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quivering, shivering (de)light (of fulfillment),

graceful the feet of ballet,

to and fro from head to toe

the happy hour crows alee,

aforth, no pause, the dance commits itself,

assuring angelic repose,

inner state freedom awaits,

unlock the shackles of yester woes.

delightful, ripeful cherry lips kiss

softness reaches it's peak,

high and low around they go

soft words of the antique.

sweet & light on its twinklytoes.

the happy hour crows alee?

uh, howzaboud maybe:

the happy hour crows

from prow to stern to lee ??

for more clarity? something. i dunno.

does this mean you collapse into bed left side first?

where sugar plum fairies dance in yer head?

oh katone.. what am i gonna do wit u.

never realized that this was on Metacriticism, katone.

i always check All Topics - so i never notice, until i go back.

what exactly do you mean by "the oldest topic"?

guess it didn't come out clear---ly.

Well, I guess the first thing that has to go is the title but on a secong thought it does suit the poem as it doesnt really have much sense to it....the oldest topic is love I guess it didnt come out clear...

I started out in earnest seriousness to write a good love poem but I guess along the way something went wrong I could only come up with rather silly words and sentences, hence this poem came about

is it really that bad?

I'm glad you responded though

and by the way I do sleep on my left side heheh

Do not withhold good from those who deserve it,

When it is in your power to act.

Well, I guess the first thing that has to go is the title but on a secong thought it does suit the poem as it doesnt really have much sense to it....the oldest topic is love I guess it didnt come out clear...

try Tropic. in fact, try Tropic of Something-or-other.

don't you think it has more of a cachet to it than Topic?

allow me to explain

I started out in earnest seriousness to write a good love poem but I guess along the way something went wrong....

now that's an old story.

susan

OH come on there's is nothing wrong with tropic topic and gigantic cocoNUT

now that I think about it I lost the thread...oops

well isnt it nice with some oldies once in a while

i have no f***kin' idea what you are talking about.

except, we all lose the thread sometimes -

but we find it again -- somehow.

i do know that you spelled your name wrong.

that always amuses me.

anywayz - i think i lost the thread here too, k.

are you listening to oldies but goodies records?

with your feet up on the dictionary??

what kind of M E T A criticism do you want?

OH MY JOVE (EYES WIDE OPEN, JAW ON THE FLOOR)!!!!!

I believe I have lost my mind over this piece I wrote sometime ago, I think we better forget about it, Im soo sorry to make you waste your time like this, I think using the dictionary as a pillow made my head spin in all directions, the thesaurus I use as a footstool, very comfy....

thanks for taking the time and being so patient with me...

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