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From: MSN NicknameBetween_Lines_And_Verses  (Original Message)Sent: 3/17/2008 8:31 PM
 
It was a windy day on Hwy 302, leaves scattered on the asphalt. The rain pelted the windshield, making
it hard to see, as the wipers swiped. I wasn't going that fast, but I felt the rear tires slide. Wet leaves made
this road too slippery to drive on. As I slowed and approached a curve in the road, there she stood! She
was a pregnant woman, in her 30's, wearing a blue skirt. She also was wearing a white maternity top, with a
logo, I couldn't make out.
                                                                                                                                  
Before I could stop and help her, she turned and walked back into the woods. I didn't see a car any where,
and no houses near-by, as I drove on. But her sadness in her eyes tugged at me, as I tried to figure things out.
I should have stopped damn it, I should have offered her a ride. I slowed, and stopped, making a u-turn, as
I tried to remember where I had seen her.I stopped twice, but the third time I stopped, I was sure that this
was the place!
 
Yes! She had stood by that tall evergreen tree, because there is the large boulder, I remembered. I parked,
and got out, as bitter cold rain drops stung my face and neck. The chilly wind bit at my ears. I called out,
asking if she needed a ride to town, but there was no response. Just the rustling of wind through the trees
was heard. Then, to my relief, I heard her soft but frightened voice.
 
"Wait! Please don't leave, I’m so sad and need your help, please help me"? I still couldn't see her, but her
voice ached with desperation. I called back to her, "I am here, I won't leave, I promise. Please come out of
the woods"? To my relief, she stepped out from behind a tree, soaked to the skin. Instinctively, we went to
each other, and I took off my jacket and wrapped it around her as she hugged me. She was maybe 8-9
months pregnant, and I knew she needed a blanket.
 
But when I offered to get one out of my car, she cried, "No, just hold me"; and I felt her warm tears rolling
down my cheeks, mixing with my own. Between her tears and mine, we smiled, and I kissed her cheek, and
told her, she was going to be okay! She thanked me for stopping, for caring, and that I was the only one who
had stopped. I told her I was going to take her to the hospital, and she reluctantly pulled away from me, and
her sadness tore at my heart.
 
She looked down at the ground a moment, and then asked me my name? I told her my name was Raymond,
and she smiled a little smile, and whispered, her name was Marsha. Then she said there was only one thing that
I could do for her. She reached down, and put my hand in hers, turned, and led me deeper into the forest.
Then she stopped, and I didn't know why, at first, but then I saw it. It was her car, crumpled against a huge
cedar stump, over-grown with saplings, vines and wild black berries. I could see her body, slumped over the
steering wheel.
She turned to me, with tears in her eyes, and I wrapped my arms around her, as we cried. As I held her, I
whispered, "I am so sorry you died Marsha"! I felt her body tremble as she tried to speak. She asked me to
promise to tell the police where her car was, so that she could be buried proper, and I promised.
 
In a few minutes, she kissed my cheek, and thanked me for my kindness, and she took a few steps back,
and gave me a small wave good-bye. She whispered, "Thank you Raymond, I will never forget you"; and as
she disappeared, I watched my coat fall to the ground.
 
©2002 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)


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From: MSN Nicknamelozoley1Sent: 4/13/2008 5:11 PM
Thanks Raymond I like your writings

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From: MSN NicknameTrainmaster51Sent: 4/14/2008 5:19 PM
Thanks