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Judge 1 I believe Drew should win his match because I think he did a great job of being consistent with his details as well as creativity. He made the roleplays flow as always with his attention to spelling and grammar. He gave plenty of time to the deadlines as well.
I believe White Trash should win her match because first of all she was much more realistic with her roleplays then Karime was. White Trash has an originality to her roleplays as well as her details for writing them.
I believe Frost should win this one because I enjoyed reading his roleplays. He did a great job on providing details as well as he involves others and storylines in the rps.
I believe Kryptt should win this one because it appears to me as if he tried more and really wanted this more then Syck. He paid more attention to detail as well as the flow and appearance of his roleplay seemed more thought out.
I believe Gypsy should win this because hands down the girl kicked ass on this. She did everything she should have to win this match. She used details, other storylines, character, grammer and spelling as well as good attention to time.
I believe Misery should win this because he put way more thought and effort into it then Taio did. I just didn;t get much out of Taio's and I think it may be because of time.
I believe Pyretta should win this because she put more thought and effort into is then Joachim did as well. I think she did a better job with the details as well.
I dont think anyone roleplayed for El Lunatico and Captian Anarchys match as well as Eris and Summer
I think Andrew Bradford should win the mens battle royal as well. I would prefer not to vote on the womens either since im in it. |
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Judge 2 - Main Event -
Kevin Sane© vs Drew Stevensonw/Zoey Rose
BUD Heavyweight Championship Winner:Sane I couldn't really understand all the rave reviews for Drew's work because to me it was nowhere near the stuff he has put out in the past. Drew seems to be slacking a lot lately. Maybe he was slacking in this match for some purpose, but those rps he did were good but not to the par you expect from him. I can see doing something with I have won all the titles here and I'm not appreciated bit or something about his talent being overlooked...Everyone either loves or hates the cocky bad guy so hopefully he is sticking with that idea. Sane is a money player when it comes to rping, sometimes I have to stop and go huh? Like last week with his big defense to that not being me by saying we don't got the same color hair against Kryptt...That was pretty weak and seemed kind of like first time rper logic, but then he will come out with some solid stuff that just amazes you...Four rps total for a heavyweight title match is kind of weak ,but I guess it is what it is and Sane was better this time.
- Match 7 - Karime Atora vs White Trash© Winner:Trashy WT had to finally step up in a match and I think she did that. Karime is one of those girls that I think could take that Bytch title and keep it for awhile, she has an interesting gimmick even though I don't really get into that witches and warlocks kind of mumbo jumbo her stuff is still a very good read. WT has gotta be setting a record for holding that title and I gotta sing a little hillbilly music...I like my women a little on the trashy side.. - Match 6 - Jake Frost vs Leaky Format© Winner"Leaky
I have always been one of those that would make fun of Leaky in a heartbeat and can remember when more of his rps were just songs with like three lines of nonsense thrown in. He can take it for what it is but to me he was literally one of the worst rpers that I had ever seen , but that just goes to show everyone that if you are willing to stick with it and willing to evolve then you can actually become a solid rper. Some of the stuff he says still confuses me, but he is probably on of those top 10 , top five people now. Frosty just didn't seem to have his focus in the rping world this week and it was kind of a bummer because I was interested in seeing this match. - Match 5 - Syck vs Kryptt Winner:Kryptt I was calling this the match of the night when I first seen it on the card, but once against I discover when you do that it is usually a let down. I guess Syck got occupied with other things and just couldn't devote anymore time to this one.
- Match 4 - Andrew Bradford vs Gypsy Winner: Gypsy
I am all for making fun of someone's name and I do it quite often in my own rps, but this really did seem like a rehash of what Micky did against Gypsy and if it didn't work the first time it wasn't going to work the second time. - Match 3 - Taio vs Misery© Winner: Misery
Taio made a cursory effort and that just isn't enough against someone like Misery. Taio reminds me a lot of Akmed and no not in that tub of goo kind of way, Akmed always seemed like he had a talent for rping but he just never wanted to focus and that is what is seems like with Taio, he probably could be one of the top five people in BUD if he would just focus.
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I hate how you scrunch everything together and really wish you would like separate it out some when you are talking in between actions but it was a good rp. Ciara seemed like she was going somewhere with hers and just stopped and Whispy just showed for the one and evidently got busy or lost interest. | |
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Judge 3 (not complete) First, I'd like to say that I expected both from both men, but I understand with time restraints and whatnot. I'd also like to add that I'm a big grammer mark, and I think it should play a big part in judging. This whole thing is to judge who the better writer is, and if you don't have good grammer, then you'll lose. I think Sane gets a little carried away sometimes with the "..." which is terribly annoying. Though Sane did give more dialogue, at times it felt as if he was doing it just for the word count. Stevenson's rps were a little more reserved, but it was evident that he had a point and didn't need a million words to prove it. I always say that you can't have a good rp, tell a good story, without a certain amount of words. However, too much can throw you off. I do think Sane did awesome as well, but I'm going to have to give it to Stevenson.
I'm wondering what happened to Rosie, cause that would have been a good match. Not that this wasn't, because it exceeded my expecation. I am going to have to give it to White Trash though. Her rps definitely flowed better, and she always knows how to kick her opponent in the throat with her words. Awesome job as always.
I think Jay left at the best time, because it let us see this match. I think this turned out better, and Leaky has been increasingly better. I do think that Frost took this one though. His roleplays were more entertaining, and bringing more people into it definitely gave him a bit of an edge. Leaky should have done the same, rather than just have it so Leaky's talking the whole time.He also gave us more of a set-up and let us visualize more of the actual promo. Good job Frost.
I'm going to definitely say Kryptt. Don't think this wasn't a decent match though, because it was, but I've always been a massive fan of Kryptt. His roleplays are always creative, and his vocabulary seems endless. The man is brilliant. Definitely on his way to the top. Alpha takes it.
Pretty decent matchup, and Bradford definitely has talent, but this one goes to Gypsy. I love her use of storylines as well as including the match. It's always been in the criteria, but not many people include the actual storylines. It makes for an incredible read, and she had just the right amount. She was killer towards Bradford with the dialogue as well.
This storyline was definitely interesting, but odd because all rps for the match were in a thread. Pyretta gets the win though, because she simply put more effort into her rps, and gave us more.
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Judge 3 cont'd Andrew's rps didn't mention the battle royal. I guess Chilly won then. Taio has potential and if he put his best foot forward, he might have done a better job. Misery wins before his effort..
As for the womens battle royal, I do think Mickayla took that one. Whisper did awesome with her dialogue, but that's all she gave us. Ciara did an awesome job. She gave us good dialogue, as well as someone else in her rp. It wasn't just her in front of the camera. Makayla took it a step further though, and had these two combined. She had an awesome scene setting, great dialogue, as well as someone else in her roleplay. The three of them put on a good showing, and I can see the Empress will be one that the ladies will be fightin' over. |
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June 4 - Main Event -
Kevin Sane© vs Drew Stevensonw/Zoey Rose
BUD Heavyweight Championship
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Backstory: The biggest match of the night and hopefully it doesn't turn out like last month's fiasco. With Kevin Sane coming in as the Champ and Drew Stevenson just losing the Franchise title to Misery. Who knows what kind of mentality Drew is in. We will see it tonight. Drew Stevenson wins why? Because I was very impressed with him after a long time being away from the ring. He has brought his game showing why he should be a world champion. - Match 7 - Karime Atora vs White Trash© Stips: Bytch Championship Bout
Backstory: White Trash took Rosie Razorblade out of commission for this ppv, but she still has to defend her belt. With the all female ppv just weeks away, who will come out as the bytch champion and walk in to Battle of the Bytches as the Top Bytch in BUD to face the number 1 contendor, Rosie Razorblade? Aaron: White Trash, she impressed me more than I thought she would. I was like wow, but so did Karime. However I was more intereted in the whole thing brought tothe table by White Trash more is why i voted for her. - Match 6 - Jake Frost vs Leaky Format© BUDvision Championship Bout Leaky, seemed to keep my attention more...I am impressed on himself being gone a while, yet he is coming back with a fire under his ass. Jake, didnt do a bad job, but I found Leaky to be a more worthy Budvisions title holder. Stips: Waterfalls Match - Inside a fiber glass, the BUDvision championship will be suspended fifteen feet in the air. To win you have to climb the ladder and unhook. Every five minutes water will fall inside the structure and each time it falls it will get hotter.
Backstory: - Match 5 - Syck vs Kryptt
Stips: Regular Bout
Backstory: The final of the team that lost during the Lethal Lottery style match. Syck blames Kryptt for not being there in the first round. Kryptt puts the blame on Syck for losing the second round. Now we have a 7 foot angry Alpha monster about to beat the Omega. Kryptt, you see it takes alot to do a certain thing with any kind of character. But I see when i look at him, something I havent seen in a long time , confidence. - Match 4 - Andrew Bradford vs Gypsy Stips: Number 1 Contendorship for Franchise Championship
Backstory: Andrew impressed everyone by being a tough competitor. Gypsy, just loves to fuck. Tonight, they will go after a shot at the Franchise title. Gypsy hands down, she may love to fuck, but this time the fucking she gave wasnt the nice kind. Was very interested in what I saw. - Match 3 - Taio vs Misery©
Stips: Non-Title Bout
If you really need an explination on this your crazy. Taio? Who? What? Oh nevermind....I choose Misery, only because Misery was willing to bring himself that night, and show why he wanted to win this match. - Match 2 - Pyretta Blaze vs Joachim
Stips: Blood Manor Duel of Death: The rules to this match is that they fight to the death inside BLOOD MANOR. Joachim must die if he loses.
This one was just a bit wierd for me, but ill choose Pyretta. Why? Because I was a little worried when, Joachim pulled off his shots on her, but yeah the flame princess pulls it off. - Match 1 - El Lunatico vs Captain Anarchy
Stips: Broken Glass/Barbwire Bout
THC Championship Bout
Backstory: Battle of the Extreme Luchadores. Both have been at each other's throats since they got here and both have something to prove and that is the toughest luchadore in BUD. Who will come out flying victorious as the winner. These sound like names from a cartoon series....winner El Lunatico why? Well when you throw these guys in a match its like a funny episode of a nickelodeon cartoon. Was more impressed with the champion however with the skills he showed.
- Dark Matches - Eris vs Summer Stratus Did either of them show? Not on my watch Battle Royal for the GWE Midwest Heavyweight Championship | Sayten
The Full Bloody Italian
Jakobie O'Connor
Pyro
Lord Chaos
The Extremist
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Chilly | Battle Royal for the GWE Empress Championship | The Cheerleader
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Ciara Cage
Mickayla Miller | THE WINNER IS Whisper
| I chose Whisper, only because she was very to the point, and was very educated in her findings witheach of her competitors. Therefore, her being the winner in my eyes. |
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Judge 5 - Main Event -
Kevin Sane© vs Drew Stevensonw/Zoey Rose
BUD Heavyweight Championship
I loved Drew's rps I thought they were to the point and good. - Match 7 - Karime Atora vs White Trash© I thought this was an awesome match. I was very surprised by Karime she did a kick ass job. But White trashes stuff was just above. - Match 6 - Jake Frost vs Leaky Format© BUDvision Championship Bout Waterfalls match wtf? Jake frost was very entertaining but leaky did a good job - Match 5 - Syck vs Kryptt
While both guys did a good job I thought Krypt just did a little bit of a better job. - Match 4 - Andrew Bradford vs Gypsy I had issues reading Andrews stuff so Gypsy wins. - Match 3 - Taio vs Misery©
Stips: Non-Title Bout
If you really need an explination on this your crazy. - Match 2 - Pyretta Blaze vs Joachim
winner no one im lost. - Match 1 - El Lunatico vs Captain Anarchy Stips: Broken Glass/Barbwire Bout THC Championship Bout Lol This was funny I like both characters but I think lunatico did a better job, - Dark Matches - Eris vs Summer Stratus Battle Royal for the GWE Midwest Heavyweight Championship | Sayten
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Mickayla Miller | I loved her rp and thought it was very interesting and I loved all of the fire. It was good and creative. |
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Kevin Sane© vs Drew Stevensonw/Zoey Rose
BUD Heavyweight Championship
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Backstory: The biggest match of the night and hopefully it doesn't turn out like last month's fiasco. With Kevin Sane coming in as the Champ and Drew Stevenson just losing the Franchise title to Misery. Who knows what kind of mentality Drew is in. We will see it tonight. Judge 1: I believe Drew should win his match because I think he did a great job of being consistent with his details as well as creativity. He made the roleplays flow as always with his attention to spelling and grammar. He gave plenty of time to the deadlines as well. Judge 2: I couldn't really understand all the rave reviews for Drew's work because to me it was nowhere near the stuff he has put out in the past. Drew seems to be slacking a lot lately. Maybe he was slacking in this match for some purpose, but those rps he did were good but not to the par you expect from him. I can see doing something with I have won all the titles here and I'm not appreciated bit or something about his talent being overlooked...Everyone either loves or hates the cocky bad guy so hopefully he is sticking with that idea. Sane is a money player when it comes to rping, sometimes I have to stop and go huh? Like last week with his big defense to that not being me by saying we don't got the same color hair against Kryptt...That was pretty weak and seemed kind of like first time rper logic, but then he will come out with some solid stuff that just amazes you...Four rps total for a heavyweight title match is kind of weak ,but I guess it is what it is and Kevin Sane was better this time. Judge 3: First, I'd like to say that I expected both from both men, but I understand with time restraints and whatnot. I'd also like to add that I'm a big grammer mark, and I think it should play a big part in judging. This whole thing is to judge who the better writer is, and if you don't have good grammer, then you'll lose. I think Sane gets a little carried away sometimes with the "..." which is terribly annoying. Though Sane did give more dialogue, at times it felt as if he was doing it just for the word count. Stevenson's rps were a little more reserved, but it was evident that he had a point and didn't need a million words to prove it. I always say that you can't have a good rp, tell a good story, without a certain amount of words. However, too much can throw you off. I do think Sane did awesome as well, but I'm going to have to give it to Drew Stevenson. Judge 4: Drew Stevenson wins why? Because I was very impressed with him after a long time being away from the ring. He has brought his game showing why he should be a world champion. Judge 5: I loved Drew's rps, I thought they were to the point and good.
Winner: Drew Stevenson - Match 7 - Karime Atora vs White Trash© Stips: Bytch Championship Bout
Backstory: White Trash took Rosie Razorblade out of commission for this ppv, but she still has to defend her belt. With the all female ppv just weeks away, who will come out as the bytch champion and walk in to Battle of the Bytches as the Top Bytch in BUD to face the number 1 contendor, Rosie Razorblade? Judge 1: I believe White Trash should win her match because first of all she was much more realistic with her roleplays then Karime was. White Trash has an originality to her roleplays as well as her details for writing them. Judge 2: White Trash had to finally step up in a match and I think she did that. Karime is one of those girls that I think could take that Bytch title and keep it for awhile, she has an interesting gimmick even though I don't really get into that witches and warlocks kind of mumbo jumbo her stuff is still a very good read. WT has gotta be setting a record for holding that title and I gotta sing a little hillbilly music...I like my women a little on the trashy side.. Judge 3: I'm wondering what happened to Rosie, cause that would have been a good match. Not that this wasn't, because it exceeded my expecation. I am going to have to give it to White Trash though. Her rps definitely flowed better, and she always knows how to kick her opponent in the throat with her words. Awesome job as always. Judge 4: White Trash, she impressed me more than I thought she would. I was like wow, but so did Karime. However I was more intereted in the whole thing brought to the table by White Trash more is why i voted for her. Judge 5: I thought this was an awesome match. I was very surprised by Karime she did a kick ass job. But White trashes stuff was just above.
Winner: White Trash - Match 6 - Jake Frost vs Leaky Format© BUDvision Championship Bout Stips: Waterfalls Match - Inside a fiber glass, the BUDvision championship will be suspended fifteen feet in the air. To win you have to climb the ladder and unhook. Every five minutes water will fall inside the structure and each time it falls it will get hotter.
Backstory: Judge 1: I believe Jake Frost should win this one because I enjoyed reading his roleplays. He did a great job on providing details as well as he involves others and storylines in the rps.
Judge 2: I have always been one of those that would make fun of Leaky in a heartbeat and can remember when more of his rps were just songs with like three lines of nonsense thrown in. He can take it for what it is but to me he was literally one of the worst rpers that I had ever seen , but that just goes to show everyone that if you are willing to stick with it and willing to evolve then you can actually become a solid rper. Some of the stuff he says still confuses me, but he is probably on of those top 10 , top five people now. Leaky Format gets this. Frosty just didn't seem to have his focus in the rping world this week and it was kind of a bummer because I was interested in seeing this match.
Judge 3: I think Jay left at the best time, because it let us see this match. I think this turned out better, and Leaky has been increasingly better. I do think that Jake Frost took this one though. His roleplays were more entertaining, and bringing more people into it definitely gave him a bit of an edge. Leaky should have done the same, rather than just have it so Leaky's talking the whole time.He also gave us more of a set-up and let us visualize more of the actual promo. Good job Frost. Judge 4: Leaky, seemed to keep my attention more...I am impressed on himself being gone a while, yet he is coming back with a fire under his ass. Jake, didnt do a bad job, but I found Leaky Format to be a more worthy Budvisions title holder. Judge 5: Waterfalls match wtf? Jake frost was very entertaining but Leaky Format did a good job.
Winner: Leaky Format Syck vs Kryptt
Stips: Regular Bout
Backstory: The final of the team that lost during the Lethal Lottery style match. Syck blames Kryptt for not being there in the first round. Kryptt puts the blame on Syck for losing the second round. Now we have a 7 foot angry Alpha monster about to beat the Omega. Judge 1: I believe Kryptt should win this one because it appears to me as if he tried more and really wanted this more then Syck. He paid more attention to detail as well as the flow and appearance of his roleplay seemed more thought out. Judge 2: I was calling this the match of the night when I first seen it on the card, but once against I discover when you do that it is usually a let down. I guess Syck got occupied with other things and just couldn't devote anymore time to this one. Kryptt wins.
Judge 3: I'm going to definitely say Kryptt. Don't think this wasn't a decent match though, because it was, but I've always been a massive fan of Kryptt. His roleplays are always creative, and his vocabulary seems endless. The man is brilliant. Definitely on his way to the top. Alpha takes it. Judge 4: Kryptt, you see it takes alot to do a certain thing with any kind of character. But I see when i look at him, something I havent seen in a long time , confidence. Judge 5: While both guys did a good job I thought Krypt just did a little bit of a better job. Winner: Kryptt - Match 4 - Andrew Bradford vs Gypsy Stips: Number 1 Contendorship for Franchise Championship
Backstory: Andrew impressed everyone by being a tough competitor. Gypsy, just loves to fuck. Tonight, they will go after a shot at the Franchise title. Judge 1: I believe Gypsy should win this because hands down the girl kicked ass on this. She did everything she should have to win this match. She used details, other storylines, character, grammer and spelling as well as good attention to time. Judge 2: I am all for making fun of someone's name and I do it quite often in my own rps, but this really did seem like a rehash of what Micky did against Gypsy and if it didn't work the first time it wasn't going to work the second time. Gypsy wins. Judge 3: Pretty decent matchup, and Bradford definitely has talent, but this one goes to Gypsy. I love her use of storylines as well as including the match. It's always been in the criteria, but not many people include the actual storylines. It makes for an incredible read, and she had just the right amount. She was killer towards Bradford with the dialogue as well.
Judge 4: Gypsy hands down, she may love to fuck, but this time the fucking she gave wasnt the nice kind. Was very interested in what I saw. Judge 5: I had issues reading Andrews stuff so Gypsy wins. Winner: Gypsy - Match 3 - Taio vs Misery©
Stips: Non-Title Bout
Backstory: Taio... losing is not good. You are just a match away from being put in House Shows on Thursdays in Chicago. If you do not defeat the man that just defeated Drew Stevenson on Hangover for the Franchise title, then we will have no choice but to send you packing back to Chicago. Andrew hopes you say hello to Trish Dominique for him, that's his friend. Judge 1: I believe Misery should win this because he put way more thought and effort into it then Taio did. I just didn;t get much out of Taio's and I think it may be because of time.
Judge 2: Taio made a cursory effort and that just isn't enough against someone like Misery. Taio reminds me a lot of Akmed and no not in that tub of goo kind of way, Akmed always seemed like he had a talent for rping but he just never wanted to focus and that is what is seems like with Taio, he probably could be one of the top five people in BUD if he would just focus. Misery wins.
Judge 3: Taio has potential and if he put his best foot forward, he might have done a better job. Misery wins before his effort.. Judge 4: Taio? Who? What? Oh nevermind....I choose Misery, only because Misery was willing to bring himself that night, and show why he wanted to win this match. Winner: Misery - Match 2 - Pyretta Blaze vs Joachim
Stips: Blood Manor Duel of Death: The rules to this match is that they fight to the death inside BLOOD MANOR. Joachim must die if he loses.
Backstory: Two nights after Midnight and Ravyn Crow were found dead, the list of suspects went to the top of the list. Pyretta Blaze, Midnight's first cousin, believed that it was Karime Atora who finished them off and planted the suicide note making the entire world believe that a Chris Benoit was pulled. Now seeking retribution for her family, Pyretta will stop at nothing to make sure Karime Atora goes down in infamy. But a twist to this entire story just hit when Joachim announced to the entire world that it was him who murdered The Crows. Now in an attempt at Retribution, Pyretta has vowed to destroy and kill off Joachim for what he has done. Judge 1: This storyline was definitely interesting, but odd because all rps for the match were in a thread. Pyretta gets the win though, because she simply put more effort into her rps, and gave us more. Judge 2: This one was just a bit wierd for me, but ill choose Pyretta. Why? Because I was a little worried when, Joachim pulled off his shots on her, but yeah the flame princess pulls it off. Winner: Pyretta - Match 1 - El Lunatico vs Captain Anarchy
Stips: Broken Glass/Barbwire Bout
THC Championship Bout
Backstory: Battle of the Extreme Luchadores. Both have been at each other's throats since they got here and both have something to prove and that is the toughest luchadore in BUD. Who will come out flying victorious as the winner. Winner: Captain Anarchy
Battle Royal for the GWE Midwest Heavyweight Championship Sayten
The Full Bloody Italian
Jakobie O'Connor
Pyro
Lord Chaos
The Extremist
Andrew Underwood
Chilly Winner: Chilly Battle Royal for the GWE Empress Championship The Cheerleader
Jinx
Simply Amazing
One Deadly Bitch
Laylah
Whisper
Ciara Cage
Mickayla Miller Judge 1: Mickayla Miller, I hate how you scrunch everything together and really wish you would like separate it out some when you are talking in between actions but it was a good rp. Ciara seemed like she was going somewhere with hers and just stopped and Whispy just showed for the one and evidently got busy or lost interest. Judge 2: I chose Whisper, only because she was very to the point, and was very educate in her findings with each of her competitors. Therefore, her being the winner in my eyes. Judge 3: I do think Mickayla Miller took that one. Whisper did awesome with her dialogue, but that's all she gave us. Ciara did an awesome job. She gave us good dialogue, as well as someone else in her rp. It wasn't just her in front of the camera. Makayla took it a step further though, and had these two combined. She had an awesome scene setting, great dialogue, as well as someone else in her roleplay. The three of them put on a good showing, and I can see the Empress will be one that the ladies will be fightin' over. Judge 4: Mickayla Miller, I loved her rp and thought it was very interesting and I loved all of the fire. It was good and creative. Winner: Mickayla Miller |
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