-Match 2-
Josh Drakmen vs Kit Black
The Highway continues
(As Devil's Night looms on the horizon it would appear someone is trying to soften up Kit for her Franchise title match. Last week she pulled off the victory over DSL, but this week she is facing the current CT Evolution Champion. Will Kit's winning ways continue or she about to be slowed down by the clown?)
creativity: Josh Drakmen, I got to say where is it man? Im sure your busy but you could do more. Keep on trucking dog!! As for Kit Black, Not much there in between either, but I guess for one promo a piece there isn't gonna be much of it.
RP flow: Josh, was using the same thing over and over again, like before. I would like to see more verbal rapings, and take what is his. Kit Black, is just flawless in this one due to the extent she took, to make it her own. I was not happy with how Josh kicked himself in the beginning, and then was like nothing happened at the end.
appearance: Kit gets this again. Josh I think is in the need of a layout revamp. This is not bashing on anyone, but you need to get yourself, something to present yourself as a contender if your going to be one.
consideration for deadlines: Well it seemed in the time frame, so yeah they considered it.
use of SLs: Not much here to build off a storyline. But hey, it was worth trying.
Kit is sitting on a bench in the lockerroom. She's got a towel around her neck and she looks to just be relaxing. Gypsy steps out from another area, fixing her gear and not paying attention to who else is in the room. She places the tag title on the bench and is tightening up her boots. She looks over and sees Kit sitting there.
"Good match."
Kit looks over and nods, "Thanks."
Gypsy places both feet on the ground, picking up the belt on placing it over her shoulder.
"Listen...there's something I wanted to talk to you about. Will you be around after my match?"
"I suppose so...what did you want to talk about? Our match? I hope you aren't trying to get out of it."
"Nooo...nothing like that. It's more of an opportunity that I want to offer you."
Gypsy smiles and winks at her as she leaves the lockerroom, heading to her match with Jimmy Stryker.
-Match 3-
Gypsy vs. Jimmy Stryker
The Highway continues
(Last week the tag team champions finally showed a little back bone, but Gypsy has to worry about her Franchise title match as well and just as Kit seems to be being put to the test, so shall Gypsy. This week she faces the returning Jimmy Stryker....A few weeks ago Gypsy didn't fair so well against another big man, how will she do against the Legendary Icon?)
As Gypsy goes for the pin, Cross interferes, pulling the ref out of the ring. She looks over at him standing ringside. They are having a few words but they are't getting picked up by the mic. He snickers, climbing up on the apron just as Jimmy is also getting to his feet...really not knowing what's going on but want to take advantage of the situation. Although, Gypsy, too, sees an opportunity. With all her strength and whatever she had on reserve, she counters a whip by Stryker and sends him reeling into Cross which knocks Cross right off the apron and into the announcers table hitting the back of his neck. Gypsy slides out of the ring and begins kicking at him and punching him. She gets counted out. As soon as Jimmy is declared the winner by countout, the ref slides out as well and tries to get Gypsy off of Cross, and begins to call for the medics. Cross wasn't fighting back and it was as if Gypsy just transformed into another person. They pulled her off...Dante came running from backstage and the guard escort Gypsy backstage. It takes them a while to get Cross on a gurney and backstage....but they do it and unfortunately, he's still unconcious as they remove him from ringside.
-Match 4-
Dante Cross vs. Drew Stevenson
Non-Title/Singles Match
(A pay per view quality match on live television...Why? Because we love you like that....Dante is coming off Team DOA being left laying for the first time since their return. Drew is returning to look for his way back to the top. What better way to start then facing the number one contender for the Heavyweight title and the current BUDvision champion...Drew could go a long way on his climb back to the top by knocking off the Canuck)
creativity: You got to hand it to Dante, and his wild ways of building it up. Drew did a good job here as well. The build ups were great, but more time for both of them I could see a fight like no other.
RP flow: Drew, was great like always, but I think Dante's flow was more on the money. I couldn't stop reading either of their's for a moment, since I am getting to like "What is Next" But don't bomb on me when I am looking for it.
appearance: Appearance eh? Well if this is going to be the next one, I would say Dante has it here. I think that Drew didn't have much time on his hands, and again I would like to see another rematch with the two to find out who would be the last man standing.
consideration for deadlines: Well it seemed in the time frame, so yeah they considered it.
use of SLs: Dante, showing his interest in the world title picture, knowing to keep the whole thing rolling. Drew, im not sure where he is going yet, but we shall see soon.
-Main Event-
DSL vs. Leaky Format
C.o.H. Qualifying Match
(This is it folks, the first of the Chamber of Horrors qualifying matches has been booked. Last week DSL didn't do so well ,but she has a chance to redeem herself and take one step closer to becoming the Heavyweight or Budvision champion of The Domain, but first she has to get by a former champion in both ranks. Leaky Format is still bitter over losing his rematch clause for the Budvision title over his own inability to read the correct set of rules..Last week he chased Wesley Ray from The Domain. Can he do the same to DSL or is he about to pay for all his cocky remarks Lunatic Style?.)
creativity: For this one I think DSL was well on her way to where she needs to be. Did I think Leaky did a bad job...No!! He did a good job. I was impressed with him labeling out the possible accomplishments, but then he ran out of things to say. The penis thing is old man give it up. Then his promo's went back to the same old Leaky. Sorry dude, I just tell you how I see it. DSL very well done
RP flow: Leaky was well on his way, until that snag just grabbed him. DSL's flow was continued from where she left off. and I was able to focus while reading it. Leaky had me until nearly the end, when I just was like what the hell is this?
appearance: DSL, was well set on where she was pointing her rp's. Leaky was more into the lets get down to business shit. Which is ok in my opinion, but here that is what you got to do. I've seen better from DSL, but Leaky, if he wants to see much of a chance, he better keep going like he did in his first two rp's, and get his facts straight.
consideration for deadlines: Well it seemed in the time frame, so yeah they considered it.
use of SLs: DSL was more aware of any kind of storyline issue here. She was gunning for the title, knowing that she wants that belt around her waist. She has never held it, so the fire is burning and she is well on her way to getting that title she deserves. Leaky, I know your trying to get yourself into the COH match at Devil's Night, but man, you got to get your storylines in check, and check on things you could possibly do to beat your opponent. That's all I got to say.
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