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From: MSN Nicknameladymars823  (Original Message)Sent: 10/30/2006 6:06 PM
-t- I absolutely love it.
Now, I am thinking of my own "home".
I agree, HOME is that special place in your heart, where treasured childhood memories reside forever.
A great story -t-


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From: MSN NicknameRebca767Sent: 10/30/2006 7:42 PM
T, I feel like crying.  You made me remember growing up on my grandparents' farm and how great it was.  God, I miss them and those carefree days of youth.  Yes, home is where those memories reside forever - in your heart.

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From: MSN NicknameCluelessone5Sent: 10/31/2006 12:39 AM
T. That is a great story and very well written. I also think Home is Memories in the mind which was formed while growing up and treasured forever in your heart and soul. I certainly don't know anything about writing a story, however I do know when I read a good story.

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From: MSN NicknameflyingtokwSent: 10/31/2006 12:52 AM
   -t-  I just read this and I have to say it made me think of memories that I haven't thought of in a long time.  You were able to grab my attention with the first sentence.  I wanted to keep reading because you were able to keep me wondering what happened.
I really enjoyed this story.  You made me want to know more.  Great Job
Jet

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From: MSN NicknamestarfilledwomanSent: 10/31/2006 12:55 AM
*Great story Titinta...I enjoyed reading it.
You are right!
Time waits for no man! It moves forward and you can never go back!!!
HOME is a special place in our hearts and it will be there as long as our hearts beat!
So in a way home is where the heart is.
 
*You asked so IMO you need to take your "big" word (entrepreneurial) out.
Common people won't understand it! They will be trying to figure out what it means instead of reading on in the story...lol!

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From: MSN NicknameAndrea26958Sent: 11/1/2006 2:57 PM
Beautifully written!  I love reading your stories!  One thing, could you expand on maybe a certain friend (name included) and tell a specific event from your childhood?  That's just a suggestion.  It's a wonderful story!  I am fortunate to be living right next door to where I grew up!

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