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I offer this as an aesthetic
in the vein of the poetic
A poetic overview of poems
and a monostitch pentapodic
A Poem of Semiology
The poem should work as a whole
this means that everything that follows
is to be ignored. Remember,
a wild combo make good Jazz
The Spontenaity of Resurgence
Figure out how the poem should be red;
Sound=meter phonology unconscious rhythyms, use of
significant vs. distinctive shifts of articulation
belied by manipulation of time space, and vision
Verbal mimesis occasionaly becomes nemesis.
Meaning=remember how you took it the first
time through. This is called a plot line by some.
Or first extraction of reading?
statements or expressions, reactive or emotive?
is the concrete abstract, or merely abstracted concrete.
(bely the manipulation of time space and vision!)
Subtext would equal the Overtones and the second
extraction of meaning. Personal, local,
or universal image of sound in meter or not.
Suscribes, this work in vague, or accomplished ambiguity.
Ambiguity=defining relationships of meaning and image.
1. prolepsis=accomplishing the future in the present.
2. paradox=either contrary to opinion, or common sense.
3. zeugma=groupsofwords or en jambments that give variousgrou ps ofmeanings.
4. fractured frasing=constructions:odd vs. DiFerent...
5. polysemy=multiple meanings. Oh lud lud!
6. Fractured Frazing
Theme=man vs. self/god/state/reality, or nothing/
other/none of the above as topic loosely defined:
as: subject vs. representation.
Treatment=emotional connection to the theme ie...
reactive or Tranquility (emersen) Wordsworth
bless the statement, And, Oh! damn, to hell,
expression! (not) Pound
(Bely with words the manipulation, Of Space, Of Time, Of Expression!)
Structure=patterns of meanings
line beats in time
syllababble caounts, stanzas, or reasoning behind
the lack thereof
a tryst with mapping meaning
or image
into available forms ready made or making
communicable forms. Vocabulary versus rich structure.
What is the state of the Poet: does She sing with a different voice, :A breathe unto the nothing; A gust unto god ;A wind
Vico I think said the following,
I think: three terms which must come to grips with
1. theocratic=an awe at the supernatural
2. aristocratic=heroic, didactic, pentameter
3. solopsism= the toughest one of all which before
the fall of the caotic inner being and causes awe again.
individuals eat, Archetypes feast or feed.
And fourth of all,
do you still
like the poem.
A:B:X::A Monostitch Pentapodic
Amore≠shrill:shrill:loud:high-pitched;
Glamour≠low:low:larynx:slow-pitched::
Oakbough≠wind:wind:cloud:cold-rings;
Willow≠blow:blow:cumulonimbus:ice-rings::
that, not equal to this is this is this compared to
this, not equal to that is this is this
the whole former relating to the whole further
that not equal to this is this is this compared to
this not equal to that is this is this
the whole former relating to the whole futher
post≠deciduous:grapes:wire:throat;
shim≠ghosts of old porters reel past being;;
Set we forth our keels to godly breakers
'til Zefyr beat us to the leward chains:::
Coda≠song:song:end:lyric;
Embleme≠meaning:meaning:definition:end::
A set:isrise:isrise:iceblue:isred::
ariselikedawnisbeautifultoview.
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very clever, i rather enjoyed this and i feel smarter already however the last bit totally left me ? katone |
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| | | From: sue | Sent: 2/14/2003 12:37 AM |
// parse command line options, if any, to override defaults from The Spoonbill Generator Wood-daemon, Guide Me South! The bittern is a curious bird, according to the sage
Who kept a dozen, howling in an alabaster cage,
Where they were free from commas, to tidy up the sense,
So keep your punctuation locked up in your tense These birds there were aplenty, ten and then eek two,
The "eek" was from the parakeet, as all the prophets knew
For they told of its coming, and of its going, too,
But, alas, did not foresee the burning of the zoo: The bitterns did: they fled the fated coops three days before
And tried to send out messages in bleakest Semaphore,
Alas, it's quite impossible to semaphore while flying
So those who warned of danger paid the ruesome price of dying. The sage beheld disaster, which he at least foresaw,
And was wearing a steel helmet when the bitterns hit the floor
Though that was out of fury, not through their being hoist,
And, because it had been raining, the bitterns were quite moist And so the floor got dented and also rather wet
The birds love bird food
Let us not forget 
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This spoonbill thing looks interestin'
I will watch and jump on in if things seem appropriate
'the floor got dented and also very wet' is very savory |
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how delicious this is, back again from the forests
Sockery
And up into the equation
pops
I
and suddenly the clock stops
and motion stops
and out of made-up nowher's the dead
realized they've juiced a live on
into living
no brogues, but words
stupid words fr stupid people
words that make these
nerve wracked towers
a mockery
a mockery
a stick it in your last refuge
sockery... |
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| | | From: _susan_ | Sent: 12/22/2006 8:31 PM |
to paraphrase Dante: well kiss my socks! i thought you were dead, popeye. would you be on the funemployment line again? s. |
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You know,
I take long walks in places where people don't like me (us, in general), I do some stuff and chat up the ladies, the gay boys and loosers (they're the only ones who'll chat with me), so yes I am in the funployment line for x-mas. I packed my son off to college last spring, did a little job and came back to lounge... |
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| | | From: _susan_ | Sent: 12/24/2006 10:25 PM |
you wrack my nerve towers. lol |
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it is exactly this type of intellectual nonsense that consequently should be ignored! |
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| hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaha ha, kiss me pretty pink starfish, you're the one who should be avoided Mm, Wrong Side Of The Patio |
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at least that was creative. |
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