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Poetry : Silent witness
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From: MSN NicknameBeefiestrhino1  (Original Message)Sent: 3/28/2008 10:32 AM

Silent Witness<o:p></o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

With a slap to the face<o:p></o:p>

She falls to the ground<o:p></o:p>

But the girl just stands staring<o:p></o:p>

Without any sound<o:p></o:p>

The tears are still streaming<o:p></o:p>

Right down to her toes<o:p></o:p>

But she dare not say a thing<o:p></o:p>

Just keep it in close<o:p></o:p>

As he turns on his heels<o:p></o:p>

I feel her just shudder<o:p></o:p>

Thank god he’s in bed<o:p></o:p>

Her dear little brother<o:p></o:p>

As she holds me so tight<o:p></o:p>

I can’t help but think<o:p></o:p>

Why is it legal?<o:p></o:p>

Why can he drink?<o:p></o:p>

The sound of his voice<o:p></o:p>

Just fills me with anger<o:p></o:p>

But the words I can’t say<o:p></o:p>

For I am just a small tiger<o:p></o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

By Amanda Laurenson<o:p></o:p>


I am
seeking
between
and
zip code
 

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From: MSN NicknameBeefiestrhino1Sent: 3/28/2008 10:35 AM
Just a proud dad...Amanda got this published . Part of a school project, several class members got published from her school.

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From: MSN NicknameBeefiestrhino1Sent: 3/28/2008 10:36 AM
Btw..her inspiration came  from an advert on tv about domestic violence, not from personal experience

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From: MSN NicknamenotblondejustredSent: 3/28/2008 10:38 AM
this is so sad....one must have experienced it to be able to write something like this....

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From: MSN NicknamenotblondejustredSent: 3/28/2008 10:41 AM
god steve i am so sorry....i wrote my comment without realising the name of the author......
 
she must be an extremely sensitive and caring young lady
 
proud you should be

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From: MSN NicknameBeefiestrhino1Sent: 3/30/2008 11:12 AM

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From: MSN NicknameBeefiestrhino1Sent: 3/30/2008 11:13 AM
last time I ever raised my hand to a woman in anger...I was 7...I just walk away..and keep walking

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From: MSN NicknamenotblondejustredSent: 3/30/2008 12:33 PM
I had opened my dialogue box to post my reply, then the phone rang, I came back and posted it without seeing your posts saying it was part of a school project. You have a very clever young lady there, to be able to write with such emotion is a gift. I know you are very proud of her and rightly so, I also know your kids have never witnessed anthing like that. I apologise sincerely, I would never intentionally offend you.
 
 
Maggie xx
 
PS. Does that mean you're not going to give me a good skelping after all

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From: MSN NicknameBeefiestrhino1Sent: 3/30/2008 3:16 PM
U dont have to keep apologising Maggie..lol,the skelp would be done in the best possible taste..

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