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General : His Bite Is Worse Than His Bark (OT)
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From: MSN NicknameSirMarJerAvon  (Original Message)Sent: 8/10/2004 3:13 AM
(ooc: This thread is introducing a new character that I am creating. It is open to anyone to join in. Also I have left the description of the young woman alone as I invite anyone who might want to take on that character to do so. Otherwise, I will attempt to play her as well. I will do the henchman as he will be pretty much a NPC type)

Tremont hated it when people chose the hard way to do things. He had been so polite in trying to get the old couple to sell their huge farmhouse to him. Tremont had even given them a fair offer - they should have been thankful for that since Tremont usually got what he wanted for cheaper.
But the old couple blabbered on and on about how they had lived there for 55 years. Despite Tremont's attempts to scare them out by regaling them with tales of undead armies and a 'curse' on Elmshade, the couple refused to budge. So Tremont had to resort to Plan B - kill them.
As Tremont looked at the two corpses, who he had dispatched pretty bloodless with a snap of their necks, he was joined by the other two people in his party.
"Trey, darling, did you have to kill them? They probably didn't have much more life for them to enjoy," said a young woman.
"My sweetness, I only do what I have to do," Tremont said. "They refused my generous offer to move and there was no other choice. Reginald, bring the wagon up front. We'll have to load these bodies on the wagon and then you know what you must do with them."
"Yes, master, leave it to me," the thin servant said. "Nobody will ever find a trace of these two. Let me be the first to congratulate you on the 'purchase' of your new home for you and your bride."
"Enough talk for now," Tremont said. "Get to the business at hand so we don't have any problems of nosy neighbors checking in."
Reginald left to go move the wagon to the front of the farmhouse.

Tremont Montana III considered himself an opportunist, making real estate deals and other such purchases when the odds were stacked in his favor. He was ruthless at cleaning up on others' misfortunes. Tremont was notorious for doing whatever it takes to get what he was after.
Looking at the man, one would suspect that he was in his 40s. Tremont had wavy black hair, clean-shavened, and blue eyes that seemed to pierce your very soul. He stood about 6'5 in height and had some muscles on him. Tremont always preferred to be sharp in dress so he usually was attired in a customized suit with vest and tie.
Of course, his only mistake - which Tremont will deny was a mistake - was becoming obsessed with making it big. A promise made in a tavern led to an awakening of sorts in a dark alley. All Tremont received that night was a bite, which granted him immortal life. It was hard at first to get adjusted to the life of a vampire.
How he missed being able to walk out in the daylight, to see the blue skies above. But Tremont had met one of his kind, that had given him that life back. A potion that allowed Tremont to walk freely in the sun without being harmed. Not only was Tremont given several of these potions, he was instructed on how to make them.

Reginald re-entered the house and Tremont helped the servant load the two bodies iinto the back of the wagon. Tremont threw a tarp over the corpses and tied it securely down.
"Be quick about it but make sure it is a thorough job," Tremont said. "Also be careful that no one follows you or sees what you are doing. We will see you back here when you are finished."
"Don't worry, master, I have never failed you before," Reginald replied.
The servant hollered out to the horses and the wagon began to roll on down the road.
Tremont walked out back of the house to check out the barn. The old couple must have been fairly successful in their endeavors - Tremont found the barn to have a couple of cows, a pair of pigs and a plow horse. He was checking out the chicken coop when the mistress of the house joined him.
"Trey, will we be able to finally call this home and remain in one place?" she asked him.
"My dear, you know there is nothing more that I would rather do than to settle down and be able to live peacefully with you," Tremont said. "I can't guarantee that this will be it but we are going to give it the best effort to make it so. We just need to be careful and not draw attention to ourselves. And if what I heard is true, when that little village down the road is overcome by the undead, we won't have to worry about the living interrupting our plans."

Tremont had remembered the first time he had seen her. She was a mere 16, fresh and innocent. He was 24 and already quite successful. He had turned on his charms and engaged her in conversation. A walk down by the river was all Tremont needed.
He complimented her on her beauty and a wisdom beyond her age. He asked if he could give her a kiss and the blushing girl shyly nodded. Tremont kissed her gently on her full lips, then he moved to her neck. After some kisses on her soft neck, Tremont made her his for eternity.
At first, she was upset at him for taking away her innocence and life as she knew it. But she couldn't doubt that Tremont loved her. He gave her everything that she asked for and was never rude with her. Tremont never stayed angry with her long and the making up process was always a very loving time.
The only thing that Tremont could not give her was a permanent place to call home. But to his credit, he never stopped in his quest to give her that.

Reginald came back to the farmhouse near dusk. He parked the wagon in the back of the house. He pulled some crates off the back and carried them into the house.
"Dinner will be served in a half hour or so," Reginald informed the master and mistress of the house. "I have something suitable in mind to fix for a housewarming gift to the two of you."
Reginald excused himself to go into the kitchen to prepare the meal. Tremont took a decanter off the table and poured some wine into two glasses. He gave one to his bride and picked up the other one.
"Here's to a long prosperous and happy life in our new home," Tremont toasted.

 



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From: Hiel TroiyeSent: 8/12/2004 4:07 AM
((OOC:  Sorry for the ooc interruption.  I just needed to know if the farmhouse was ANYWHERE to the northeast of Elmshade.  Thanks.)) 

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From: MSN NicknameSirMarJerAvonSent: 8/12/2004 12:00 PM
(ooc: Hiel, I always assumed in my thinking that Elmshade was south of the farmhouse. So the farmhouse would be to the north of the village, east or west I never really plotted out. If there is something you wish to possibly tie into this, feel free to let me know. My email is [email protected]).

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From: MSN NicknameDaisetsu_HatakeyamaSent: 8/12/2004 10:27 PM

 

     Daisetsu looked down at the person on the ground, still hidden by shadowsm he wonders how this servant knew where he was then he remembered hearing something fluttering around earlier and he thought it must have been some kind of scout bird or something and keeps his sights on the servant on the ground still.  With a lightning quick reaction he pulls out a throwing knife from a strap on his thigh and throws it at the servant.  His aiming was perfect for it came close enough to him to make a deep cut on the servant's cheek and stick into the ground.  Daisetsu watched as the cut slowly opened up and had blood slide from his skin and he smiles to himself underneath his veil.

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From: MSN Nickname§ΐממếđ_₣ΩяىąкэמSent: 8/13/2004 3:45 AM
(ooc: SirMarJerAvon... If you like I can play the part of your bride... lol. If that is ok.. Just let me know when I can post. By the way the bride's name would be Avangelyne.)

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From: MSN NicknameSirMarJerAvonSent: 8/13/2004 4:38 AM
(ooc: That would be great, Si, and I really love the beautiful name you selected. You can go ahead and post anytime. Tremont and Avangelyne are awaiting dinner, being cooked by Reginald. If you wish, you can fast-forward it a bit, and either have them conversing over dinner or it could be after dinner. Whatever strikes your fancy...I've left all of the description of Avangelyne up to me so all of her physical attributes, personality traits, etc. is up to your creative mind. The only thing that I did mention specifically about her was how Tremont met her and made her his lovely vampiress bride. I didn't elaborate fully on it as it could be something that could be brought later in conversation or whatever. I look forward to roleplaying these characters with you and hope we can have some fun with it.)

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From: MSN Nickname§ΐממếđ_₣ΩяىąкэמSent: 8/14/2004 5:23 AM
Avangelyne toyed with her food... Thoughts of her past life invaded her mind like an annoying parasite. Before she met her beloved Tremont she had been destined to marry a rich and obnoxious merchant. The marriage of course was arranged by her parents, due to the fact that she was fickle and they grew weary of waiting for her choice of husbands. At that time she had no notions of getting married at all, prefering her freedom and her love of music. She had rebelled of course, but her mother made her feel really guilty by feigning illness and her father had locked her up in her room for two weeks. In the end, her thirst for freedom was great, and she had given in. Of course since her debutant year at the tender age of 15, suitors came banging on her door, but she was not interested in one of them. She had grown into a lovely 5'7 girl, with dark wavy tresses and a figure that would make a courtesan green with envy. Being saddled down with a man, serving his needs and helping with the family business would be like slavery.  Her dreams at the time was to perform on stage and to travel the world with her musical talents; the violin and her voice.
 
She was born Avangelyne Viviana Rosalba 21 years ago in a town that had canals as roads. So everyone traveled by boat to go place to place. She was the youngest of 5 children... As a matter of fact... She was an accident. By the time she was born all of her sisters and brothers were already married and lived quite far away. She didn't grow up with them and the rare times they came to visit, it was like meeting a stranger. Her parents both still worked at the time so she was taken care of by Nainai, her nanny. She was more like a mother to her than both her parents combined. So... it wasn't her family that was bothering her...
 
She looked up at Tremont and smiled, taking a sip from her goblet. They were of course in the dining area, having dinner by candle light. Her home and she loved it already. Excitement shone in her eyes and yet it seemed somewhat haunted. Softly she said, "Tremont?"

Ooc: blah lol.. I'm just a tad confused there. If you can clear things just a bit that would be appreciated.. So Tremont met his bride when he was 24... And now he looks like he's forty? I was under the impression vampires don't age lol... And if that is ok, I made it so that they have been together for 5 years?? I was going to make it less, but then it didn't make sense if she has been longing for a permanent home.. And one more thing?? I know some vampires can eat as humans do... Is that what they are doing? or having a meal that is suited for them? Sorry for the many questions.

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From: MSN NicknameSirMarJerAvonSent: 8/14/2004 4:56 PM
(ooc: Questions are good as it allows characters to be developed fuller. You are right in that vampires don't age in physical appearance...I think I was trying to convey that he's actually older than what he looks like but I worded it wrong (doh!). Also, five years together is a good number, I have no problem with that. And yes, they're eating regular food. I think that answers everything. If any more questions, don't hesitate to ask)

Tremont watched Avangelyne as she ate. He was mesmerized by her beauty, that was enhanced by the candlelight.
But her physical appearance wasn't the only thing that had attracted Tremont to her. She had a wisdom beyond her years as well as having a lot of dreams and aspirations she wished to fulfill. And Tremont enjoyed listening to Avangelyne play her violin...she poured a lot of passion into her playing.
Travelling from city to city had given Avangelyne a chance to perform on several stages but Tremont knew she truly desired a place that she could come home to. Looking at Avangelyne now, he could see that she appeared to be happy with the new surroundings.
She looked up at him and called his name softly.
"Yes, my love?" he replied, "I hope that dinner was to your liking."

 

 


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From: MSN Nickname§ΐממếđ_₣ΩяىąкэמSent: 8/16/2004 11:59 PM
Avangelyne smiled and lowered her lashes, she nodded and said, "Yes it is simply delicious. Reginald has outdone himself this time." She was quite pleased that for the first meal in their own home, it should be fitting that it was also the first meal she had ever dined with Tremont five years ago. They were having a roast spicy chicken with a delicate creamed butter sauce laced with cinnamon and paprika. Reginald didn't make the dish often as it took caring and patience. It was usually served on very special occasions and of course today was hopefully one of them. "My dear, I was wondering now that it seemed that we are here to stay, I was thinking about how we would keep ourselves busy." She laughed softly, her green eyes met Tremont's, for though it seemed they were always on the run for some reason or other.. The thought of doing as they wished was slightly overwhelming for her. She knew she wanted a permanent home to tend and to care for, but where to start? And she had never actually looked too far into the future of what would happen next when her dream became a reality.

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From: MSN NicknameSirMarJerAvonSent: 8/18/2004 2:30 AM
Tremont's blue eyes sparkled as he gazed into Avangelyne's eyes.
"When one becomes a home owner, one takes on more responsibilities," he said with a laugh. "For starters, the previous tenants seemed to be excellent farmers. So I think we will be able to do something with the animals and the land."
Tremont paused as he seemed to be thinking about their newly-created situation.
"I would imagine that you could probably find some place in town to play your violin, if it's your desire," he added. "I figure that I could dabble in the real estate business...I heard that this village was growing. And people do need a place to live."
He got up from his chair and moved behind Avangelyne. His strong hands massaged her shoulders and back.
Tremont leaned down and gave Avangelyne a passionate kiss on her neck.
"And if what I hear is true, an undead army will come to take over control of this village," Tremont said in a passionate tone. "I'm sure that once that happens, we might have more options."

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From: MSN Nickname§ΐממếđ_₣ΩяىąкэמSent: 8/18/2004 4:03 AM
Avangelyne gave a smile as she listened to her husband laugh. She loved the sound of it, and it makes her happy knowing that he was capable of doing so. She watched him as he got up and came round to her side, feeling one hand and then the other on her shoulders. As he started to massage them, she purred and moved her neck to one side, closing her eyes to the soothing sensation. "Mmmm.. That feels heavenly.." She opened her eyes and tilted her head to look up at Tremont, her face content and said, "Right now I do not feel the need to play the violin in front of people. Playing for you is enough. Enough to know that you enjoy it." Avangelyne lowers her head once more and continued, "And it pleases me." She gave a soft gasp as she felt his kiss, and shuddered for beat, for he had touched a particularly sensitive spot. She lifted her hands up and behind her so that they were wrapped around Tremont's neck. She turned her face towards his and nuzzled his cheek with her own. "Truly my lord?" She smiled then.. "I will do as you wish." She did not know what his intentions were, but whatever it is, she would follow him and ever be at his side, however she refused to push him for an answer. For she will know in due time.
 

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From: MSN NicknameSirMarJerAvonSent: 8/19/2004 4:08 AM
Tremont kept up his massage and smiled at the possibilities.
"I want you to be happy, my dear," he said. "I don't think we will be hurting for money so if you wish to play the violin just for me, that will be fine."
He stopped and knelt down at her side, taking her hands in his.
"You also know at any time, we could come up with a few extra servants to help around the farm," Tremont said. "But we must be discreet...any undue attention to us could result in us taking to the road again. For now, I feel we are safe and we can enjoy our home. And there's no one I would rather enjoy this with than you, my sweet Avangelyne.

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From: MSN NicknameHiel-Sent: 8/27/2004 4:48 AM
Location:  Newly Occupied Farmhouse North of Elmshade.
Outside the farmhouse and in the forest beyond the cleared lands, a MASS exodus or migration seemed to be taking place as large animals... Bears, deer, moose, wolves, cougars... those creatures of the wild not able to hide in the treetops or burrows under the ground passed ALL around the place of human habitation coming from the northeast and immediately heading south or west.  It was as if the animals were fleeing a forest fire... or something worse. 
March of the Undead

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From: MSN NicknameSirMarJerAvonSent: 9/4/2004 3:30 PM
Tremont turned away from his bride for a second as he felt something amiss.
"Excuse me, my dear, but I feel like there is something happening," he said as he got up from his chair.
He opened the door of the farmhouse and walked outside. Tremont took in the strange sight of the larger forest animals running in a mass exodus towards the south or the west.
Tremont looked towards the horizon to see if there was any smoke to suggest the migration was caused by a fire of some sorts. But he could not detect any smoke or fire.
"This is very strange," he thought to himself, wondering about these occurences. Then a smile crossed his face as a thought came into his head.
"Avangelyne!" Tremont shouted to the house. "Come quick, we must fly. I believe the beginning of the end has come...for the living."

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