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From: Susan  (Original Message)Sent: 5/18/2002 7:25 AM
We have left the Planet Earth.  Our Sun is extinct. 
We have traveled millions and millions of light years for new life. 
We are strangers in a strange land.. 
now finish this tale....
 


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From: ConnorSent: 5/18/2002 8:48 PM
We need engineers, surveyors, horses, mules, steel tools,
leather bags bulging with provisions. Provender for our horses.
How many of us are there? The water glows as if illumined from within.
We drink it and we are  lighter. Each step carries us further.
No petrol, no machines nor batteries. Poets? Priests?
Yes, once we've pitched our great cloth tents we'll talk about accidents,
about gods and the architecture of crystals; then those poets can rave
with their ancient stories, sing of the infant mercury stealing the cattle
of Apollo, and being forgiven for it. And we will laugh,
and have a home again.

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From: RonSent: 5/19/2002 12:02 AM

Reached
through tumble
of sleep outliving death,
through dreaming
until old dreams perished
as the distant star
shrunken to dark hunger
and from all memory.

Leapfrogged
through hibernation,
generations surrendered
to suspension of living,
ever detached in lesser
universes of machines,
at flight from home
of the first travelers
but dust to us, the last.

Arrived
without a past,
in absence of gods
and against aridity
of geographers,
we rebelled,
wandered to wildness,
and with new voices,
prepare myths
to map a world.


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From: SusanSent: 5/20/2002 6:45 AM
a rubber planet.
 
the irony. 
think of the straitjackets
we can make
by hand.
 
only a few of us escaped.
 
now we come to one asylum
from another.
 
the irony.
 
two ships.
two landings.
 
& by any means and ways
(god!  the walking!)
we searched;
but we cannot find the others.
the others must find their own way.
 
we will not even be able to agree
on a name for this barren land;
and land must have a name,
meaning i.e., home.
or, gift -
or, prison.
something equivalent.
 
what will be their word for home,
and will we ever be able to call
this place a haven?
 
now what is M doing?
oh.  no.
i don't think M's computerphone
will work here.
 
~susan
5/20/02

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From: MSN NicknamekarasukokoroSent: 5/20/2002 8:35 PM
man, i did not expect a landscape
landscapes are so old world
like i kinna dig it but don't ya think
we could have found someplace
a little less earthy?
like ya know- i dunno. somekind of space junk or somethin.
but, if this is how it's got to be. if this is where you wanna land,
do me a goddamn favor will ya?
kick me in the head if i ever say i'd like to plant a garden.
i just can't dig going through that kind of loss again.
 
ateto mort 5/20/2002

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From: J. YamashitaSent: 5/24/2002 6:09 PM
And so, Sunday comes
and we bow our heads to the wind
and seek the wisdom of our fathers
in a place where no fathers ever walked
and life begins
as it ends
with a cry and a wisp of dust
thrown into the face
of a Sunday wind.

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From: MSN NicknameMeanders1112Sent: 5/27/2002 1:28 AM
"Vacate a Chasm" - (c) Meanders 05/26/2002
 
Once we took for granted
a sunlight ...when we could see
now the Sun is itself ...extinct...
which way now to spark the rocks
 
Must we go the other way
and guess the penguin's quest
and draw around his uniform
reflect a life in black and white?
 
Yet we have our memory
remember Milton's plight...
cajole the heated elements
for dance in Dante's fiery sight
 
Survivors of the blast from Earth
strangers now... light years of travel
out here in space we could  be one
without a need for community
 
If freedom was inside of Man
‘tis now in truth that it bears fruit
space that is everyman... his own
the Sun is gone, no one cares... the Human

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