i went back and forth with this, six
literally!
i wanted to see if you possibly posted this AFTER i posted little suns
and you did
and you wrote this
spur of the moment you pressed Reply,
didn't you?
it started out gangbusters...
cold, dark but can you smile
bright, dark oh please stay awhile (and this is where you start rhyming to hear yourself rhyme!
and you sounded sing-songy
eeeeeeeW... not meant to dig... just being critical, i was just critical with a siggie that gothic made for me... but done nicely..... i don't know why i was so languageStrong with you... >kiss< please forgive?
but, in all honesty here... not one of your golden pieces!
how about i play?
Oh winter sun
cold, dark
oh, can frozen smile
oh winter sun
bright, dark
oh please stay awhile
oh winter sun
blanket warmth, blustery cold
oh wind blow denial
oh winter sun
crisp, brisk
oh melt your worthwhile
oh winter sun
come, come
oh winter sun
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