Yeah, what Ladymars said! Great job! Maybe a bit wordy in places, but that's just me... Truth be told, I'm a bit jealous. Wish my hubby were more like your's (big sigh)... (He is on my hitlist at the moment.)
Rebca, any areas in particular? You know, I'm up for suggestions. Puhleeeeeeze let me know. I will be tweeeeeeeeeeeeeeking all day today and maybe tomorrow and all verbiage need to GO! Btw, this is only the first draft!