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View the details of this row. 1/28/2007 10:51 PM 
That Last "Goodnight"
 
From the day of one's birth
There's no concept of time,one know's not where they're headed,nor what they'll leave behind
 
Their journey is but a brief one,with no guarantees in life
  From  the dawn of their beginning,
Til that last "goodnight"
 
Tis an existence
Of many hills and valleys,many lessons
for one's soul
Til that last "goodnight",a struggle,of which  one has no control 
 
Life is never fair,neither unfair
You should know,tis but a lesson for our spirit
Enabling us to grow
 
So rejoice with your hills,take your valleys with stride
Remember, life's a gift
Where  no guarantees abide
 
                  George A Bryant Jr.
               1/27/07       
           Copyright ©
MSN NicknameGroundhogTaxi5
View the details of this row. 1/24/2007 2:44 AM 
Mother Earth
Winds o'er the meadows,which bristles in the bright sunshine
          Wild flowers blowing,joining this beautifully windy chime
              New life is flourishing,a gorgously new creation
        Mother earth is so inspired,as we watch with great anticipation
        Though man has harmed her greatly,as for his selfish needs,he explores
           With disdain for her beauty,does he destroy
Whilst earth's climate is changing.
 
Man's damage is wide ranging,the profit he so desires
Burning his world,maybe much beyond repair
Can there be,but a new day dawning
Where man ,with all his "genus",in his faults, he may soon be drowning
When mother earth retaliates,man's fate  may be at stake
His world,he has so damaged
The ability to sustain life,mother earth may soon,be unable to manage.
 
                                  George A. Bryant Jr.
                            1/23/07
                            Copyright ©
 
tis only
 
MSN NicknameGroundhogTaxi5
View the details of this row. 1/15/2007 12:35 PM 
This Question of Life
 
This Question of life
A need of which,one must suffice
A longing,a seeking of knowledge
This quest by man
A need,he cannot admonish
 
Man's search for purpose
His need to know,the powers of life
From whence do they flow
 
Is there such a power
An all "knowing - being"
A great master plan,giving life meaning
 
As man has purged
Through the portals of time
A search,seeming futile
A life,he cannot define
 
Is this knowledge not his destiny
Is he not to know
This beauty of life
Of which,he has no control
 
I say,accept this great gift
Treasure it so
There may be but one chance
Of this,we may never know
 
                 George A.Bryant Jr.
                  1/15/07
                    01:47
                  Copyright ©
MSN NicknameGroundhogTaxi5
View the details of this row. 1/15/2007 10:49 AM 
All these poems are beautiful, THANK YOU BOTH.
MSN NicknameMaxine¹1
View the details of this row. 11/15/2006 10:36 PM 
 Death,A journey of life 
 
Death appears so ominous
An ending to a life,as we now know
The thoughts of it all passing
The earthly treasures,we adore
 
Yet,could it not be a new beginning
A new challenge for our soul
Another notch in our "belt" 
A new lesson,allowing us to grow
 
For life is but a stage
For our spirit to expand
To prepare us for death's journey
So vital to the soul of man
 
                   Auth: George A Bryant Jr.
                         November 13,2005      
                          Copyright ©
 
                 
                       
                            
MSN NicknameGroundhogTaxi5
View the details of this row. 10/12/2006 1:24 AM 
    Life's Lessons
 
When one embarks upon this journey of life
One shall, through out theyears, encounter much strife
The obstacles  will be many more,than one at times can bear
But the rewards will be plentiful,if one would, but not despair
 
Life is but a classroom for our souls to retrieve 
The many lessons in this world,our soul shall receive
And there shall be good,as well as the bad,as will the times we shall also be sad
Thus shall come the times upon which we may grieve
As well as the lessons of love,our souls shall so desperately need
 
We must accept this precious gift of life
As well, the lessons that shall accompany the strife
Tis lessons so important to ones's soul,as upon its journey,it must go
As it continues on its restless path,when our time on earth shall end ,at last
 
                                                    Author : George A Bryant Jr.
                                                              9/11/04
                                                         10:41pm EDT 
                                                          Copyright ©
MSN NicknameGroundhogTaxi5
View the details of this row. 9/29/2006 10:27 PM 
Ok,I'm not a poet or a wriiter but here goes!
                                                                 "The Legend of knott+ shott
 
Knott and Shott fought a duel,Knott was shot,and Shott was not..............it was better to be Shott then Knott!
MSN NicknameTheMysterian68
View the details of this row. 8/14/2006 7:58 PM 
What I'd Like From You!
 
 
 
I'd like you to be the final missing piece of my happiness that makes me feel complete! I'd like you to be there for all my tomorrows to come...to walk beside me, behind me or ahead of me when you know the way! I'd like you to accept me as I am... with all my imperfections. I'd like you to accept the fact that we won't always agree...that we will argue to prove a point! But I'd like you to know I didn't fight against you my darling, only for what I felt was right. I'd like you never to keep score as to who won, who lost, never hold anger.
 
I'd like you to show me once we have set aside a disagreement, that you still love me as much then...as you have in the past, and even more in the future. I'd like you to never turn your back to me when we lay in our bed, that you will never raise your hand in anger, or use words you know will crush my heart! I'd like you to be understand that sometimes I may feel blue, and that even I may not know why. Just be there to hold me and comfort me, and help me through it all. I'd like you to share your kisses, hugs, and the softly whispered "I love you darling" as often as you can...but I want it to be whispered sincerely, not because you feel you have too. I'd like to know that no matter what I may do wrong, you will be forgiving.
 
I'd like evening walks, walks in the rain, sunsets enjoyed best when we watch the velvet sun dip beyond the horizon as we kiss! I'd like you to show an interest in what I enjoy, what I am creative in. I'd like to hear your compliment now and then for what I have worked hard to do. It may seem unimportant to you, just a little thing I've done, but my love, to feel you noticed and took the time to notice means the world to me. I'd like you to take my breath away and fill our bedroom with my softest sighs because I give my love, my heart and my soul to only you!
 
I'd like you to surprise me now and then with a love note hidden where I least expect it, or flowers for no other purpose but to show me "I was on your mind"! I'd like you to be all you can be and I promise that if you fell short of success, not only would I understand, but my arms would be waiting to hold you! I'd like you to remember that we are a team...and that regardless of the challenge facing us, we face it as a team, never alone. I'd like most to know in my heart that you feel you chose the right person to love you, that no wall will come between us, that life truly does feel wonderful when we have someone special in our life. I'd like you to believe as I do, that a relationship is a reflection of the effort two people put into the life they share together.
 
© 2006 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)
 
MSN NicknameThe_Story_Teller2005
View the details of this row. 8/9/2006 4:40 AM 
The Things I Love The Most!
 
 
 
 
 
I love the way your kiss is gentle
the way your lips linger
I love the way your arms embrace
my body, as my heart races
 
I love the way your eyes wander
to all your favorite parts
Making me feel I am so much
more then I feel I am
 
I love the way we cuddle like two
spoons when we are in bed
And as I feel you kiss my back I
know I'll be in your dreams
 
I love the way you wake me up
and I love the way you smile
You smile with sure a playfulness
I too can't help but smile
 
I love the way you think of me and
it's almost like you can read my mind
Omg, the list could go on and on my
darling because you hold my heart
 
You hold my heart tenderly, and with
it you hold all of my dreams
I love it when we are passing each other
and you stop and whisper you love me
 
It is those three simple words that every
day in every way makes me believe in love
Because when two people share true love
they can pass each of life's tests
 
I want you to know my darling that in return
for all you have given me I promise this
I promise to try to be all you have dreamed
that I would become to you
 
© 2006 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)
MSN NicknameThe_Story_Teller2005
View the details of this row. 8/8/2006 3:19 PM 
It's Time To Cuddle!
 
 
 
 
When the mornings rays of daylight
peeked through the window
We got up to have breakfast and I
saw you peek outside the curtain
 
You waved at me hurriedly to come
and see what the storm left behind
I looked over your shoulder and I
held you in my arms lovingly
 
I kissed your neck so invitingly as
I whispered "come back to bed
Let's just stay in bed and love the
day away in each other's arms"
 
You turned around and smiled as
 I looked into love swept eyes
I have never felt like I was lost in
a lover's kiss before I kissed you
 
Hand in hand we walked back to
the bedroom as I heard you giggle
Perhaps it was the anticipation of
all my warm lips would share
 
Snuggled close under the sheet, we
kicked off the blankets
Inspite of the bitter cold outside we
were warm, content and happy
 
Love is meant to feel magical and
it's the affection shared between two
That replaces stress with a feeling
we mean the world to each other
 
© 2006 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)
MSN NicknameThe_Story_Teller2005
View the details of this row. 8/6/2006 8:05 PM 
I Still Get Lost In Your Eyes!
 
 
 
 
 
Whether I'm walking thru the door
at the end of a long day
Or walking into a room where I see
you sitting there, glancing up
 
I see your smile, and at that moment
as I look into your pretty eyes
I am lost withing your soul and I'm
making my way to your side
 
You've never had to ask to be hugged
to be touched or feel my kiss
Because I love you just as deeply now
as that first night we became one
 
You treat me with kindness and you've
never tried to become my boss
You listen, you compromise, you also
forgive me when I make mistakes
 
Everything wish I wish on a night full
of stars can be summed up easily
Just be kind to me, never let a problen
become a wedge between us
 
In return my love, I will never let you
feel that I've taken you for granted
In all I do each day I hope to let you
feel that our love is renewed
 
© 2006 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)
MSN NicknameThe_Story_Teller2005
View the details of this row. 8/5/2006 10:13 PM 
How Can I Express To You Darling?
 
 
How can I express in a poem or letter what it's like to make love to you? You
make that special moment as wonderful as firworks in the sky! Your touch is
 addictive, and with each stroke of your finger tips, with each lingering kiss
shared, I feel lost! Your eyes whisper everything I need to hear at that exact
moment. You make me fele wanted, desired, and I know that whether we
 are together or apart, I'm on your mind! You are my one sanctuary where
the stresses of the world are left behind.
 
You curl my toes my darling, and my hands instinctively reach for you! We are
as one heart, one body, one soul and the sweetest part of making love darling,
is drifting off to sleep in each other's arms. I have never had to beg once to be
touched, to be pleased, or just to be held as you rocked me in your arms. You
know what I need, and it is your unselfishness that makes love and every breath
I take worth taking. I could never express in a poem or a story all the delicious
 emotions or desires that swirl around within me when I am being held.
 
Though I don't say "I love you enough, sweetheart", but I say it countless times
to you with my smile, my eyes, my touch and my love swept kiss that hopes to
last forever. I feel blessed to know that it wasn't easy for you to take that
chance and let me in. In truth, I was as scared as you, not wanting to be set
up for disappointment.But you took your time and made me feel we were
taking "baby steps"...just fast enough for some reassurance that we were worth
the risk!
 
We've learned that neither of us have to be a boss! Neither has to control. We
can share this walk through life for all of our tomorrow's to come at each other's
side. And if you have to lead, or I have to walk ahead of you, neither of us is
 insecure or jealous. It is the team work partnership that offers you and I the
best that we can offer and share between each other. For that, I feel truly
blessed. You accept me for my faults and imperfections and you don't see them
as a reason to turn against me. In return I accept the same in you.
 
I can't look into a crystal ball my love and see how many tomorrows life has in
store for us. Seriously, I would be afraid to find out. I would rather believe we
have till the end of time, instead of learning the date you or I will pass away.
I want to focus on today, and make this day as memorable as possible. I want
to celebrate each new success or accomplishment you achieve. I want to
console you if you fall short of a goal. I want to wipe away a tear, and
reassure you that I still love you with all my heart.
 
If we lost everything tomorrow, and had nothing but the clothes on our back...
I would never leave you. We would struggle, every day I am sure, just to have
a bit of self-esteem, but when your eyes grew weary and it was time to sleep,
you would be held within my loving arms. I hope that day of hardship never
comes. Though the world has come to see that events like Hurricane katrina
can strike unexpectedly and sometimes, a couple has nothing left but each
other.
 
I can't waste my time worrying about the unexpected what if's that life can
suddenly spring onto us. Life is just too short. What I can do though...is to
make sure that you know you aren't alone...that what you say and feel has
worth! I will always look in your direction with that "Come and get me look"!
I will never pass you in the hallway without the need to squeeze you playfully.
I will never let a day go by without whispering you are all I have dream and
hope to find as my mate.
 
I will always be eager to release your sigh when the candles by our bed show
me the sparkle in your eyes. I want to know that I am who you dream of when
you sleep, and when we are apart. Never change my love...stay as loving, as
 compassionate and as forgiving as you are now. In return, I will do my best to
 continue to help you feel that through thick and thin, hard times and bad, that
 you are loved!
 
© 2006 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)
 
 
 
MSN NicknameThe_Story_Teller2005
View the details of this row. 7/30/2006 12:53 AM 
Your postings are beautiful Raymond, thanks again for sharingthem with us.
 
That's a lovely poem Phil, thanks for sharing it with us too.
Mysti_Moonlite
View the details of this row. 7/29/2006 1:40 PM 

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Heaven heaves a mighty sigh;

The great oaks bow and quake;

The ground billows into clouds

With the smell of hot and dry.

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Birds are forced into silence;

The impetuous clouds furiously lash on

Devouring everything in sight

And building a blinding wall.

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The sands before them flee;

Mouths and nostrils are choked.

The cry is out to beware--

The ground in anger rises!

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Nat Faul; 1974

Phil O. Bat
View the details of this row. 7/25/2006 6:37 PM 
Don't Just Say You Love Me!
 
 
Please don't tell me you love me
let me know through your smile
Let me feel I'm always welcome
to share what is on my mind

Let me hear the voice that makes
me smile, that makes me blush
Knowing that your arms are eager
to hold me, to caress me

Let your eyes tell me that you can
tell when I am feeling sad
Show me without words that you
will listen to what is on my mind

Let your fingers stroke my skin in
the most sensual of ways
Make me float on clouds of ectstacy
look at me with love swept eyes

In all you do, in all I feel just be kind
to me, Please I beg with all my heart
Because happiness must be my destiny
it must, I don't want to be alone

© 2006 Raymond Cook (All rights reserved)

MSN NicknameThe_Story_Teller2005