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Collaborations : Tits Under a Wine Bottle
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From: SPK  (Original Message)Sent: 4/11/2002 5:44 AM

Never surrender a night...

What if it is starless?

Perhaps only a sliver of moon?

A poem may lay...under an empty wine bottle
playing essence of long agos
but you are not a listener
you gaze
you gaze at legs
tits
and indigo eyes.

I say there is a darkness larger than night.

I say it is not knowing who a man is
or how to go about learning it.



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From: SPKSent: 4/11/2002 6:04 AM
A piece that midnight..and too much beer on my part...foisted upon helen and myself...

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From: helenSent: 4/11/2002 1:32 PM
gosh.........i wonder who contributed the "tit" line?
 
I was thinking that next time.....
    or maybe that was an old me from somewhere else
But never mind her,,,,,what i mean to say is....
    she is bad about finishing sentences.....i like to interrupt....
maybe we should put indentions to denote seperate voices...
specially if you are going to throw tits in the middle of the poem.
 
anyway.....it was fun.....thanks.
 

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From: ConnorSent: 4/11/2002 10:17 PM
So...Helen, the tit line was yours was it? ha ha.
Good collaboration. tits and all.
c

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From: helenSent: 4/12/2002 3:59 AM
no connor.....it weren't.

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From: susannahSent: 4/13/2002 6:03 AM
the title led me to believe this would be another type of poem both in content and form.
 
whatever gave me that idea?
 
now that i see the authors ---
this poem led me to believe this would be another type of entitlement.
 
susan 
nice job
needs more coordination tho' between 2 entirely different thinkers.  heh.

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