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Creative Writing : The unanswered question
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From: MSN Nickname©Froststorm  (Original Message)Sent: 8/27/2005 2:30 PM
The unanswered question
(Dedicated to our daughter Jaclyn
who has down syndrome
and is very special)
 
 
Her world consists of places
Unknown to our minds
Her children are dancing
invisible to our eyes
 
She's the star in a musical
To which our ears are deaf
She bows to a crowd
That we write off as imagination
 
But when tears fill my eyes
As greed and pain fills the world
Only she takes my hand
and says with open pure eyes
 
Daddy don't cry
It will be ok
 
They call her crazy
For living in her own world
But she sees true caring love
In a world full of hatred
 
Murder and greed prevail on this world
Intelligent professors lead us to darkness
High IQ politicians playing games with our lives
Leading the world to insanity
 
A question remains unanswered
In a slowly decaying world
No one can give the answer to
who really has the screwed mind
 
© Froststorm june 2005


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From: MSN NicknameDairylander753Sent: 9/2/2005 8:32 AM
so many truths written so eloquently. 
thank you for sharing your daughter's wisdom.

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From: MSN NicknameA-Rose-Without-ThornsSent: 9/2/2005 5:23 PM
Children with disablities have such a unique way of looking at this world. My oldest is functionally autistic. Although I was not allowed to see him, through friends, I found out he recieved an award for art and went to Washington DC. He was presented the award for his artwork, as I was told, by President Clinton. I would have never found out, except a cousin, who I was married the his family member, told me about the award.
 
One can never know where a child is going in life until they have arrived.
 
Look at Dr. Stephen Hawkings.
 
Beautiful rendition of a beautiful child with a unique look on life.
 
Hugs
JacLynn Rose

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From: 2manySent: 9/2/2005 11:41 PM
john, somehow i missed this one.  the world through the eyes of your daughter sounds so hopeful. i agree she has a wisdom others can only dream about.

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