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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHome  (Original Message)Sent: 2/18/2008 3:36 AM
at the bottom of the puddle
there's no storm
water--chill and thin
remains calm
 
looking up
through currents
torrents
torments
portents
 
a bubble of choice rises
released from questioning lips
 
jlh
14 july 2007


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From: MSN NicknameDee-ShowMeStateSent: 2/18/2008 6:11 PM
Very interesting.. 

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From: MSN Nickname_XerSent: 2/20/2008 7:39 PM
Very visual

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From: TheGryphonSent: 2/27/2008 7:14 PM
I really like this one, but I keep wanting to insert a "the" before "water."   My damaged brain seems to request that one tiny word to help me define the separation between the puddle and the water.....     Forgive me.....

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