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Note: I wrote this while I was in highschool and going through a tough emotional time. The Storm The wind begins to blow hard. The storm is starting to brew. Suddenly rain drops fall to the ground. Thunder rolls with such a force as an atomic exsplosion. Silently I sit and stare at the sight, I am frightened, but I refuse to let anyone see. The wind spreads the rain all over the land, The thunder is getting louder, The nerves inside me jump more with fright. I try to hold on, but the storms too strong. I lose my grip, I am gone; there is no way I can return to the past. I can't go back. I can only move on. © Holly Feldhus February 13, 1995 |
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Note * My husband helped me write this one for some friends of ours. Heartfelt Thougths of You We've been waiting so long for you Everyone asked "when are you due"? The aches, the pains, the feelings of dread Those days I didn't even want to get out of bed. The tears and fears all seem worth while When we look at you and see you smile. Your little hands and adorable feet. You are so very precious and sweet. Our hearts melt when we look in your eyes. All the while your daddy cries. It has been a good cry, since we have been waiting for so long. That we feel like singing you a song. Your love is a miracle sent to us from above. We will always give you all our love. © Holly Feldhus February 12, 2006 |
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Hi Holly, I just love your emotion and the strength of your words in your writing, keep it up girl. Huggers, Jackie |
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Awsome Jog Holy, i side of you i never knew hun, thank you so much for sharing this with us all, and letting us enjoy your poems.. Big Hugs Karen |
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Thanks Ladies for your kind comments.  Hugs-Holly |
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*Note- I wrote this when a good friend of mine was killed in a single vehicle car accident at the age of 14.  Everytime I hear the song "Who you'd be today" by Kenny Chesney, she is one of the people I think of. You Always Led the Way You always led the way with a smile or a frown. You always led the way through ups and downs. You always were the energetic one, always wanted something more to do than sit around and talk. You always were the generous one, putting your friends problems before your own. You always led the way to the corner hang out or the grocery store. You were always the wise one with advise to help others out in thier times of need. Your friend and loved ones always saw you as a leader in everything you did. We always thought that you would lead the way for us. You did but this time we couldn't follow you. You went to Heaven. He took you from us so he could use your leadership, enthusiasm and your wisdom. Slowly, ever so slowly my heart and soul will, but never completely, mend. © Holly Feldhus Oct. 4th, 1993 |
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Beautiful writings sweetie, What a treasure to give your friends! TY for sharing your poems with us! Hugz,Theresa |
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Raw emotion and love for your friend Holly, great job. Huggles, Jackie |
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Aww Holly hun this poem you wrote in honor of your friend who passed away is very moving hun, reminded me of a friend we lost 2 yrs ago on new years eve and we played the same song at his funral hun.. Just remember the good times ok darling and know your friend is in heaven looking down on you and proud of who you are and will always guide you into the right path. Hugs Karen |
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A Heart of Stone A cold wind freezes an object, nobody knows what it is, nor does anybody care. I know what is under the stone, I can hear the deathly sound of a heart slowly beating. I know why a heart can act this way I have felt this way before but this time the pain sharply increased. Along came a handsome stranger, he hears the same sound I do. He delicately takes a hammer and chisel and slowly, cautiously starts to break the stone down into little pieces. He releases my heart to the feelings of happiness once again and promises me undying protection from the chilling winds. Written by Holly © September 7&8, 1993 |
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* note this is what I have been working on the last few days. Feel free to comment if you wish. These Tears These tears I cry You will never see They don't fall outside but inside of me. Tears of Pain Cried in Vain Tears of Joy Easily destroyed Tears of strife I've cried them all my life Always something new and the tears continue to brew Tons of fears accompanied by tons of tears. Everyday I cry I've done this for years. Why can't I stop crying? I ask myself Instead I keep putting my true feelings on a shelf. Maybe I'm comforted by sadness Maybe I welcome the fears I'm not always sure why I cry So many sad things happen in life that cause these tears of strife. Lord in heaven please help me through my fears. With your help, maybe I can stop these tears. © Holly Feldhus written November 23rd & 24th, 2006 |
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Dear Holly, Just reading through the poetry. This struck me hard, as this is how my entire life has been.  I never know when something else will happen. Wish some good luck would come our way. Keeping strong is what we do and looking for that rainbow . Many hugs, Linda |
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