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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHome  (Original Message)Sent: 11/5/2007 11:34 PM

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The Weaver

warp and weft of primary colours
weave simple lines
clean designs
art at its safest.

while i dig in my bag
searching for that
shade between shades
weighty heft of wool
that adds a subtlety

weaving a tale
creating colours
when others don't suffice
bleeding crimsonpurplegreen
beating yellowblueblack
old threads fade
absorbed into story's fabric
present

but not.

rich tapestry
wall sized and growing
needlework of bone
woolen tattoo
canvas of skin
stretched, dried, shrunken
worked
             ...woven.
 
jlh
24 october 2007


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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 11/6/2007 2:11 AM
Baseball in Motown!
 
Ah what a way to end just a crap week at work.  A great night at the ballfield...Tigers are on a roll, the Chi-Sox are in town, the sun is warm, and the beer is cold.  PLUS I scored some SWEET seats at a discount.  So...off to the game we go.  Traffic's not too bad, but the challenge is always finding parking anywhere near the stadium that you feel good about 1.  leaving your car there in the first place, 2. safely making it to and from the park, and 3. ever finding once you leave it, and 4. affording.
 
We're up to the challenge.  We drive as close as we dare to the stadium, and see the last $10 lot, and it looks fairly ok.  We pay, turn down the street, and realize that for the TEN dollar lot, you have to keep driving about 3 blocks off the main strip and park in this alley.  Nice.  Well, deciding to go ahead and park there, we encounter several iffy situations before getting back to the main drag.  All good, it's time for ball.
 
On the way into the park, there was a guy playing bongo drums and creating riffs about passers by for $.  Ahead of us by a couple of paces was a cute little blonde thang with her date:
 
"MMMMmmmmm look at her she's fine
Sure wish that she was mine
Yeah I really know I should
But I don't even dream that good..."  ROFL
 
Right.  Play ball please...
 
The seats were great, and the game started out great.  Unfortunately the pitching went straight down the toilet, and the Sox got a grand slam.  Nice thing to see, but better when it's the home team.  Anyhoo...paying $5 for a soda always makes me not so thirsty, but the sun was SHINING, and the wind was absent.  So...soon the fans get bored of watching the Tigers batting averages fall with every at bat, and some guys decide it's time to start the Wave.  Yay.  Of course, the disgruntled old man behind me and the drunk college students across the aisle were way into that.
Old Man:  "SIDDOWN!  SHYEAT UUUUUP!"
Drunk college students: "YOU OTTA GET A BRA TO HOLD THOSE MAN BOOBS STILL BEFORE YOU DO THIS..." 
Personally, I was feelin the love.
 
Saw some good fielding, some bad dancing during the breaks as fans tried to get the camera on them, and then the game was over.  Tigers came to within 3, but just couldn't pull it out.  In fact, they had a three stooges moment...the first baseman and second baseman both ran after a foul ball...both within catching distance of it...and both watched it drop between them.  The flabber of all the fans was definitely gasted.
Old Man:  "YOU SUCK!"
Drunk college students: "MY MOM HAS HER MITT...WANT A BREAK?"
Once more with the love...
 
So.  Game over.  Braving the crowds we walk back to the car.  This time, the guy 'guarding' the lot wasn't so nice...uttered a bit of a threat when we wisely didn't pull out our wallets to fork over a handout (nevermind we paid too much to park in a decrepit alley anyway)...so we hurried and left.  All was good...got home, had a good nights sleep...peeked out my window this morning...noticed a hubcap is gone.  Sigh.  I hope whoever took it got a meal or two out of it instead of a fleeting high...
 
You gotta love baseball...

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 11/6/2007 2:15 AM
 
Silkie
 
He plumbed watery depths
Environs not his own
Gasping, reaching
Heartbeat grows thunderous
One breath…is all…he needs�?/DIV>
 
From the depths she rises
Looking into his fading eyes
She sees an unfinished story.
 
Each tremor of his lips
Beckons her attention
Drawn, she meets him
Waves of wishes ripple toward her
 
Mouth touches mouth
Interanimation
Spirits rise
 
Breaking the surface
He breathes familiar air
Her face lost in moonglow
Her form a solid comfort
 
Waking on shore,
He aches
longs to breathe water
Wishes for her world
Once more.
 

8 July 2007
jlh

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From: MSN NicknameBellelettresSent: 11/7/2007 12:43 AM
Jen, your poems are gorgeous. One seems to be about pain, the other about ecstasy.
 
And your report of the game is vivid. You put us into the scene. Wide angle lens, but all parts of the picture in focus. <Sigh.> I wish I could write like that. My focuses are always so narrow.

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 11/7/2007 1:05 AM
Thank you Belle...I took to heart your editorial suggestions...I hope it communicates more powerfully...

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From: MSN NicknameBellelettresSent: 11/7/2007 11:26 AM
It does indeed communicate more powerfully.

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From: MSN NicknameblueeyedpupilSent: 11/7/2007 1:30 PM
i read the first poem and the baseball story the other day but failed to leave a comment on them. I really like the poem. The story was very vivid and knowing about parking at games i know trying to find a cheap lot. lol
 
I was surprised at the tales of fear when going from the parking lot to the game and the annoying attendant who greeted you when you returned to your car. I guess i sort of feel like you are slamming my town. I can honestly say i never feel this way in the city. Especially not in the area of the stadium which has a huge police presence.I guess i may have overreacted to that part of the story, you felt how you felt, and who am i to say you cant feel that way.
 
As for the hubcap, you looked out in the morning it was gone, but you assume it happened in the city, couldnt it just as well happened at your home.
 
I guess i shouldnt take it personally, i actually really liked your story very vivid and descriptive. I will try to keep more of an open mind in the future.

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From: MSN NicknameDee-ShowMeStateSent: 11/7/2007 1:33 PM
Love these Jen....and I can relate to the baseball one.  Reminds me of when we lived in Atlanta, Ga where the ball field wasn't in a nice place at all and you had to risk you life going from the car to the field and back and even wondered if the man you paid your $10.00 to was really the owner of the lot where you parked your car.    It wasn't so bad in Houston when the Astros played at the Astrodome as it was right off a major freeway, planty of parking and well secured but that building was old and the city built a new ball park...they named it Minute Maid Park in downtown Houston..... so we thought we'd give it a try...well no parking down there unless you are lucky to get a space on the street and if not if you park in one of the garages to the office buildings down there you WILL get towed so what do they want you to do?  Park at the old Astrodome and take a shuttle bus to downtown MinuteMaid Park.  Last time we ever went to a ball game while living there.  The only thing that did get me to take the shuttle bus again was when George Strait came to town.... I'd walk 10 miles just to see him. 

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From: MSN NicknameDee-ShowMeStateSent: 11/7/2007 1:35 PM
Blue.. have another cup of coffee this morning and don't take everything so personal. 

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 11/7/2007 2:27 PM
Blue...thanks for the other perspective.  I don't write to slam...I do find downtown Detroit an amazing mix of interesting exciting things and abject poverty.  Whenever I go there, I leave incredibly conflicted...not in a judgmental way...in a way that I regret that so many people live in such dire circumstances...and I wonder what one person can do to change that.
 
It hasn't stopped me from going...but one must pay attention...
 
Thanks for reading...J

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