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| | | From: Josephine (Original Message) | Sent: 1/13/2004 4:19 PM |
I just sorta threw this together this morning, so it's still pretty rough. Still, my ex/editor isn't really available, so I thought I'd tag it up for suggestions. darkness carresses mud in vain obliterates his face his name nod to forget, but not to forget and ever in every memory relief of release trembling with desire to see his face to speak his name as warm in my vein, but not in my heart and ever in every memory plunge through black tar trandends tears touch his face hear his name "Anne, you went out" how I'd love to go out and Adin in every memory just breathe white aroma and flicker lids hide his face mute his name the bed of a stranger or the bed of a friend as ever in every memory |
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Thanks, Joanne. I like to ask first - so, is it okay if I email you privately? You've got someting cooking in my little head here and I wanted to bouce it off you, if that's okay. |
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