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From: MSN Nicknamessnnakee  (Original Message)Sent: 10/8/2008 10:07 PM

How do you justify yourself

When somebody asks

How can you be with

A married man

How can you take a chance

On hurting somebody?

You don’t

You can dance fancy circles

Around yourself

You can say his wife

Doesn’t understand him

Or do things with him

So you fill a void

And he fills one in you

Hahaha yeah not just

That void

You just don’t think deep

Morals?

Hey, that never stopped

You before

And love seems to

Wash everything in innocence

I mean really

We’re not talking

Pedophilia here

I don’t live a white life

Nor a black one

And I don’t believe

In hell

Though karma makes

Me nervous.



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From: MSN NicknamessnnakeeSent: 10/8/2008 10:08 PM
sorry about the big spaces, but i don't want to delete and leave everybody wondering what was there. this was/is there.
-snake

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From: _susan_Sent: 10/9/2008 12:43 AM
not only that, snake--
but if you are not signed in, you can't see the person's name by the post.
and we definitely would not want to miss one of yours.
 
you couldn't resist, could you.
there, right in the middle, you gave yourself a good chuckle:
 

Hahaha yeah not just

That void

that was funny.  but don't be the comic who laughs at his/her own jokes!
although in this case, i can see how it would happen.

bad girl.  bad bad bad.

haha

suze


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Recommend  Message 4 of 5 in Discussion 
From: gypsySent: 10/9/2008 7:09 PM
I often wonder if we ever really cheat anyone other than ourselves. 

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From: wrongsideoftheroadSent: 10/9/2008 10:03 PM
i felt it lacking your usual poetical grit.
more rant, less imagery.

maybe the situation
warranted it.

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