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| | From: _§y©k_ (Original Message) | Sent: 7/8/2008 1:29 AM |
- Main Event - Misery vs Mark Riggs Stips: - Regular Bout Backstory: - Round 2 MOD Winner: - Match 6 - Syck vs Adam Arana (eWa) Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD Winner: - Match 5 - Angelina Santana vs Trish Dominique Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Non-tourney Canceled - Match 4 - Whysper vs Andrew Bradford Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Non-tourney Canceled - Match 3 - Kryptt vs Lylah McQueen Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD Winner: Lylah McQueen - Match 2 - BreAnna Black vs Karime Atora Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD Winner: - Match 1 - Image Johnson vs Jezzabel (PSW) Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD - Since Chase Johnson and Jack Parker didn't show for their match, Whisper needs an opponent. Winner: - Dark Match- Jade Gellar vs Ciara Cage Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Winner: Ciara Cage - Dark Match- Claudia Zachera vs Esther Parker Stips: Regular Bout Canceled |
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| | From: _§y©k_ | Sent: 7/8/2008 4:35 AM |
- Main Event - Misery vs Mark Riggs Stips: - Regular Bout Backstory: - Round 2 MOD Winner: Mark Riggs looked like he could become that one guy from the outside of Bud to really move along in the rounds, but then he got sloppy or busy or just loss interest..Whatever happened he wasn't up on his game for the Mime from Hell and if you aren't Misery will put you away. - Match 6 - Syck vs Adam Arana (eWa) Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD Winner: Syck - Match 5 - Angelina Santana vs Trish Dominique Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Non-tourney Canceled - Match 4 - Whysper vs Andrew Bradford Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Non-tourney Canceled - Match 3 - Kryptt vs Lylah McQueen Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD Winner: Lylah McQueen - Match 2 - BreAnna Black vs Karime Atora Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD Karime is a great character in that she does interest me more then what Blaze Inferno ever did. I think you have found a good character now that you can build upon but I think you hit that proverbial brick wall that we all seem to hit as rpers, you come out firing both barrels when you got a new character , you want to impress everyone and get your story told which you did a really good job of but I think you needed to pace yourself a little more, after your fights with Trashy and such you had just put so much into the girl that you have started to falter and lose some focus which is ironically what you were saying against Bre. The verdict is still out on Bre at the moment, she feels to much like Nikki in ways and not enough like someone different. I think I would emphasize how different she is from Nikki by perhaps doing something against the kinfolk on Nikki's ranch or being overly violent towards someone or even like going to an Indian Reservation and beating up some squaws or something...Ya know take what everything was that Nikki stood for and bash it some...Show that this is the Black Heart of the Black Family...I think Karime has a lot of potential to win gold and I know BreAnna does, but to me Bre just edged her out because Karime was running on an empty tank. Winner: BreAnna Black - Match 1 - Image Johnson vs Jezzabel (PSW) Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Round 2 of MOD - Since Chase Johnson and Jack Parker didn't show for their match, Whisper needs an opponent. I don't know if I like what feels like an Undertaker with a sex change gimmick but it is pretty obvious that Image just don't have the time to rp anymore. In the past I think some of the stuff Jezzy said would have had Image frothing at the mouth to reply and rip her for it. Like saying she was just a valet that had only been in a few matches here and there when in fact Image has held women's gold just about everywhere she has been. That told me that Image just didn't have the time but don't get me wrong Jezzy stuff was good and definitely winning material, but if I could suggest a few things to her as she moves on in this tourney..First I would stop bolding everything it seriously is kind of equal to as if you were writing your papers for college or whatever in crayon and then surprised you got a bad grade. Second I would tone down the layout a little bit, you are a helluva writer and don't need fifty trons, and all this flashing stuff going on all around the actual important part of the rp...Your words. I know people love that stuff and I have been guilty of using a few of those things myself, but I seriously would consider maybe limiting to say like two at the top or maybe one at the bottom..Maybe do away with the Lita things since you aren't using her face anyway and just do your phoenix trons and perhaps do away with the walking ass girl, even though I do enjoy a good ass even animation wise..Just don't take so much attention away from your stuff. Image tried but she just didn't have it and I look forward to seeing more of Jezzy in the next round. Winner: Jezzabel (PSW) - Dark Match- Jade Gellar vs Ciara Cage Stips: Regular Bout Backstory: Winner: Ciara Cage - Dark Match- Claudia Zachera vs Esther Parker Stips: Regular Bout Canceled |
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