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Member Poems© : the death man cometh
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From: MSN Nicknameramboferret  (Original Message)Sent: 2/2/2004 2:59 AM
 
     the death man cometh
     the death man follows me far and near
its not my happiness he wants its my tears
i used to think it was me he was after, because
he was always so close, when i was a little kid
he took my first little pet puppy before its time
i couldn't see him then but i could hear his laughter.
as i grew older he was ever so present, always taking
an aunt or an uncle or best friend. i have been in car
 wrecks, boat sinkings,burned down houses,and lots
of other freak accidents and walked away unscathed
while those around me did not, you took them Mr. death man
and left me to mourn there loss. as i went from a boy to
a man you made me become angry and not caring and
to not get close or to care for any one or thing, thinking
that in this way you could not hurt me. i became lonely
and bitter, joined the army and began volunteering for
dangerous assignments. but all you did was to make me
see what you could do to other people, how they could be
so cruel to each other and to see the suffering you could
cause on others, you Mr death man were always so close
yet out of my reach. then one night you came for me in
that jungle on that dark and humid night. i never will forget
your rancid breath or your glowing eyes, i dropped my weapons
to the ground and planted my feet firmly  and faced you
i was overwhelmed with a hatred for you, then a strange feeling came
over me i wasn't afraid of you any more. you weren't laughing any more
we stood there in the jungle that dark damp night and stared at each
other for what seemed like hours but was only seconds and you
went away, i don't fear you Mr death man i just despise you
you still try to come for me but you are the one who is afraid now
you still take things that are dear to me but you keep your distance
even tho i tried to get you to take me instead of my sandy i pleaded

and i begged you to take me instead but you took her and left me

again. be advised Mr death man i will not live forever, and when i die
death will be coming for you, Mr death man. 
 
kyle..


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From: MSN Nickname§hêwôlf�?/nobr>Sent: 2/3/2004 10:44 PM
WOW Thank you for sharing that Kyle !!