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Poetic Freedom : raskolnikov's back with a poem or two...
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From: MSN Nicknameraskolnikov7755  (Original Message)Sent: 2/4/2007 6:21 AM
                                       Reality Byte
 
                                i had a dream last night
                                in it
                                two women
 
                                one long dead
                                the other
                                long gone
 
                                were fighting
                                and i
                                was the prize
 
                                it goes to show
                                that the superego
                                has a sense of humour
                                to enter my dreams
                                and make of me
                                a prize
                                to be fought for
 
                                but morning came
                                and the harsh
                                early light
                                hit me full in the face
                                and dragged me
                                reluctantly
                                into a new day
                                the same
                                as all the rest
 
 
 
 
                       The Mountain, Malcolm, and Me
 
                       Stark and serious against
                       the blue sky it
                       casts a long shadow,
                       this mountain.
 
                       It looks
                       benign if not benelovent.
 
                       But deep inside
                       the fury waits.
 
                       I know now why Lowry drank and
                       finally ran.
 
                       I too live under a volcano
                       and I too must be numb
                       to make the waiting bearable.
 
                       Some men are born
                       in the shadow
                       of a volcano,
                       we learn to like it
                       or, like Lowry, we run
                       the fury
                       fast behind.
 
 
 
              Harwood Morning
 
               a new day
               an old disease
               a silver spoon
               beside my bed
               an empty telephone
               i said something
               in the safety of the night
               and once again
               she's gone
 
 
                  Citysailor
 
   over the factories and
   beneath the bridge the
   sky is burning     red sky
   hanging there
   like yesterday's kill
   on hooks
 
   redsky
 
   in the morning
 
 
 
                Untitled
 
        back to the void
        wind in my face
        plunging to the sea
 
        coasting
 
        looking for
        a warm spot
        between the waves
 
 
 
                   For Nadine
 
              Bag packed,
              eyes dry,
              goodbye,
              goodbye...
 
              I loved you all the way
              there
              and back again.
 
              I have a past,
              to warm me
              on the road,
              feed me
              when I'm cold.
 
              I have a past,
              to love me when
              I'm lonely.
            
              I have a past.
 
              It is...
              gentle fingers
              on my skin,
              a smile,
              a touch,
              a loving look and
              brown eyes burning
              into blue.
 
 
                  Time, and Again
 
            once more
            a familiar warmth
            seduces me
            and the rain
            caresses me
            touches me
            with it's long fingers
            reninds me
            of other times
            times when I was sure
            just why the rain
            falls
 


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From: MSN NicknameSuziblues2Sent: 2/4/2007 7:01 PM
Nice.  Verrry nice.  I like 'red sky hanging like yesterday's kill on hooks'.
 
You're so talented!

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From: MSN Nicknameraskolnikov7755Sent: 2/5/2007 1:17 AM
Why thank you, I do try... Part of the reason I haven't been around much lately is because I've been trying to put everything I know and have done on paper, (or hard drive, I should say).  I have 3 kids and I'd like them to know that I am more than just this guy that popped in and out of their lives for varying periods of time putting them on an emotional roller-coaster. I tink my oldest understands but the younger kids still have issues with me.  But it's not only for them... I have more stories and poems in me than I have life left... so I thought I'd best get started...
                                                                              ras      

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From: MSN NicknameSuziblues2Sent: 2/5/2007 7:37 PM
ahhh yes.  Kids do to us, don't they.  I mean, want us to better ourselves in some way, any way.  Like, making sure they know you were more than just some guy...
 
Your kids will LOVE it when they're older.  I kept a bunch of stuff in scrap books, paper and 'baby books' for my kids, when they were real little.   Like, little stories that I wrote for them, and how I was feeling when I was pregnant with them, just a bunch of stuff like that.  Even some poems!  Now, that they are older, and having babies themselves, they really love reading that stuff I kept way back then.
 
But you,  you are really talented.  Please keep posting when you find the time, okay?  
 
 

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