that eliminated him and how damn lucky can Korey Karnage be? He is was a split second from elimination and yet is still alive in this match"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Paradise City by Guns and Roses plays


Chris" Here is Jessica Strykerrrrr"

Jessica hits the ring running...She takes down Faith and Lylah and goes right after Karnage and Taylor Lynn....

Ernie" You got to figure three of the odds on favorites to win this match are now in the ring and Jessica got the best number draw of them all so far"

Jessica takes down Karnage and is fighting with Taylor when Lylah comes in from behind hitting Jessica and trying to throw her over the ropes only be reversed and have Jessica toss out Lylah..

Chris" Lylah McQueen has been eliminated"

The brawl continues in the ring with Faith and Korey having been in there the longest of anyone and both suffering from some fatigue now.

 

 

 


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Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Dirrty by Christina Aguilera to a huge pop from the fans

Chris" This is Gypsyyyyyyyyy"

Gypsy comes to the curtain heading for the ring when out from the back comes sprinting Kit Black attacking Gypsy to perhaps return the favor from earlier...Gypsy and Kit fight off of the to down beside the ramp when other Mafia members BreAnna Black and White Trash appear and all three girls attack Kit before the security is finally able to break it apart only to have Kit leap over the security back onto Gypsy and the fight start all over again.

Chris" Gypsy has been eliminated"

Ernie" I guess because she never entered the ring she never was officially in the match but I will have to get confirmation on that one...Nonetheless it hasn't exactly been a great night for GWE's newest exclusive talent, not only did she get popped by Dante's new mystery man but she didn't even get to the ring for her first match on the show...Russell isn't having a great night so far...God I love it"

Back in the ring Jessica is choking Karnage in the corner and Faith is fighting with Taylor Lynn

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Riot by 3 days grace hits yet again

Chris" This is Angel Anarchyyyyy"

Angel sprints into the ring going right after Faith with a series of judo throws and then locking on some kind of nerve hold that has Rivers screaming like...well a girl.

Ernie" Not much is known about this new girl Angel Anarchy , only that she has been labeled Russell's secret weapon and so far I can see why...This girl obviously has a background in martial arts"

Taylor and Jessica seem to have joined forces momentarily and are beating on Karnage in the corner with Jessica standing on his chest and Taylor putting the boots to his ribs.

Ernie" Karnage is probably one of the toughest guys I know ,but he isn't going to be able to take this kind of abuse much longer...Him and Faith are near the forty minute mark in this match and they haven't had a second to catch their breath since the opening bell"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Skinny Little Bitch by Angelspit plays

Chris" This is the street smart sweetheart....Seraphimmmmmm"

Sera makes her way down to the ring and rolls in under the bottom ropes, she stands there watching Angel choking the life out of her friend Faith for several seconds before making a move towards them only to have Jessica Stryker blast her upside the head and send Sera crashing to the mat

Ernie" I'm not so sure if Sera was going to help Faith or hurt her"

Taylor pulls Karnage up to his feet and is trying to dump him over the ropes when Angel apparently loses interest in choking Faith and goes after Taylor...

Ernie" What an exciting match we are witnessing here tonight but as the clock ticks down we know who the final entrant is...The game changer is on his way out here"

Crowd" Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four , three, two , one." Buzzer

Walk by Pantera plays


Chris" The final entrant....He is Big Toneeeee"

Tone lumbers down to the ring and comes in over the top rope going after a lifeless Faith Rivers, he picks her up by her hair and looks to the ropes smiling ear to ear.

Ernie" I don't think Faith's time in this match is much longer"

Angel gives up on fighting with Taylor and comes back to help Tone as Taylor turns her attention back to brutalizing a very tired Korey Karnage.

Ernie" I can't believe Korey Karnage and Faith Rivers are still in this match, that shows the kind of endurance these two people have"

Angel is holding Faith for Tone who winds up with a big haymaker...He hits Faith with the first one rocking the poor girl like a feather in a hurricane...He then winds up again only to have Faith somehow duck out of the way and Tone punch Angel square one sending her staggering back into the ropes and right over them to the floor.

Ernie" Ohhh that was a costly mistake for Russell's troops"

Chris" Angel Anarchy has been eliminated"

Big Tone goes to the ropes looking down at Angel all somber mouthing the words "I'm sorry" He reaches out to her trying to get her back into the match even though the refs are keeping her back and then the unthinkable happens...A well timed, well place dropkick right to the leg Tone is putting all of his weight on to lean out sends him tumbling forward and Faith dumps him out to the floor with the fans going insane...

Ernie" Oh my god...Oh my god....Faith Rivers just eliminated Big Tone"

Chris" Big Tone has been Eliminated"

Faith is looking down at her handy work when someone grabs the back of her tights and dumps her out to the floor....Faith looks up to see the cold, deadpan stare of Seraphim looking back at her.

Ernie" Her best friend just eliminated her...Tyler Russell has gotten in Sera's head, I'm sure of it now"

Chris" Faith Rivers has been eliminated"

Speak of the devil and he shall appear as Tyler appears on the big screen from his office looking very unhappy about the events of tonight's main event so far...

Tyler"Good job Faith for lasting that long, but I just thought you would like to know that I just added a new stipulation to your Devil's Night Match....A special guest referee to be exact.....You know her pretty well I'm sure...SERAPHIM!!!"

Screen goes black

Ernie" Oh my god Seraphim is the special guest referee for the match between Faith and Big Tone at the pay per view ...I think Tyler is stacking the deck against Faith in a big way"

Back in the ring we are down to the final four in the ring and amazingly Korey Karnage is still in there after all the abuse he has taken so far. Taylor and Karnage tee off on each other again with Jessica going after Seraphim...

Ernie" Final four folks, one of these four will be going to Devil's Night to compete for the title in the Chamber of Horrors match"

Jessica and Seraphim are fighting near the ropes when Paranoia by Dope hits over the sound system and everyone's attention turns to the stage where a blood staind and heavily bandage Akmed appears waving around Jimmy Stryker's bandanna that he probably picked up from ringside when someone woke his ass up from the Supreme Killing he got....Jessica attention in momentarily taken by Akmed taunting her and Sera runs at her trying to take her over with a crossbody but unfortunately the momentum carries both ladies out to the floor.

Chris" Seraphim and Jessica Stryker have been eliminated"

Ernie" Damn that Akmed...Jessica Stryker was my pick to win it all...That rat bastard is always sticking his nose into things where it don't belong"

Jessica goes running up the ramp but Akmed quickly retreats backstage having already taken one Stryker asskicking and not in shape for another....

Ernie" We are down to the final two people and Korey Karnage is still in there..."

Karnage is able to reverse Taylor and goes for his finisher The side effect(Backflip kick) but Taylor ducks out of the way and hits Karnage with a little of her own kicking ability something she likes to call Cruel Seduction(Chick Kick)...Karnage is down and Taylor is trying to get him to the ropes to toss him out, but being that Karnage is bigger then her she is having a hard time getting him there.

Ernie" I don't know if Taylor can lift him to get him over the ropes"

The fans are cheering as Taylor drags him to the ropes and suddenly Allen Creed comes sprinting back to ringside brushing off the refs like they aren't even there he jumps up on the ring apron blowing Taylor a kiss and holding down the top rope to make it easier for her to toss out Karnage

Ernie" This isn't right...Creed has already been eliminated from the match"

Taylor muscles up a lifeless Karnage and moves to dump him over the ropes when Karnage puts on the brakes and lunges forward hiptossing Taylor over the ropes with Creed still holding them down oblivious to what is happening until Taylor is laying on the floor looking up at him.

Ernie" Karnage was playing possum, he wasn't as hurt as bad as he was playing and Allen Creed just helped him eliminate Taylor Lynn without even knowing it...He has done it...Korey Karnage has done it!!!"

Chris" Taylor Lynn has been eliminated....Here is your winnnerrrrrr Korey Karnageeeee"

Karnage is laying in the middle of the ring battered, bruised and breathing like he belongs in an Iron Lung but he has pulled it off...He outlasted nineteen others to win it all and now has a date with Devil's Night.

Tyler Russell comes running down to the ring followed by several of his misfits...He gets into the ring pulling a mic out of his suit coat as he claps and tries to help Karnage to his feet..

Tyler"Yessssss....See what I told you all? I went out and found Korey Karnage , a forgotten legend just barely making ends meat on the Indy circuit and I brought him to GWE and he has went undefeated thanks to me....Thanks to me putting him in the line to be a winner and now he will go to Devil's Night and bring that Heavyweight tile back to Chaos Theory and ME!!"

Ernie" God this idiot is a power hungry maniac"

Tyler looks to Karnage smiling..."Tell them all Korey...Tell them all what I'm saying is true"

Karnage takes the mic from Tyler's hand and takes a deep breath, his voice is raspy and he needs a drink of water but what he has to say if still very audible

Karnage" It's not true...Nothing you say is true you pathetic little douche....If I wasn't so tired right now I would kick your ass along with all your boyfriends here but since I am tired I will simply say...Go fuck yourself...I'm going to Hangover"

Karnage throws the mic at Tyler and walks out of the ring heading for the back...Tyler looks stunned his eyes filling with that venomous hatred as he looks up at the sky box and Roxy waves at him holding up a Korey Karnage shirt and laughing...

Ernie" I think Korey Karnage is that talent to be named later in the Gypsy trade...Tyler looks like someone just kicked his puppy"

Tyler takes a deep breath

Tyler" You want to play that game then fine Roxy...Remember I said I wanted a talent from your show to be booked on the returning Chaos Theory after Devil's Night in return for me letting Gypsy be in that match tonight...Well I found that talent and believe me she is going to have a very long night in Chicago come November 6th....That talent Roxy is.....YOU!!!"

Roxy freezes and Tyler starts laughing and the fans fall deathly silent

Tyler" Thats right folks, buy your tickets right now because Foxy Roxy is returning to the ring right here in Chaos Theory and I will be announcing her opponent at Devil's Night....Now that Roxy is what I call a show stopping moment"

Tyler throws down the mic and heads out of the ring..

Ernie" Foxy Roxy in the ring for the first time in forever...I can't believe it. We are out of time but please call your local cable or satellite providers and order Devil's Night because I know it will be a show you don't want to miss"

Fade to credits.


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From: MSN NicknameÑòváCåînËSent: 10/25/2008 3:47 AM

Akmed vs Jimmy Stryker

Judge 1

Creativity: Okay I have to give this one to akmed because Jimmy didnt really have much of a settting but i like how he went about his rps. I was impressed with what akmed did this time around he really stepped of his game and i liked the c4 rp.
RP flow: Ill give this one to jimmy because i always understood what he was saying and it always flowed well together. Akmeds i got really lost a few times in what he was meaning to say it jumped back and fourth alot.
Appearance: I really dont think that this should be apart of judging.
Attention to details: Akmed had details jimmy didnt
Countering: They both did very well in the countering. Instead of just saying wtf to why nova would give tyler akmeds name jimmy went into it and ripped that apart and i liked it.
Consideration for deadlines: neither rped too close.
Use of SLs: Akmed did ok with what he had but i guess i would have ran more with maybe using tyler since he's been wanting jimmy on ct and got him because of what akmed did for him. Jimmy used his major sl with jessica very well.

Okay i think that this was a pretty close match both guys did a decent job. Jimmy i still think that you need to add some detail into your rps and not have it be just his thoughts. At least some sort of setting . Akmed you're coming along ways and u did well here better than what I thought you'd do my advice is maybe not so much name calling unless its more orginal. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh now decision time comes and im going to have to go with.......... Jimmy because I think where it really mattered was his countering and he stepped it up there and made up for his not having detail. Though I think you both worked well off of eachother.

Judge 2
creativity:
Is there such a thing as a draw on here? Seriously, nothing creative from both of them. On the OOC, Jimmy has stated he is abandoning his character so to me it made me feel like he didn't even try in any of his rps. Like he just said fuck it and posted whatever he thought sounded good. Akmed, the only creative thing he did was blow up a building with himself inside. The special effects crew must have had a tough time understanding what Akmed wanted to do. YOU DO NO SURVIVE A C4 EXPLODING BUILDING... Okay, I guess I just have to give this to one person and that's Akmed.
RP flow: With two rps a piece, they had a good flow with the dialogue going. Not much with the action, not that that takes off point (if we were using a point system) but setting the scene keeps the reader involved, it allows them to picture it as if they were watching it on TV. While reading Jimmy's RPs, all I pictured was him standing there talking, like a long run-on sentence. Akmed did set the scene for his explosion but he could have done it more intense and created a better picture for the reader.
Appearance: N/A - I don't think appreance matters...as long as I can read the RP...I basically ignore everything else.
Attention to details: I this this ties into the whole RP flow and these two areas should be combined - NOTE TO MGT. I've seen better from both of them...these four RPs seemed to just have been thrown together. I believe in order to have a good match, you have to pay attention to your opponent's details in action. Jimmy didn't have it so Akmed figured it would be ok if he didn't put forth any effort as well. The only good detail was in the final moments of Akmed's rp with the exploding building. I may have seemed to not appreciate the concept early in my comments, but if its the only good difference out of a thousand words that are just saying the same thing, you might as well count it. Points go to Akmed.
Countering: Old School vs New School. Its what it felt like. So Jimmy is old and yes he has done a lot in BUD. Perhaps Akmed didn't do his homework when it came to the history of the BUD Legend. And same with Jimmy as he cant go into a place such as PCW. However when it came down to who did the best countering, I give it to Jimmy because all he did was just talk shit to Akmed.
consideration for deadlines: They both did ok for this one. Nobody rped at the last minute...which I greatly despise...I can't wait to judge the Gauntlet match!!! (evil grin)
Use of SLs: Akmed. He attacked Jimmy's sister and mentioned it in the rp as a recap to what was going on and why this match was taking place. Jimmy on the other hand is just a show up and fight kind of guy so he's just there doing the job and possibly his last so there was no mention of a storyline here.

Im not going to say it was a close match because it wasn't. Jimmy, if this is your last match atleast put up a fight. Dont just stand there and not care about the situation, you are better than that, you are a legend. If you are going out, then go out, but go out with flare and style. I think you need one more match and I think during that match you go out kicking ass....what do you say?
Akmed, an exploding building? This is your MO. From kidnapping Drew's wife to beating Jimmy's sister. I love how you mentioned nobody had the balls to step up to Tyler's request but you. Almost as if you're saying that you're the go to guy for anything related to that stuff. You and Jimmy both went toe to toe on the dialogue but what really set you apart was that last scene. Its unfreakinbeliveable. Razor Wire hurts like hell and no human can survive an exploding building... Unless you were a robot. Yes..I know it's been said that we need to be realistic in our RPs - like people coming back from the dead is so realistic - but because this is the only thing that stood out....I'm going to give you the win. You only outdid Stryker but a hairline. Don't gloat....just be happy that the man is leaving and didn't hand your your ass on a silver platter with a fork.
I know Jimmy said that he was dropping out...and having known that you would think he would have put forth more effort into his work. No offense Akmed, but had you caught Jimmy on a good day, in a really pissed off mood and rarin' to go....your explosion scene would have amounted to nothing. Jimmy - I would have thought that this being your last match you would have come at Akmed like he was your arch enemy just to prove a point and go out with a win...you didn't do that and that's your decision. Your RPs were good but I could feel the whole "Meh, I'm leaving anyway." shadow lurking behind your words. I wish I could give you the win...hell, I even want to...but this wasn't the Legendary/BUD Legend Jimmy Stryker.

Tiebreaker
Creativity
: I think Akmed's were the more creative of the two because all Jimmy did was stand there and talk and really had no settings at all..
RP flow: Jimmy's seem to have a little better flow to them then Akmed's who seemed to jump around a lot and kind of went into the farfetched with the C-4 thing, you can be sure that you aren't crawling out of a building you blew up ontop of yourself no matter who you are.
Appearance: I didn't seen anything wrong with either's
Attention to details: Akmed was a little more detail oriented while Jimmy was more on the dialogue.
Countering: I thought they both did pretty good in the countering but Jimmy was a little better because he did do a lot more talking it seemed then Akmed.
Consideration for deadlines: Not an issue
Use of SLs: I thought they both did ok with this but I think it could have been used more to build upon things going ahead.

Overall I would have to give this match to Akmed simply because I like the creative aspect of rping and Jimmy's just wasn't all that creative. Maybe because he is quitting anyway he didn't really care but I would have like to have seen something more from Jimmy. I think Akmed got lucky because this clearly wasn't his best work but considering Jimmy was probably more focused on the Main Event then this match he was able to slip by just barely.

Gauntlet Match

Judge1
Creativity: This one goes to Karnage always trying to come up with a new setting. i liked the shooting targets idea.
RP flow: This one was a tie for me between Karnage and Jessica I think they both flowed pretty well.
Appearance: n/a
Attention to details: lol Taylor lynn has this one in the bag i dont think she missed a single detail.
Countering: This came down to Karnage..... he became the biggest dick lol i liked how he countered everything and made it work for him. Taylor Lynn I love the fiestyness but.... calling karnage old and washed up is a bit overused against all the legends. Jessica for a character that is newer that hasn't had all the accomplishments did a good job of countering things to her favor. Phoenix also did a good job with what he could work with since there was alot more heat between karnage/stryker/lynn.
Consideration for deadlines: N/a
Use of SLs: All those who rped seemed to work there storylines very well.

This was also a tough decision I believe that everybody did a good job and tried really hard. I'm going to have to go with Karnage because I think he made it very realistic to prove that his match against stevenson wasn't just a fluke and he's ready to take on a match for the world title.

Judge 2
First...FUCKING GAUNTLET MATCHES SUCK!!
Now...the major players were: Phoenix, Jessica Stryker, Taylor Lynn, Korey Karnage, Faith Rivers, Seraphim. I do want to go on record that this is the second week in a row that Karnage posts at the last minute and I'm a big advocate on giving someone a chance to reply. Grant it was only a few small paragraphs, again, I will not be counting that RP with his others. Posting at the last minute if quite shitty, if you ask me...and even though you didn't FUCK IT!
creativity: This one has to go to Karnage. His RPs really had me involved and I didn't get bored reading them. I do like the rest of the players and I really didn't bored but most of them followed the same format - breaking down their opponents one by one...Korey took a different approach that worked for him to get over on the rest.
RP flow: It's a personal preference to keep all the RPs in one thread which would be like extra credity but when I was reading through them, like Phoenix's - they were seperate and different but they all flowed together, as did Karanges, Jessicas, and Taylor Lynns. They had different thoughts and feelings. They all win with this one.
Appearance: N/A - I don't think appreance matters...as long as I can read the RP...I basically ignore everything else.
Attention to details: Korey and Taylor get a tie!! They both laid out the scene for you, brought you into the location with them, painted the picture. They were careful with their details, carried them over, they were able to work with the detail given by the other RPers. Nice work.
Countering: Again Karnage and Taylor take this as well. Faith, Seraphim, and Jessica tried but all three fell short. They all seem to be building their characters against two characters that have history and are already established...there was no way to counter two seaonsed RPers like Karnage and Taylor Lynn.
consideration for deadlines: I liked the fact that Jessica came out from the gate before everyone. That showed that she was wanting the win and she was determined. I love her attitude. Karnage and his '2 minute posting before deadline' really sucks and I think something should be put into the rules about posting at the last minute and not giving your opponents time to reply.
Use of SLs: See Countering.

The two RPers that stood out during this match were Taylor Lynn and Korey Karnage. They posted some really good RPs and though I enjoyed reading ALL OF THE RPs, their work kept me interested. Taylor Lynn had that extra bittersweet flavor that karnage was lacking. She came out letting you know about Taylor Lynn and then she tore into her opponents not holding back. She mentioned her opponents and utilized her SLs....her verbal attack was brutal and even though karnage tried to come back at her, her overall effort was over the top. She was able to come out on Korey no holds barred and she didn't have to do it with a novel. I would like to see them one on one.

Tiebreaker

creativity: overall there wasn't a whole lot of creativity but Karnage was able to keep my interest better than the rest of them.
RP flow: They all flowed pretty well and stayed on the same track
appearance: nothing special, nothing bad
attention to details:
countering: I thought that Karnage and Jessica did the best job of countering their opponents, Taylor did as well. The others mentioned them but didn't stress it as much.
consideration for deadlines: They all did a good job with that, except for maybe Karnages last one.
use of SLs: There wasn't much of a storyline for any of them.


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