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Match 9 -
Matlock (c) vs RuCKuS w/?????? vs Syck w/Akasha
Franchise Championship
Knockout bout inside the Octagon
Stips: Fire will be on the top of the Octagon all around it
Cancelled

Match 8 -
Sean Hunter vs Nathan "NaTo" Graves
Straight Jacket Match
Stips: Non Title, 3 RP Limit. You must put your opponent in a Straight Jacket to win. Fire surrounds the ring
1. Sean Hunter. He took everything Nato had to bring and countered it and topped it of. I do have to give Nato credit for his effort and creativity. It just wasn’t enough this time around.
2. This was a toughie since I liked both Nato and Sean's roleplays. Nato had a good story going and his roleplays were short and sweet.. just how I like them. He had pretty good ideas for his roleplay which made it much more interesting. Sean, on the other hand did longer ones.. which are okay too. But the part that really got me was how he reacted to Nato's rps and the humour in most of his roleplays were enjoyable. Sean showed us why he's the heavy weight champion in BUD and why he deserves to win this match. I'll give you this.. Sean wins.. but Nato came very very close.
3. 4 RP’s…not 3. Ok…now I expected more out of Nate, I really did. Could be a little bit of ring rust being away for so long and stepping up to the ‘jobber killer�?Hunter. All jokes aside, Hunter did a good job showing NaTo why he’s got the strap. Typical good Hunter promos, attitude, ego and flair. Sean Hunter gets my vote.

Match 7 -
Whisper vs Jeffrina Michelle Baxter vs Snake Eyes
Bytch Championship
Backyard Angel bout
Stips: 20 feet above the ring on a scaffold that's set on fire. Whoever is left atop wins 1. Whisper had this match in her bag since the get go. It was sad to see that Snake Eyes didn't put in much effort and Jeffrina didn't do too well either by not showing up. Nonetheless Whisper put in more effort than she needed to and I was so taken away by her roleplays. The part that caught me most was the dream series more than anything and how well she fitted it into her roleplays. It was good to see someone take charge of the falling bytch division and i'm sure that since Whisper, a former bytch champion is back there will be more coming along so that we can finally see the womens division in BUD rise once more. Good job Whisper.
2. Jeffrina who? I couldn’t find any RP’s so sue me. Snake Eyes�?“I am going to try my best to roleplay for the match but I still got more than one fed to roleplay for so don't expect my roleplays to be the best�?this pissed me off. I understand being in other feds but when you have a match for the BUD Bytch Championship maybe you should take the weekend off from the other feds? Just a thought. Whisper took this match with effort and skill. Good character work, good promo work, a good, solid thread�?STRONG>Whisper gets my vote.
3. RUCKUS said Whisper had this bagged...and due to work was unable to get me his vote...but I do know he voted for Whisper.

Lilly : Ladies and gentlemen the next bout is a Backyard Angels bout for the Bytch Championship..
Angel by Rammstein starts to play and spotlights focus upon the entrance area where Whisper is seen.. She taunts the crowd and slowly and methodically makes her way down to the ring.. She stands still and looks up towards the scaffold.. As she starts to climb to the top Lilly is heard first..
Lilly : Making her way up the scaffold first.. She stands at 5�?1 and weighs 136 lbs.. Hailing from Tampa Florida.. She is Whisperrrrrrrr�?
The crowd cheers as Whisper makes her way up the 20 foot scaffold and taunts the crowd while standing on top..
Mark Hellion : The destructive diva Whisper looks ready for her match to get started..
Meadow Soprano : Yes she sure does.. She is really in her element..
Twizted’s Familiar begins to play and out comes Jeffrina Michelle Baxter in orange and yellow spotlights.. She taunts the crowd with the wicked clown sign before making her way down to the ring.. She also looks up but finds Whisper looking down towards her..
Lilly : Making her way up the scaffold.. She stands at 5�? and weighs 127 lbs. Jeffrina Michelle�?
The crowd boo’s her as she climbs up the scaffold.. Whisper steps back allowing the diva to come up.. She smirks towards her with a devilish grin..
Mark Hellion : Jeffrina doesn’t seem so confident now upon the 20 foot scaffold..
Meadow Soprano : No and Whisper has seen it..
Beautiful when your mad by Out of the mouth blasted out of the PA system and in a mix of red and pink lights Snake Eyes dances on the entrance ramp..
Mark Hellion : She might save some of that energy for the match..
The fans cheer as she makes her way to the ring.. Snake Eyes looks up the scaffold and looked extremely confident..
Lilly : And making her way up the scaffold hailing from Queens New York.. Standing at 5�?0 and weighing 134 lbs. She is.. Snake Eyes�?
Snake Eyes makes her way up the scaffold and the 3 diva’s stand on top of the scaffold.. Snake Eyes on the left.. Whisper on the right and Jeffrina in the middle.. A strange smirk appears upon Whisper’s face that soon is followed by Snake Eyes smiling as well.. Officials walk over to the scaffold and set it on fire.. The bell rings..
Mark Hellion : And this match is on it’s way..
Meadow Soprano : Whisper and Snake Eyes seem to have a common goal.. Jeffrina..
And that appeared to be so.. Whisper and Snake Eyes made their way towards Jefrrina and together they grabbed her and tossed her over and let her crash to the ring below.. Both smirked and then took fighting positions.. The two diva’s exchange blows and push each other to the edge where the flames can be felt as the fire crawls up higher and higher.. Whisper steps oddly and manages to hold her balance by grabbing the steel bars.. Her left leg had slipped down the side and the fire roaring below them had burned her slightly.. She shakes her leg as she stands.. Snake Eyes lunges forward and Whisper ducks hits Snake Eyes with a drop kick.. Snake Eyes to nearly falls down.. When she made her way back towards Whisper she walked into a spinning heel kick.. Whisper wanted to get it over with as the flames by now had reached the level below them and the heat was suffocating..
Meadow Soprano : I think it won’t be long now..
Mark Hellion : Yeah the flames are almost at the top..
Whisper kicked Snake Eyes in the stomach before setting her up for the Angels revenge.. Whisper picked her up and turned towards the side and released Snake Eyes.. She send her crashing down to the mat and the bell is rung..
Lilly : Winner and NEW BUD Bytch Champion.. Whisper�?
BUD crew rushes to put out the fire so Whisper could make her way down.. When that is done Whisper made her way down and the referee hands her the belt.. Whisper raised it high with a confident smile before she makes her way to the back.. and the show heads into a commercial break..

Match 6 -
Akmed vs Mat Collins (c)
BUDVision Championship
Monster's Ball
Stips: Both superstars are placed into straight jackets and locked into a small room with no windows, food or water and just a candle for light for 24 hours in which after they will head straight to their match. Pinfalls only. Fire surrounds the ring
1. Mat Collins. His roleplays made me belief that his character was indeed prepared for 24 hours of isolation and how irritated he would be when finally being released. Where I didn’t get that from Akmed’s rp’s.
2. Akmed, you're improving keep it up. It'll soon get you somewhere. Akmed's roleplays weren't that bad.. infact they were quite good but that wasn't enough to hold the blood thirsty Mat Collins down. I loved how in each and every match.. you get to know Mat Collins better and learn more about his past. Mat retains the BUDvision belt.
3. This wasn’t such a blowout as I thought it was going to be. Akmed has improved a lot since I last remember reading some of his stuff and he should be commended for that. The only problem I have is the lack of originality in the RP’s because that’s what I got from Mat. What put him over the top to me was how he incorporated the 24 hours of isolation into his thread. I thought it was well done and showed him thinking and using match stipulations that were interesting for his RP’s. I liked the ‘f u dad�?stuff and Mat countered everything Akmed said. My vote goes to Mat Collins but with a nod to Akmed for stepping up his game.

Match 5 -
Anton "A-Money" Coleman vs Justin Black
Iron Man Bout
Stips: Most pinfall or submission victories in the 30 minute time limit wins
1. Justin Black. He put in a slightly bigger amount of effort and his roleplay was better then Anton’s.. Both could have done more to make it more convincing but for a match that took 3 years to get it done. It lacked the intensity.
2. Justin Black takes this roleplay because Anton's roleplay didn't have anything to do with the match. He never once mentioned his opponent in his roleplay. Justin on the other hand did an okay job and it would have been better to see more roleplays from him even though his opponent didn't put in much effort.
3. 1 RP each? Ok then…well, Anton put up one RP as a preface to his thread and then stopped and that’s why JB gets my vote. He addressed Anton, talked a little shit and showed more focus. Don’t know what happened to Anton but I’d like to see a rematch.

Match 4 -
Vortex vs Brian Corven vs Korey Karnage vs Steen (c)
THC Championship
Buried Alive
Stips: The caskets [3] will be out of the grave and as soon as someone is put into one and its shoved into the grave, that person is eliminated.
1. Steen. He just outlasted them all to end up still Hardcore champion.. Basically handled all they dished out and returned it and then some. I like the father-son angle he uses for his character.
2. Usually..writting from one person's point of view is hard to do and doesn't have much effect on the reader but in this case it did. Korey Karnage had a few good roleplays up and would have dominated if he put more but Steen really dominated this match. His roleplays kept me interested and I read them instead of just skimmed through them. I like how he kept his flow going. Starting off with how he won the THC belt and how he included what Ruckus had done to him after he won the belt. I see a very bright future for Steen in BUD and would like to see more of him. Steen wins this one.
3. Vortex didn’t RP and Corvin went in half assed so this match came down to Steen and Karnage. Karnage did good, I liked the debut promo and feel this might have been better match if he would have RP’d once or twice more. Steen, damn dude…I liked the thread. I enjoyed how you addressed what your opponents were saying by having people rip on you and doubt Steen’s abilities. The domineering father gimmick is interesting but be careful of using it too much in the future, it could get stale. But Steen gets my vote…good job!

Match 3 -
Riley Monroe vs Megahurtz
Inferno Match
Stips: Dark Child is the special enforcer
1. Riley Monroe.
2. Riley Monroe wins.. Megahurtz didn't rp. Good job on your roleplays Riley.
3. No MegaHurtz�?STRONG>Riley wins…really liked the thread, especially the first one. Good character detail, good promo work…would have liked to see Mega fight back though…meh.

Whisper : Midnight I am not going to waste my time on you.. I have a match to prepare for..

Midnight : Why won’t you align with Ravyn.. You two would make the most destructive..

Whisper : Don’t even go there.. Ravyn and me.. I don’t think so.. Look Midnight do me one favor.. Go sit by your lap-dog and leave me alone.

At that time 2 diva’s come walking by.. Whisper smirked and nodded towards them.. One is carrying a chair and talking in two different voice sets.. The other a beautiful blonde..

Whisper : Likewise.. Now if you girls don’t mind.. I have a match to get ready for.. I got me a title to win..

Whisper walked of towards her dressing room and felt the glare of Midnight on her back as the two diva’s laughed.

As the show comes back from commercial Fingers and Flavor talk about the next match coming up between Ravyn Crow and Hank.

Fingers: Folks welcome back! If your just tuning in then this next match is going to be another bout of who is the best between these two. There is no love lose here.

Flavor: Yep! I think Ravyn vs Hank part 2 is going to be something. My money is on Ravyn who is out to prove that Hank can't beat him.

Fingers: Oh come on Frankie...you honestly think Ravyn can pull off two wins against my main man Hank? Come on get real!

Flavor: At least Ravyn not a druggie like Hank is.

Fingers: Let’s not go into his personal life Flavor. *rolls his eyes and turns towards the ring* Anyways..let's get to the match shall we..Frankie!

The lights go out, Ravyn’s theme, “The Cross�?by Samael, hits and then the lights dim up slightly revealing a shadow of man standing, with head down, at the top of the rampway. The man raises his head allowing the small amount of light to fall upon his face. Shadows and light outline the face of Ravyn Crow. He smirks slightly then begins walking slowly down the ramp, keeping his eyes locked on the ring as a bursts of flames shoot from the ringposts. The arena is instantly lit up revealing the shocked and rather excited faces of the fans. Ravyn reaches the ring, walks up the stairs, rolls his eyes back and thrust his arms up into the air as more flames shoot out of the ring posts. He then gets in the ring and kneels down raising his one hand up in the air in a gesture of giving thanks to gods. He then gets up, turns towards the stage area and glares in impatience for his opponent to show up.

Hank is shown continuing to walk down the hall until he sees the staircase to the ramp. Hank walks up the staircase and his music the song calls “Ghetto Gospel�?from Tupac Loyal to the game record blast all over the arena. The camera goes all over the arena showing the fans standing up and cheering Hank on. Hank smiles as he stands at the ramp. Then he walks down to the ring, stops, walks over to the fans giving those fives then he jumps inside the ring, walks to the ring post, and stands on the ring post looking at the fans. He pays no heed to Ravyn, but jumps around on on leg taunting the crowd.

The bell sounds and the ringposts shoot fire from them as Ravyn begins to deadlock his eyes on Hank smirking in the process. Hank scoffs at him before attempting to grab Rav in a bear hug. Ravyn quickly counters, twisting Hank’s arm behind his body and kicking him square in his ass knocking him down onto the ground. Hank snaps his head back to Ravyn, glaring angrily at him. He quickly jumps back to his feet and tackling Rav to the mat. He proceeds to punch him in his head and face. Ravyn growls loudly, takes his legs and flips Hank over his head and onto his back, as flames shoot from the posts. Rav rolls over onto his stomach and watches Hank as he becomes angry. Rav smirks, hops to his feet, as Hank does the same, bounces off of the ropes and delivers a massive Clothesline from Hell to Hank. Back to the mat Hank goes. Hank is on all fours holding his throat with an angry look to his face and jumps to his feet slapping Ravyn in his face causing Ravyn head to jerk back. The two fall back into the corner at the same moment that another burst of flames appears. Rav’s hair gets sniged slightly and Hank jerks back from the heat. Ravyn steps away from the corner, smelling his own hair burned. He reaches back and pulls at the burned hair. He looks at it and growls as Hank tries to avoid another flame. Ravyn then looks at him with glowing red eyes and then out of nowhere Hank gets thrown into the corner and numerous of punches are given by Ravyn to the midsection causing Hank to try and block the blows. Hank’s arm is caught in another burst, his face tightens in sheer pain which appears to fuel him. Hank grabs Ravyn and tries to use on of his own moves on him, the chokeslam and succeeds. Ravyn rolls out of the ring for a moment, then walks forward looking at Hank before asking for a mic to speak on.

Ravyn: BOY...PAYBACKS...A....BITCH!

Ravyn jumps onto the side of the ring, then takes the mic and slams Hank with it causing Hank to fall backward to the mat, holding his now bleeding head, in pain. Ravyn stands over him grinning from ear to ear before he slams his foot into Hank's chest trying to immobilize his breathing, thus making it easier to take him out. Hank holds his chest for a moment then tries again to get Ravyn off his feet, by kicking at his knees. Which finally does take Rav off of his feet. Hank then goes to work on Rav’s legs, by kicking at them. Ravyn drops to the mat, unable to remain standing any longer. Hank then rolls out of the ring, grabs a chair, rolls back in and starts to work on Ravyn’s legs trying to do what he can to keep Ravyn off his feet and does so for a few. Ravyn holds his right leg in pain but manages to get up limping a little before grabbing the chair and tossing it out of the ring. He then hits Hank with a backhand sending him back some until Hank is into the corner forcing Ravyn to jump on top of him and hit him with a 10 punch.

Crowd: 1....2....3....4...5...6....7...8..9...10!

Ravyn jumps off and Hank does a Ric Flair to the mat. Ravyn then goes over to Hank and grabs him by his bald head lifting him up and headbutts him sending him back down to the mat. Ravyn then throws Hank into the turnbuckle which knocks the wind out of him and cause the turnbuckles to shoot fire out of them. The arm that was already burned was thrust into the flames once more. Hank drops to the mat screaming and holding his arm in total pain. Ravyn rolls out of the ring, digs beneath the it and pulls out a barbedwire bat. He then jumps back in and walks over to the corner as fire shoots out of it again. He places the bat in the flames and laughs as it catches fire. He slowly turns to face Hank, the fire lighting up his face. Hank sneers at Ravyn as he rises to his feet still holding his burnt right arm.

Hank: YOU CAN’T FUCKING USE THAT!!

Ravyn: I’LL DO AS I DAMN PLEASE YOU PATHETIC MORTAL!!

Ravyn then lunges at Hank, slamming him in the head with the bat immediatly burning his tender scalp. Blood now trickles from his head as he struggles to regain his footing. As Ravyn moves towards him, Hank rolls out of the ring to get away from him. Ravyn drops to his knees, which of course causes him to cringe in slight pain, tosses the bat out of the ring and rolls out. Hank goes after the bat and thrusts it at Ravyn before he can truly regain his footing. Rav’s shirt catches fire. He cocks his head slightly as the material is almost gone, he quickly tosses the shirt aside. He then kicks himself for having chest hair, for it all got burned straight to the skin reddening his chest. Hank and Ravyn then go at a tug of war for the bat, each wanting the most dangerous weapon. But it gets thrown aside and the two begin exchanging blows. Hank climbs back into the ring and Ravyn follows. Hank gets to his feet first and stomps Ravyn in the head a few times. He then bounces off of the ropes as Rav gets to his good leg, using the ropes for support. Hank comes at Ravyn, hoping to use the momentum to knock him down once more. But Ravyn quickly counters and sidewalk slams Hank. He then positions Hank for his finishing move. With a smirk, as if to say ‘it is over�? Ravyn delivers “Hell’s Fury�? Without letting Hank time to recover, Ravyn covers him for the one...two....three!!

Hank lays on the mat, trying to regain some strenth. Ravyn gets up and turns his head and spits on Hank before signaling for his symbol"The Ankh" to be lowered from the roof down to the ring area and down onto the mat. A few robed figures race down to the ring to assist Ravyn grabs Hank. Then they drag him onto the symbol and tie him to it tightly. Hank struggles and curses at the men. The figures then bow their heads as Ravyn and kneels down shows the gods respect by reaching his hand to the skies. The Ankh is lifted towards the roof, with Hank attached, as fire shoots from the posts one last time. Ravyn lowers his head as the flames die and lights fade to black.

Match 1 -
Reyna vs Brutality vs Joey Drakman vs Bobby Rude vs Triple X vs Wifebeater
Guantlet of Fire Bout
Stips: There will be a ring of fire surrounding the ring
1. Bobby Rude. Compliments does go to his opponent Wifebeater for putting in the effort that he/she did but Bobby Rude’s roleplays impressed me more.
2. I was impressed with this match. Being the first match of the PPV and not as important as the other matches, they still managed to go a good job. It came to a tie with Wifebeater and Bobby Rude.. but Bobby Rude took it from there. His roleplays aren't very different from other people's but has it's own spin to it. Wife Beater on the other hand shouldn't swear too much in his roleplays.. for a man. It only makes the roleplay make less sense. All I understood about his roleplays were him being a drug addict and talking to faith about FMM which had NOTHING to do with BUD. Sometimes it takes more than cussing your opponents out and throwing petty disses at them to win a match. Make note of that. Good job, Bobby Rude.
3. This match came down to Bobby Rude and Wifebeater to me. I really enjoyed the RP’s you two did, kept me going and reading. I like the ‘wifebeater�?character, felt you did a great job establishing who he is and his attitude towards lots of things. By the second RP, I had a feel for him and was looking forward to the next. I think your last RP was your best with the focus squarely on the match and opponents. Bobby Rude came out strong. Unabashed attitude in all the RP’s came out loud and clear. Glad you switched it up and had Bobby do his own talking in the last RP because I was concerned it was going to be all Ted. I had to re-read the RP’s a few times but my vote goes to Bobby Rude. I liked the ‘fuck gimmicks, I’m a pro wrestler�?angle he took and that was the slight edge that gave him my vote…Great job both of you.

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