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Recommend (1 recommendation so far) Message 1 of 9 in Discussion 
From: Susan  (Original Message)Sent: 2/5/2002 6:09 AM
 
...and where does this passage lead to....
 
 


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From: MSN NicknamekarasukokoroSent: 2/5/2002 4:09 PM
passing out
 
the mill
the mill
the robber mill
 
took my life
took my will
the robber mill
 
suffered then
as i passed in
but now i'm passing out
 
 
centime plus 2/5/2002
 
 
 

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Recommend  Message 3 of 9 in Discussion 
From: SusanSent: 2/5/2002 5:49 PM
you were born of this
narrow passageway.
you entered the world
crying -
rushed to shore.
sleep overcame you
from navigation
and vision.
the world awaited,
arms welcomed you -
forever.
 
~susan

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Recommend  Message 4 of 9 in Discussion 
From: DarkWindSent: 2/6/2002 2:33 AM
cold
bitter cold
this barge moves
so slowly toward the bend
around which is Georgetown
and the ghosts of all who have been
 

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Recommend  Message 5 of 9 in Discussion 
From: bamboobillySent: 2/6/2002 3:03 AM
 

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Recommend  Message 6 of 9 in Discussion 
From: SPKSent: 2/8/2002 2:06 AM
Canal Identity Crisis
 
So?
 
I
flow
slow?
 
And
what if
I'm manmade?
 
What?
 
I smell bad?
 
Hey man,
you made me
what I am.

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Recommend  Message 7 of 9 in Discussion 
From: J. YamashitaSent: 3/24/2002 3:22 PM
the narrows
 
where the calm goes to
 
die,
 
and the garbage of the convience
 
stores it energy for
 
the sea.

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Recommend  Message 8 of 9 in Discussion 
From: suzanneSent: 3/24/2002 10:26 PM
long time JY --
 
question.
 
for me to put this into the Intuitions page -- i have to make sure of the spellings you want.
 
is 'convience' supposed to be 'convenience'???
 
and do you want 'stores it' or 'stores its'????
 
susan

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From: J. YamashitaSent: 3/25/2002 1:29 AM
See...that's the problem when you're typing at 2:30 am...the fingers and the brain just DO NOT communicate.  Sorry.
 
should be: convenience, and "stores its"
 
Gomen nasai.
 
-J.

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