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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHome  (Original Message)Sent: 2/23/2008 2:53 PM
 
Passing Storm
 
I close my eyes to feel�?/FONT>
 
Your fingertips gently not tracing my cheek
Your arms not bringing me close
You not tugging my hair as your hands don't slide down my spine
Your breath not giving me life as
Your lips don't touch mine
 
Clouds gather in the sky
Branches bend in the breeze
Blowing the clouds away�?/FONT>

...Away�?/FONT>

To the east the storm breaks
The far mountains drink my rain

While,
           eyes closed,

I thirst�?/FONT>
 
jlh


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From: MSN NicknameblueeyedpupilSent: 2/25/2008 1:25 AM
jen i love this one. the feelings of longing so well told.

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 2/25/2008 1:33 AM
Thanks Blue...this one is one of my personal favorites...

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From: MSN Nickname_XerSent: 2/25/2008 1:43 AM
Visceral comes immediately to mind. I would like to let my wife read this and see how she feels about it. Do you mind me sharing it with someone you don't know?

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 2/25/2008 1:59 AM
That's perfectly fine Xer!  A dream of mine is to publish...so a lot of people I don't know would be reading my poems!
 
Thank you...

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From: MSN Nickname_XerSent: 2/25/2008 7:16 AM
Following was the exchange between my wife and me:

Uh-huh. She’s good.

What did you think?

You are right. She’s a good writer.

Yeah, but how did it make you feel?

It touched me.

Did it remind you of me?

Yes. (grin)

That’s what I wanted to know. (grin)

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 2/25/2008 2:54 PM
 To you and your wife...thank you very much...I'm glad to know it moves someone else too...as I said before, it's one of my personal favorites...

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From: MSN Nickname_XerSent: 2/25/2008 11:06 PM

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From: MSN NicknamePikesPeak14110Sent: 2/26/2008 8:36 PM
What a twist not! Like an Albert Bierstadt painting.

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From: MSN NicknameneverCominHomeSent: 2/26/2008 10:46 PM
ooooooo *runs to google image*

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From: MSN NicknameBellelettresSent: 2/27/2008 12:33 AM
And another one!
 
I feel your longing.

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From: TheGryphonSent: 2/27/2008 12:42 AM
Fabulous! 

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