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| | | From: ack (Original Message) | Sent: 10/29/2008 9:29 AM |
big B flat minor talk
bird with crest, perched on tall grass beside zephyr
swept clean reservoir,undulating.
sang a little and darted into undergrowth.looking for something, anything
to make it tick,like we do.
it's reed mate came by, crest-less , as small as a
B flat minor shaped thought.
looking for it's friend.pointed to where he should go.
B flat minor didn't take a jott of notice,
looking at me like i was insane and a fool.
only a human after all,had us well sussed,must have known we are crazy
and want to destroy things of beuty , hardly ever see
wanting only to attain,always attain things like we owned them, god and everything
even B flat minor.
as though we never hit the exit sign lit up in smokey neon red
we were born to enter mostly half alive, dead.
had a chat with B flat, the way you do.sqeezing lips together
so as they quivered, vibrated, replying to his twitterings.
every time he made two, i made two, and so on. we seemened to get along fine
even though i could not sing as well as he could.
tiptoed, on top of strong silent type, grass, shivering it's nakedness in the snake breeze.
most intelligent conversation ever had or will have.
B flat knew just about everything thier was to know and more,so much more !
as smacked lips together ,squeezing out chit chat , a couple appeared
looking at me as if i had escaped from somewhere they hide the keys from you
looked sheepish, B flat pretended he didn't know me !
dissapeared , without so much as a thankyou to find his friend ,the creep !
and i had no one to talk to, again
but the zephyr's breathe felt fine and good and i had some left,
even inside the inside.
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| | | From: gypsy | Sent: 10/29/2008 5:54 PM |
I like this, Ack. Please, reformat! gypsy |
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