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Recommend (1 recommendation so far) Message 1 of 15 in Discussion 
From: Susan  (Original Message)Sent: 1/10/2002 4:04 AM
 
using figurative language -
 make this image sharp and vivid.  be effective.  be detailed.
you do not have to provide a complete description. 
let the reader's imagination fill in the rest.
 


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From: suzeSent: 1/10/2002 5:43 AM
you are a Hollander
without words -
with sunflowers
   in your eyes.
 
~susan

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Recommend  Message 3 of 15 in Discussion 
From: levSent: 1/11/2002 11:51 AM
A scorpion corpse
calcified sinks deftly
in
   n 
              -black-
-silk-                     -waters-
              -black-
the fronds of dusty lime
smooth under the waxen sun
neat feathers - a swan and it's
shadow! Living now
by a dead-seeing eye  

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Recommend  Message 4 of 15 in Discussion 
From: graymutterSent: 1/12/2002 9:55 AM
swan lake

flight equally beautiful in repose, aero glides afloat,

ponders not so wild about bright light venue swans got here,

can haut the serene tho, better than pelicans gawk


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Recommend  Message 5 of 15 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamekarasukokoroSent: 1/12/2002 10:59 PM
she adds one more salt dropplette
to the brackish river
who could have stollen the egg?
who would dare?
in all her sadness she's beauty still
grace and feather splendor
 
centime plus 1/12/2002 

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Recommend  Message 6 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SuzanSent: 1/12/2002 11:53 PM
do you mean, stollen or stolen?
 
sorry to break the mood - but stollen is interesting here.
and do you want dropplette with the extra 'p'?
 
unsure if this is the intent in this poem to go with the doubles <?>
i just wanna post it like you mean.
susan

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Recommend  Message 7 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SuzanSent: 1/13/2002 12:01 AM
shoot! me!  must be > swan + shadow.
arrgh.
<stupid me>

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Recommend  Message 8 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SPKSent: 1/13/2002 12:06 AM
The swan told me...
 
Have I mentioned
that I am contemplating
changing religions?
 
I'm so sick
of this
reincarnation
bullshit!
 
I used to be
the King of Portugal
for Buddha's sake!
 
I'll admit,
not a tremendous gig,
but strides above
being a swan
on some
shimmering
photographic
pond.
 
And people have
the nerve to question
why I am the nastiest
swan here.
 
At least the idiots
could bring me some
fresh Portugese bread
and quit tossing me those
stale make me gag
slices of white
bread.
 
Stange...I cannot escape the
feeling I'll be spending
my next existence
as a fire ant
on the dry plains
of Texas.
 
 
 

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Recommend  Message 9 of 15 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamekarasukokoroSent: 1/13/2002 12:18 AM
right susan...you got it
 
 
croww

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Recommend  Message 10 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SuzanSent: 1/13/2002 12:19 AM
you, on the other hand... had typos!

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Recommend  Message 11 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SuzanSent: 1/13/2002 12:21 AM
oops - this last comment was to SPK re: TYPOS!
 
which ain't dropplettes with 2 p's and 2 t's <per croww>

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Recommend  Message 12 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SPKSent: 1/13/2002 12:28 AM
yeah...yeah...I fixed the typos in the version I saved...I hate composing poetry in these reply boxes...I miss me spell check crutch...Computers are killing literacy!
 
spk

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Recommend  Message 13 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SuzanSent: 1/13/2002 6:23 AM
waal, spk -
fer the co-labs i don't like ta hafta edit cuz i copy/paste inta da table see?
 
 
suze

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Recommend  Message 14 of 15 in Discussion 
From: SPKSent: 1/13/2002 4:50 PM
I see said the blind man as he reached for a hammer and saw...
 
In the name of labor savings, I'll reverse my compositional technique next time...
 
spk

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From: DarkWindSent: 1/13/2002 11:58 PM
mesmerized
by the descent and capture in water
of the big dipper
in a struggle
with Orion
whose belt
is on this shore
 
where to?
must i wake
or leave one
please to take
 
sail on
sail on
brief swan
 
dw
 
now that IS a nonsense style nuttin... g'way bilber' n gedda life
 

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