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Main Event \BUD Heavyweight Championship Battle Royal Phoenix Winterborn Menacide Drew Stevenson White Trash Jade Seifer Sin-Dee Writer: Damain WINNER: TBA - Match 9 - Faith Rivers vs. White Trash© Bytch Championship Writer: Ernie WINNER: FAITH RIVERS 1. Faith gave more revolving the match and the title where as Trash just kind of roleplayed. I was really hoping to see this match explode but unfortunately, it didn’t. 2. Unfortunantly, WT no-showed her title defense. Go her. Faith Rivers gets the title. 3. Well they only put out one a piece and White Trash’s had nothing to do with said match so Faith wins. - Match 8 - Jay Styles vs Roach BUDvision Championship Bout (DSL had to pull-out) Writer: Heather WINNER: JAY STYLES 1. This match was ok but I expected better. From the turnout however, I give it to Jay. He had more to say and focused on her more and she just kind of disappeared. Not bad but could have been better. 2. Jay says he posted three roleplays for KK, but in reality, he only did two considering the first was all about the Heavyweight title battle royal. While Roach labeled two roleplays as her first KK rp, so it seemed like there was a mixup here. Anyway, I've always like Roach, simply because her character is unique, and her roleplays intruging. Roach came out of the gate against DSL originally, but it was still a decent roleplay. Jay's first (really labeled his second) was heavier with the dialogue than Roach's but he also had more to go off of. On another note, Jay hardly ever gives any description, close to no narration whatsoever. It's always cost him points, and it'll cost him this time too. Roach's second easily overpowered Jay's second, and it's a done deal. Jay, get some narration, some description in there. Not everything is simply about dialogue and talking. Roach for BUDvision Champ. 3. I must say I like the Roach character, its definitely different to what you see normally on the fedding scene. It’s good to see Jay back as well. There were only a few from each on this, both didn’t really say much of anything really although I did highly like Roach’s line of "You will get beat by a girl and like it" or however it properly went, that was genius. It’s hard to pick a winner in this, but I have to go with Jay for this one, Roach however was damn close, and keep up the work you are awesome. 4. Jay styles - to be honest I felt the effort put out by both could have been a bit more forthcomming however I'm only here to judge on what I see. and what i see is Jay styles putting out a decent effort in one rp and a "clinching" effort in another. he wins it because there was really more there and i felt that although roaches rp was nicely done it was just a rehash of what styles said earlier. - Match 7 - Phoenix Winterborn vs. Leaky Format© GWE Championship Bout Writer: Jon WINNER: PHOENIX WINTERBORN 1. This match was a great start for the GWE strap and both did very well. Leaky came out with some pretty good stuff using the auto industry which was a solid idea but Phoenix seemed more like he wanted it. Both did good but I think that Phoenix was just better overall. 2. This actually turned out to be a pretty decent match, even though it was obvious who wanted it more. Phoenix posted several days before Leaky, and Leaky did a total of four roleplays in a matter of two days. So he already looked bad. Both put fowarth a good effort, despite Leaky blitzing with his rps. I think it comes down to the fact that Leaky tends to live in his own world, and think something make sense, when it really doesn't. I try to make sense of it, but I end of confused a lot of the time. Phoenix on the other hand, saw this, and poked fun at the fact that Leaky appeared not to know what he's talking about. Phoenix came off a lot more relaxed, and his roleplays grew in length as well as quality as time progressed. In the end I think Phoenix simply out did Leaky. Leaky knows how to post a good roleplay from time to time, this just wasn't one of those times. His ego got the better of him. 3. Firstly Phoenix may you please change your layout? The info boxes down the side makes me need to scroll through your role-plays and that, unfortunately annoys the shit out of me. Secondly, Leaky all the ways you move the text from middle to the side, slightly annoying too cause most times it makes no sense to me. Now that that’s out of the way let’s get on with you. You both kept things short and mostly to the point which I love. Obviously you have a history with each other the only problem is most the time I was confused with what was actually speech for Leaky, what was actions and what the stuff on the side was. Phoenix was centered he was easy to understand, for this match I am going with Phoenix. - Match 6 - Drew Stevenson vs Zarek Lyle© Bragging Rights Bout Writer: Keith WINNER: TBD - Match 5 - Gypsy© vs, Kit Black© Franchise Championship Rematch Bout Writer: Roxy WINNER: KIT BLACK 1. This was a very good match. I felt that both women really put on a great show and it was so close but Kit’s stuff was a tad more creative. I liked her ideas and everything but however, Gypsy countered Kit very well and thus really made her work for this one. This one was extremely close but I thought that Kit just had a better night. 2. Gypsy was the first to post, and it was obvious she didn't have much to go off of. It took Kit a bit longer to post, but she came out of the gate pretty good. She actually told a story. Kit's second was bloody brilliant. I love her creativity. It pwns. I've always said creativity should mean more than just a regular dialogue roleplay. It's the attention of the reader that you need. Gypsy's second was on the right track, and but not enough to take out Kit's combined two. Her third did a good job rebuttong as well. Gypsy's third was entertaining, which is surprising, because it also seemed rushed, judging by her 'one minute before the deadline' post, ha. Nice job to both, but Kit retains, well done. 3. This is what matches are made from, two people who get out there and work it. I loved both sets of role-plays you ladies placed out. You were both evenly matched and I love that you make it hard for a judge. It’s really hard to pick a winner here, you both done awesome given it was a title match too, and this actually can bring back a lower mid card title into glory which is totally awesome. Let’s start with Gypsy, your first role-play was more centered on your past within the last few months which is cool it shows the mind frame she has been in, what she needs, her desires her confusion ect the only problem is, for a match role-play I think you kept on it a little longer then you should have but you managed to come back to the point which is your match your title. I give you props for that not many people can make it work the way you did. You’re second you paid attention to your opponent, you managed to realize you needed to go one up on the blog to what not and it’s good to see the way you girls can counter each other. Now onto Kitt, you girl have skill, it’s not often you see someone new who can come in and not be so long winded with useless shit, you get to the point and I fell so in love with your opening piece, it just fit perfectly. Now I know there has to be a winner here, unfortunately I can’t pick it to be a tie, although I wish we could it would be awesome for BUD to have dial champions like in WWE where it was Chyna and Jericho, that was piss funny and I think in this case it actually would work. Anyways enough babble, I have to give it to Kitt, again both ladies were awesome, I really wish I could give it to both of you. Gypsy you done nothing wrong it was a matter of sitting down and really seeing which was at the time better and to me Kitt was focused as were you, but you were also focused on other stuff, however once again fucking awesome work the both of you. I would love to see the rematch too. - Match 4 - Jessica Stryker vs. Seraphim Bytch Contendership Writer: Heather WINNER: JESSICA STRYKER Seraphim didn’t show. - Match 3 - Kim Caine vs. Kamikaze Kabuki Dragon Regular Match Writer: Barb WINNER: KAMIKAZE KABUKI DRAGON Kim no showed. - Match 2 - Vanessa Zacchera vs. Jeffrina Michelle Drakeman Regular Bout Writer: WINNER: NO CONTEST Both no showed. - Match 1 - Claudia Zacchera vs. SinDee Regular Match Writer: Chelle WINNER: SINDEE Claudi didn’t show. - Opening - Matlock vs. Menacide Debut Match Writer: Damian WINNER: MENACIDE 1. I think Matlock could have done better but he at least showed up. The match was pretty good but Menacide just had his number, he came out much stronger verbally and really tore into him and Matlock countered pretty well but he wasn’t really into it as usual, unfortunately. 2. I hate to say it, but the winner should be obvious. I know it's stupid, but I kind of expected more from Matlock. Menacide kind of ripped him a new one before he even roleplayed. When he finally did roleplay, it definitely wasn't enough to put him over what Menacide already had going. So, Menacide for the win. 3. I must admit, I was surprised Matlock came back, what disappointed me was the one role-play he done. When he applies himself he can be fucking awesome but in this case he was just average this time around. His opponent didn’t really seem to do much better. His role-plays were alright but I got slightly lost on the second one. I know this has to go to someone so to me it’s Menacide who gets the win. His first role-play made me sit and want to read more, unfortunately his second left more to desire. For Matlock he just couldn’t come out and attack like he used too his role-play made me feel like Matlock himself was bored and forced to type it out. |
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Claudia vs SinDee We come back from the backstage action with Claudia already in the ring awaiting the arrival of SinDee. The fans and Claudia don’t have to wait long. The lights flicker and dim as smoke starts billowing out from around the stage. Pyro shoots off like lightning all over the arena causing some of the smaller children in attendance to jump and scream as the opening chords to "Open Up" hit the PA system. The camera pans around the crowd watching as they show their hatred for SinDee, a few people however hold up signs showing their love for her too. SinDee forgoes her normal entrance, giving Travis her jacket she bolts down the ramp and slides into the ring not even caring for the chorus of boo’s and hate she is receiving from most of the fans, however a few cheers bring a small smirk to her face. Lily: "Ladies and gentlemen the following match is a regular match introducing first from Hartford Connecticut weighing in at 127 pounds she is Claudia Zacchera." Claudia smirks and raises her arms for the fans as SinDee rolls her eyes Lily: "And her opponent hailing from Sin City and weighing in at 115 pounds she is The Original Sin�?SinDee!" Smirking SinDee looks down at Travis and winks before diving at Claudia, the bell rings as Lily quickly moves from the ring, the match underway. They start off on the canvas clawing and screaming attacking for dominance and it doesn’t take long for the ref to pull them apart, a feral SinDee in his grasp. With her distracted and abusing the life of the ref Claudia gets up and grabs SinDee face planting her into the canvas, she quickly moves into a pinning predicament but SinDee kicks out at one. She jumps to her feet, the pair circling each other with the intent to strike. Sin strikes first, a solid punch landing on Claudia’s face that sends her stumbling backwards, that’s when Sin strikes with a hard clothesline jumping back to her feet she stalks Claudia waiting for the right moment and as she gets to her feet Sin jumps onto her back locking in a sleeper hold. Claudia struggles trying to loosen the hold but SinDee just wraps her legs around her keeping her lock tight. Finally Claudia starts moving towards the turnbuckles and slams SinDee into them, she loosens her hold but doesn’t drop it until Claudia slams back a second time. Turning around and gasping for breath Claudia lands a hard chop to SinDee’s chest causing her to cry out and clutch the red mark, ripping her arm away Claudia lands a second and a third before grabbing SinDee and Irish-whipping her into the ring. Sin stops and turns only to be met with a drop kick to the face which causes her to fall down. Travis jumps up onto the apron trying to buy his wife some time. Claudia instantly heads over to Travis only to have him grab her and slam her throat first down onto the top rope. He jumps off as the ref turns acting sweet and innocent as Claudia holds her neck gasping and struggling for air. It was the distraction SinDee needed getting to her feet she grabs Claudia from behind landing a neck breaker before floating over into a pin but when his hand comes down for two SinDee breaks it and smirks a little. She pulls Claudia to her feet the pair throw insults at each other Claudia the first to react to getting called something that the mic couldn’t pick up and thankfully would have cost SinDee a fair amount in fines pulls her hand back and bitch slaps the hell out of SinDee who just stands there rubbing her cheek and laughing. Claudia does it again this time SinDee catches her wrist before she can connect and retaliates with a slap of her own and quickly takes Claudia down with a belly to belly suplex. Rolling over to her feet SinDee looks down and connects with an elbow to the middle of Claudia’s back which causes the diva to call out in pain. Smirking SinDee places her knee just where she landed her elbow and pulls back on Claudia’s shoulders making her scream louder. The ref moves into position asking if she wants to give up but Claudia refuses too. Finally SinDee drops the hold and moves quickly and swiftly to het feet grabbing Claudia she smirks and blows her a little kiss before getting into position for Damage Control, however Claudia manages to fall from her grasp and kick SinDee’s leg out from her. With her down Claudia pounces the pair once again rolling around the canvas in a cat fight. As they move closer to the ropes Travis grabs SinDee and pulls her out of harms way allowing his wife to get a breather, she hides behind Travis taunting Claudia who is in the ring a little weary about getting out but as soon as Sin flips her the bird she looses it and comes out chasing her around the ring, as Sin turns and ducks Travis comes out clotheslining Claudia down. SinDee sticks her head between Travis�?legs smirking at her fallen opponent Travis helps his wife up who in turn gives him a soft kiss before rolling back into the ring allowing Travis to toss Claudia back in. SinDee doesn’t go for the pin, instead she sits on the top turnbuckle looking bored she plays with her nails and hair waiting and watching as Claudia gets back to her feet, finally SinDee comes off the turnbuckle and is surprised to be taken down with a spear from Claudia who also grabs a handful of her hair and slams her head into the canvas all the while screaming at her. SinDee fights back and once again the ref separates them, this time however he has an ultra feral Claudia in his arms as Sin scampers to the middle of the ring finally gaining her confidence back. As the ref lets Claudia go SinDee charges and takes her down, getting back to her feet she lays into Claudia with stiff kicks to the side, finally not wanting to play any more Sin picks her up and slams her back first into the turnbuckles as Claudia stumbles out from them SinDee slams her boot into her stomach causing Claudia to double over, from there she jumps onto her back flipping them over with her Deception move, the crowd is loving it however SinDee doesn’t go for the pin, she rolls off and looks down a fire in her eyes as she looks around smirking. Pulling her thumb across her throat SinDee moves and locks in Sinner, literally choking the lights and air out of Claudia, she fights it trying to get to the ropes but she can’t although she won’t tap either. SinDee can feel it, Claudia getting weaker by the second as the ref motions for the bell. She still doesn’t unlock the hold until Travis is in the ring with her then she finally lets go, allowing her husband to raise her hand in victory. Lily "Here is your winner by Submission�?SinDee!" Smirking SinDee looks down once more at Claudia and shrugs her shoulders before leaving the ring with Travis. |
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Strat before ME As we went backstage, we were standing by with Drew Stevenson who was already dressed in his wrestling attire and definitely looked ready for the huge battle royal which was up next. ‘’In just a few moments, the world is going to bare witness as I walk into that ring and I capture the BUD Heavyweight Championship for the third time.’�?/P> He paused and just smirked. ‘’Everybody has their eyes set on Seifer to win but you know what? Seifer had his time in the sun, five times to be exact. He no longer needs it and who is to say that he won’t pull a Dante and just up and ditch The Domain due to being bored?’�?/P> The fans start booing as Drew continued to speak. ‘’Tonight�?The Stevenson era returns for a third time. They do in fact say that the third time is a charm and you all are going to watch and see history in the making, live tonight. So grab out your cameras, grab out your camcorders and start recording history…’�?/P> A huge grin ran along his face as he slightly nodded his head and then walked off out of view as the Main Event was just underway. |
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Roxy and I agreed to continue our tabloid storyline by adding tabloid strats into the results. This is mine. A Winterborn Son? Reported By: Mikey Svarro
When Novacaine walked back through the doors of Bytches Ultimate Domain, Roxy had a bit of a surprise for him. Nova's had children before, but none that have ever survived. However, Roxy's son, AJ, is already a year old. This being Nova's first child that has survived, you have to wonder..is it really his? Various reports have been made from eye witnesses that put Roxy hanging out with the Winterborn brothers, Ravyn and Phoenix, at the same time she was messing around with Nova in '06. Could it be possible that Roxy's son, isn't a Caine, afterall? I mean, anyone would pick Nova over both of the Winterborn's, especially since Roxy is supposily in love with him. Could she have made the whole thing up in order to not only give AJ a better father figure than either Phoenix or Ravyn, but to trick Nova into staying with her? You have to admit, it not only seems possible, but probable. Above is a picture captured by a spycam set up in a hotel room, when a member of the staff thought it fishy that Ravyn Crow checked in with Foxy Roxy one evening. Below is a picture captured at an airport, where the couple of Roxy and Phoenix were seen exiting a plane from the bahamas. We have to ask, do the brothers know? Did Roxy plan on taking this secret to her grave? How will Nova react when he finds out AJ might not be his? | | |
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The lights suddenly go dark without any sense of warning as "Ex's and Oh's" by Atreyu begins to play over the PA system. A single figure comes out from behind the black velvet curtain. As the lights slowly rise, you see Zarek Lyle walking down the ramp. As he walks down, he taunts the crowd, getting their screams up to a point of his liking. He hops onto the apron and flips over the top rope. Zarek goes to a corner, jumping to the second turnbuckle, to get the crowd roaring. He hops off the turnbuckle, and jogs around the ring a bit. Resting his hands upon his knees in a crouching position, he awaits in the ring as the lights dim and Drew is about to come on out. The lights in the arena shut off putting the arena in complete darkness. The words of Shinedown are heard... The more the light shines through me; I pretend to close my eyes... The more the dark consumes me; I pretend that I'm burning... Burning Bright... A large spotlight shines down onto the ramp as a slab of concrete is seen and on it lays a figure. The public address sound system starts up again playing ''Burning Bright'' by Shinedown as the figure sits up and climbs off of the concrete pedestal indicating a resurrection. He begins walking down the ramp as the fans begin a huge, arena deafening ''Stevenson'' chant, the ring announcer heard vaguely. ''Making his way to the ring from Seymour, MO. at a height of six feet two inches tall and weighing in at two hundred and fifty pounds... ''THE EMERALD'' DREW STTEEEVVEENSOOOONNNN.'' Drew gets down to the ring and quickly slides under the bottom ropes getting into the ring. He is quick to get back to his feet as he walks over to the farthest turnbuckle and leans back in it giving Zarek a brutal stare down. The referee signals for the bell as both Drew and Zarek come out of their respected corners and get face to face. A few words are exchanged between the two as Drew reaches out and pie faces Zarek. Zarek then lunges forward and starts punching Drew repeatedly, he starts stumbling back. Zarek grabs Drew and Irish whips him to the ropes and on his way back? He hits Drew in the gut with a huge kitchen sink sending him to the canvas hard as he clutches his abdomen in pain. Hellion- What a low shot by Zarek. Holt- That was in the abdomen, what are you seeing? Zarek bends down grabbing Drew by the head picking him up to his feet. He hit’s a knife-edge chop to his chest as he holds his chest in pain. A very sadistic smirk running along Zarek’s face as he rears back and chops Drew across the chest again. With that chop, Drew rolls under the bottom rope escaping the ring. He then says forget it and starts walking up the ramp, the fans booing. Holt- What a coward! Hellion- Coward? You heard Drew, he has beaten Zarek already, and he is simply saving his energy for the Main Event. Holt- Quit kissing his ass. Zarek exit’s the ring and charges up the ramp where he strikes Drew from behind knocking him down on the steel ramp. Zarek then kicks Drew and bends down to pick him up when out of nowhere, Drew hit’s a low blow evening the odds. As Zarek stumbles around holding his groin, Drew gets up and stuffs his head under his arm where he hit’s a huge snap suplex onto the ramp. Zare arches his back riving in pain, Drew gets up and quickly picks Zarek up with him. He then hit’s a European uppercut causing Zarek to stumble back but then, he hit’s a stiff kick to Zarek’s gut before following it up with a huge T-Bone suplex which sends Zarek spine first onto the steel ramp. Hellion- YES! This is why Drew is the best in The Domain. As Drew gets to his feet, he kicks Zarek down the ramp before smirking and walking after him very arrogantly. Zarek starts to pull himself up as Drew gets in behind him, he shoves Zarek face first into the steel post as he hits it hard and lies there motionless. Drew then grabs Zarek by the hair and tosses Zarek back into the ring following. Hellion- The tide has changed. Holt- For now�?/P> Drew quickly covers Zarek as the ref drops to make the count. One�?/P> Two�?/P> Zarek gets the shoulder up. Drew starts arguing with the ref, which gives Zarek time to slightly, recover. After arguing, Drew grabs him but Zarek throws several stiff lefts and rights to the gut of Drew, which causes him to stumble back. This gives Zarek enough time to regroup as he gets up to his feet and starts punching Drew in the face rather hard. Zarek then runs to the ropes and on his way back, he goes for a clothesline but Drew ducks under it and then grabs Zarek from behind where he hit’s a huge German suplex really driving Zarek into the canvas. Drew keeps his hands clasped as he gets up and hits another German suplex then hitting a third, a fourth, a fifth and even a sixth as he then releases the grip and lies there exhausted. Hellion- WHAT A SERIES OF SUPLEXES BY THE BEST TECHNICAL WRESTLER ALIVE TODAY! Drew crawls over there and covers Zarek’s limp and lifeless body. One�?/P> Two�?/P> Three�?/P> WAIT! Zarek just got the shoulder up. Drew looks shocked and stunned as the fans are screaming and cheering. Fans- LET’S GO ZAREK! LET’S GO ZAREK! Drew gets up very angered. He starts stalking Zarek as he begins getting up. Upon reaching his feet, Drew grabs Zarek attempting the Final Conflict but Zarek manages to escape it and thus getting in behind Drew and as he turns around? APOLLO’S CALL�?/P> Holt- ZAREK WITH THE APOLLO’S CALL�?/P> Hellion- DAMNIT! Zarek falls on top of Drew’s now motionless body. ONE�?/P> TWO�?/P> THREE�?/P> NO! Drew somehow managed to get the shoulder up just before the three. A loud chorus of ‘Ah�?from the fans was heard as they thought this thing was over. Both men lied there; Zarek got up first and was holding his back slightly. Moments later, Drew started getting up and as he stumbled around, Zarek attempted a huge kick to Drew’s face but he managed to catch his foot and lock him in the Sadistic Intentions. Hellion- YES, THE SADISTIC INTENTIONS. IT’S OVER. Holt- Not yet it’s not. Zarek fights the pain as Drew torques the ankle trying to get Zarek to tap out. He holds it on tight as Zarek’s hand hovers above the mat. The fans starting to cheer Zarek on as out of nowhere, Zarek reverses the Sadistic Intentions into a huge roll up. One�?/P> Two�?/P> Three�?/P> Ding�?Ding�?Ding�?/P> Hellion- WHAT IN THE? Holt- Zare wins it�?ZAREK WINS IT�?/P> Zarek rolls out of the ring hobbling, as his ankle is sore. The ref raises Zarek’s arm in victory as Lily is heard. Lily- The winner of the match, ZARRREK LYYYYLEEEEE. Zarek backs up the ramp limping and smirking, as Drew looks livid. He kicks the bottom rope and yells out while pointing at Zarek as we then head backstage. |
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The Domain SuperStar Caught With New Girlfriend Zarek Lyle dumped Gypsy? There are rumors that have been flying around about The Domain's Golden Couple, Zarek Lyle and Gypsy. It seems that they've played the waiting game way too long. They were supposedly waiting for the right time to move their relationship to the "next level". Well, even before Zarek was able to dip into that sweet and sexy pot of honey, he walked away from that fine piece of ass for something more...firm, shiney, and plastic. They met at a store called, Lover's Lane and since he's been taking her shopping, introducing her to friends and family and has even been seen at a recent conference where they went to see a public speaker who was talking on the art of dolls. Zarek has been seen around town with his new "girlfriend" and we were even able to get a copy of a recent picture that the lovers took at their first week's anniversary. The big plus in this relationship, Zarek didn't have to wait to score. Also, when researching the pictures and their authenticity, we confirmed that the pictures were inded taken recently and it seems that being in love has made Zarek put on a few pounds. Is he pregnant too? | |
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Main Event \BUD Heavyweight Championship Battle Royal Phoenix Winterborn Menacide Drew Stevenson White Trash Jade Seifer Sin-Dee (Best 2 out of 3 for Judging) Writer: Damain WINNER: SEIFER 1. Phoenix Winterborn: I'm actually glad, and impressed that you decided to roleplay for this match. I think you know that you didn't win, but I admire your heart for jumping in there with some big names of the circuit. Keep up the good work, and someday soon you may end up winning something like this.
Menacide: Er..you definitely came out of nowhere, that's for sure. Don't know who you are, but it's easily seen you wanted this most of of everybody. You started off first and took it slow. When you started off I was very interested, I think mainly because I was wondering who the hell you were. However, as time went on, I slowly began to lose interest. Then when people like Seifer got into it, and Drew posted a good one, you exited completely. Not everyting is about dialogue. You can shoot for sure, but there were no attention catchers, and I think that's why I lost interest. You did hold your own against them though, good job indeed.
Drew Stevenson: I was surprised when I saw that you had entered because I heard from someone that you weren't interested in becoming Champion again. Maybe because you saw Seifer show up, and you jumped at a match with him. Your first was pretty good. It definitely caught my interest. I'm guessing the old forest was a metaphor for BUD. Clever. I wasn't to impressed with your second. I like the face change by the way. I think it suits better than HBK. I enjoyed your third the most out of them all; the judgement of all the contenders. Your fourth didn't interest me until the very end. "Guess you were right, you are the last of a now DYING breed." Nice touch. Your fifth was decent, and a good ending to wrap it all up. However, you posted three rps within of like less than four hours. Definitely doesn't look that good, especially since it was on Deadline day. Was a major turn off.
Seifer: Well, you never cease to impress do you? I enjoyed your first pretty much. I liked the show idea and I actually found myself lol-ing (literally) at the start of it. By the way, I'd like to interject that your prologes are always brilliant. You definitely know how to catch someone's attention, and are clever about it. Sparring with Mayweather, priceless. "I'd bounce around feds like my name is Stevenson" Ha. The White OBM, nice. "I'd offer you to take a seat on Seifta's lap but you'd probably try and cop a feel and I usually charge for that". Your third was pretty brilliant as well. "Sometimes the best course of action isn't rapid fire", and you proved that. Awesome job spacing them out, giving your opponents the time they wanted, while still tearing them apart.
All of the others managed to no-show, got tied up or something, I don't know. At first it looked as if Menacide was the only one in this thing, and that he would take it for sure. However, once Drew and Seifer got into it, I think we all knew it would come down to the both of them, and it did. In the end, I think Seifer took this one though, even though Drew did one more rp, quality over quantity. I thought it a bit shady Drew posted three rps on the last day all within mere short hours of each other, while Seifer spaced his out. He was cunning, he was brilliant, and he timed his pieces out better than Drew, while still beating him out. Not only that, but Seifer's works were simply more interesting than Drew's. I'm not saying Drew's were bad, because they were definitely good reads, I'm just saying Seifer's were better. Phoenic and Menacide, you didn't do bad either, keep up the good work and you'll get there. I'll be looking forward to Seifer/Stevenson at 2009 Wayz 2 Die :) 2. This comes down to three because the others either didn't do anything, or only done one role-play. Seifer Drew and Menacide it's an interesting mix if you sit and think about it. I must admit Menacide picked it up and ran with the ball on this set of role-plays. I actually loved what he put out. Seifer, as per normal excels at what he does, he can make you so entranced with reading his stuff that you honestly lose track of time. Then we have Drew, now Drew is someone who once they set their minds up they think they can do anything. Not that that's a bad thing mind you. He had two high profile matches and it seemed he wanted to go after this title more which seriously I don't blame him. All three done stand up jobs for this match and much like Kitt and Gypsy there can only be one winner. I have to go with Seifer on this, Drew done excellent, but at times he just lacked something to me. Menacide again excellent, I love the fact you are someone from the old BUD and having it as a mystery as well it wicked, I just personally don't think you pulled out your absolute best. Seifer has always managed to captivate me and others no matter where he is or what the role-play is about, these three guys went balls to the wall and kept up with each other. This is what title matches are made of and you know what all three of you congrats on that. You all stood out you all made BUD look fucking awesome. - Match 9 - Faith Rivers vs. White Trash© Bytch Championship Writer: Ernie WINNER: FAITH RIVERS 1. Faith gave more revolving the match and the title where as Trash just kind of roleplayed. I was really hoping to see this match explode but unfortunately, it didn’t. 2. Unfortunantly, WT no-showed her title defense. Go her. Faith Rivers gets the title. 3. Well they only put out one a piece and White Trash’s had nothing to do with said match so Faith wins. - Match 8 - Jay Styles vs Roach BUDvision Championship Bout (DSL had to pull-out) Writer: Heather WINNER: JAY STYLES 1. This match was ok but I expected better. From the turnout however, I give it to Jay. He had more to say and focused on her more and she just kind of disappeared. Not bad but could have been better. 2. Jay says he posted three roleplays for KK, but in reality, he only did two considering the first was all about the Heavyweight title battle royal. While Roach labeled two roleplays as her first KK rp, so it seemed like there was a mixup here. Anyway, I've always like Roach, simply because her character is unique, and her roleplays intruging. Roach came out of the gate against DSL originally, but it was still a decent roleplay. Jay's first (really labeled his second) was heavier with the dialogue than Roach's but he also had more to go off of. On another note, Jay hardly ever gives any description, close to no narration whatsoever. It's always cost him points, and it'll cost him this time too. Roach's second easily overpowered Jay's second, and it's a done deal. Jay, get some narration, some description in there. Not everything is simply about dialogue and talking. Roach for BUDvision Champ. 3. I must say I like the Roach character, its definitely different to what you see normally on the fedding scene. It’s good to see Jay back as well. There were only a few from each on this, both didn’t really say much of anything really although I did highly like Roach’s line of "You will get beat by a girl and like it" or however it properly went, that was genius. It’s hard to pick a winner in this, but I have to go with Jay for this one, Roach however was damn close, and keep up the work you are awesome. 4. Jay styles - to be honest I felt the effort put out by both could have been a bit more forthcomming however I'm only here to judge on what I see. and what i see is Jay styles putting out a decent effort in one rp and a "clinching" effort in another. he wins it because there was really more there and i felt that although roaches rp was nicely done it was just a rehash of what styles said earlier. - Match 7 - Phoenix Winterborn vs. Leaky Format© GWE Championship Bout Writer: Jon WINNER: PHOENIX WINTERBORN 1. This match was a great start for the GWE strap and both did very well. Leaky came out with some pretty good stuff using the auto industry which was a solid idea but Phoenix seemed more like he wanted it. Both did good but I think that Phoenix was just better overall. 2. This actually turned out to be a pretty decent match, even though it was obvious who wanted it more. Phoenix posted several days before Leaky, and Leaky did a total of four roleplays in a matter of two days. So he already looked bad. Both put fowarth a good effort, despite Leaky blitzing with his rps. I think it comes down to the fact that Leaky tends to live in his own world, and think something make sense, when it really doesn't. I try to make sense of it, but I end of confused a lot of the time. Phoenix on the other hand, saw this, and poked fun at the fact that Leaky appeared not to know what he's talking about. Phoenix came off a lot more relaxed, and his roleplays grew in length as well as quality as time progressed. In the end I think Phoenix simply out did Leaky. Leaky knows how to post a good roleplay from time to time, this just wasn't one of those times. His ego got the better of him. 3. Firstly Phoenix may you please change your layout? The info boxes down the side makes me need to scroll through your role-plays and that, unfortunately annoys the shit out of me. Secondly, Leaky all the ways you move the text from middle to the side, slightly annoying too cause most times it makes no sense to me. Now that that’s out of the way let’s get on with you. You both kept things short and mostly to the point which I love. Obviously you have a history with each other the only problem is most the time I was confused with what was actually speech for Leaky, what was actions and what the stuff on the side was. Phoenix was centered he was easy to understand, for this match I am going with Phoenix. - Match 6 - Drew Stevenson vs Zarek Lyle© Bragging Rights Bout Writer: Keith WINNER: TBD 1. Zarek Lyle hands down Drew opted to focus more on the title match and Zarek as per usual blew me away with his role-plays. I could always be captivated by the way he writes. 2. Ok I want this said at the outset. this is what it fucking is about. everyone keeps talking about great matches and shit but this one was to me out of the ballpark. this is what it's about everything that needed to be there was, ability talent style focuse. the technical aspect was expected great and from a story aspect. Zarek had me deep in there the storytelling was beautiful almost mosiac it led you and brought you where it wanted to go and made you damn well happy to follow along. and through the entire thing you kept the connection, you felt the emotion and the drive. the hunger and desire. and from Drew, well shit his focuse was amazing especially considering his wide angled story ideas lately. I truly enjoyed reading every word. and I find myself at a weird spot. I don't want either of you to win. fuck i want you to rp for another three weeks just to see how damn far you guys can go. to see how much wire you got left in you....but unfortunantl my opinion don't mean jack. Drew wins and i have to say it's on blood alone. technique from both was amazing and the stories clicked. in the end it came down to what my mind jumped when i asked "which should i read again" and to that answer it was "read drews" and so in that answer I have mine and you have yours. Drew wins it. 3. Wow, what a match! Props to both guys, when you fight as many times as they have, people seem to enter into a slump where it shows they're tired of facing each other, but not here. Maybe because a few of them weren't one on one that enabled them to give us some back story on their previous matches, it was refreshing to see them remind of what's gone down in the past between them. For starters I give the edge to Drew for creativity because his playing with death and judgment was a remembrance of times past in BUD, and for Stevenson to do so really showed that he's able to offer a different style to his character. Not to say that Zarek wasn't creative though, his story presentation with his son and promo in church were solid. That being said I give the edge in terms of speech quality to Zarek as his words felt powerful and stronger. Again, not that it doesn't mean Drew didn't do well too, cause he did for sure.
This match was very back and forth for me, Drew came out strong and made me think 'man, he's got the edge, this could be tough'. Then Zarek came back and had nice answers and counters for everything so I got to thinking that Zarek's going to have the edge. Drew came back and countered great, showing that he knew what he was talking about in terms of their past. So it went back to him, then Zarek came back and retorted everything Drew said, with facts behind him. At that moment I thought that it went back to Zarek and then he just finished off strong and continued to dispell what Drew had going for him, even making references to him taking another match. In the end I felt that Zarek held the advantage and produced slightly better rp's than Drew this time around. Another great match, thanks for the read boys. Zarek Lyle wins. - Match 5 - Gypsy© vs, Kit Black© Franchise Championship Rematch Bout Writer: Roxy WINNER: KIT BLACK 1. This was a very good match. I felt that both women really put on a great show and it was so close but Kit’s stuff was a tad more creative. I liked her ideas and everything but however, Gypsy countered Kit very well and thus really made her work for this one. This one was extremely close but I thought that Kit just had a better night. 2. Gypsy was the first to post, and it was obvious she didn't have much to go off of. It took Kit a bit longer to post, but she came out of the gate pretty good. She actually told a story. Kit's second was bloody brilliant. I love her creativity. It pwns. I've always said creativity should mean more than just a regular dialogue roleplay. It's the attention of the reader that you need. Gypsy's second was on the right track, and but not enough to take out Kit's combined two. Her third did a good job rebuttong as well. Gypsy's third was entertaining, which is surprising, because it also seemed rushed, judging by her 'one minute before the deadline' post, ha. Nice job to both, but Kit retains, well done. 3. This is what matches are made from, two people who get out there and work it. I loved both sets of role-plays you ladies placed out. You were both evenly matched and I love that you make it hard for a judge. It’s really hard to pick a winner here, you both done awesome given it was a title match too, and this actually can bring back a lower mid card title into glory which is totally awesome. Let’s start with Gypsy, your first role-play was more centered on your past within the last few months which is cool it shows the mind frame she has been in, what she needs, her desires her confusion ect the only problem is, for a match role-play I think you kept on it a little longer then you should have but you managed to come back to the point which is your match your title. I give you props for that not many people can make it work the way you did. You’re second you paid attention to your opponent, you managed to realize you needed to go one up on the blog to what not and it’s good to see the way you girls can counter each other. Now onto Kitt, you girl have skill, it’s not often you see someone new who can come in and not be so long winded with useless shit, you get to the point and I fell so in love with your opening piece, it just fit perfectly. Now I know there has to be a winner here, unfortunately I can’t pick it to be a tie, although I wish we could it would be awesome for BUD to have dial champions like in WWE where it was Chyna and Jericho, that was piss funny and I think in this case it actually would work. Anyways enough babble, I have to give it to Kitt, again both ladies were awesome, I really wish I could give it to both of you. Gypsy you done nothing wrong it was a matter of sitting down and really seeing which was at the time better and to me Kitt was focused as were you, but you were also focused on other stuff, however once again fucking awesome work the both of you. I would love to see the rematch too. |
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Faith Rivers vs White Trash Bytch Championship WINNER: Faith Rivers The lights go out as "Faith" by Limp Bizkit begins to come out of the PA System. Faith Rivers walks out and stands at the top of the entrance ramp. As the chorus of the song hits, 'You Gotta Have Faith' she jumps up a little and as her feet come down on the ramp again, fireworks go off behind Faith, just before she runs down the ramp and slides into the ring. As she gets to her feet, Faith runs into the corner and gets up on the second turnbuckle. She taunts the fans a bit before jumping down. Faith begins to loosen up her arms before leaning back against the ropes. As her music fades, Faith looks up towards the entrance ramp and waits on her opponent. Lily: In the ring at this time, weighing in at 125 lbs. Faith Rivers! Faith raises her hands in the air signaling for White Trash and her belt to come out already. Mark - Not many have heard of White Trash over the whole week, some people are speculating that she still feels bad over the way she won the belt at Devil's Night that she doesn't care anymore. Kristin - Oh come on, that's not true. In the end, its all rumors. The lights in the arena go out and the song "Trailer Fabulous" by Brooks Buford comes on the speakers. Out walks the redneck bitch known as White Trash with a cowboy hat as she struts her way to the ring to the beat of the song. She steps inside the ring with the bytch title draped over her waist, takes it off, and hands it over to the referee as she circles the ring. Lily: And her opponent, at 168 lbs. she is the current Bytch Champion. WHITE TRASH! Kristin - She's here. Mark - She just doesn't have that look of determination. The ref calls for the bell and they immidiately begin to circle the ring. Both girls lock up and immidiately White Trash takes her in with a headlock in which Faith pushes White Trash towards the rope and on her way back, Faith shoulder tackles White Trash to the mat. White Trash sits up and looks up at Faith who is wondering what is wrong with White Trash as she seems to not be into it. White Trash gets up, circles the ring with Faith again, they lock-up, and immidiately Faith grabs her in a headlock. White Trash pushes Faith into the ropes and on her way back, White Trash goes to deliver a clothesline but Faith ducks it, goes to the other ropes, and as White Trash turns around, Faith hits a flying body cross on to White Trash which knocks her down and for the cover. Ref: 1....2...3. Kristin - WHAT THE HELL? Mark - Dude. What just happened? The ref calls for the bell as Faith looks surprised as to what just happened. Lily: Here is your winner and new Bytch Champion... FAITH RIVERS! Kristin - Faith Rivers is our new Bytch Champion... Congrats on that one. Mark - What the hell just happened here? It looks like White Trash just practically handed her this match. The Ref grabs the belt and is about to hand it over to Faith but White Trash rips it from his hands and looks at it as Faith stares her down. White Trash looks up at Faith and hands her the belt. Faith takes it and looks at White Trash as she rolls her eyes and walks out of the ring and towards the back taking off her elbow pads in the process. Faith on the other hand looks at the belt she just won and raises it in the air while White Trash turns around on the entrance way and nods her head in disagreement as she walks away. Mark - That right there looked like a handout to me. Kristin - Faith just happened to be at the right time on the right night. If White Trash had personal problems, then she should have dealt with them at home rather than bring them here. Mark - Knowing the bitch from the trailer park, she'll be back. She's a legend that three time bytch champion. Kristin - For right now lets just have this moment for Faith. Faith continues to celebrate with the belt as if she's still not sure what just happened here. | |
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