Os I'm not a budding author or anything near it but when you do the rewrite will we get to see how some of these characters came to be where they are? I can see what they do and some of what they're capable of but I don't know why they do the things they do or how they arrived at that place in their lives to do it. I'm not even sure what it is that I'm looking for but possibly its background on some of the characters and since you asked the other question about the wife, have any of the key characters had to sacrifice something just to be a part of the Meddlers, say because the pull was stronger than any other attachment in an otherwise mundane and predictable life.
I can shut up and not ask questions if you like....