didn't i just use that word - empathy?
i'm sure i did - somewhere.
the context is a little off here, crow.
maybe a little reorganization of the poem; maybe start off with:
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suppose he'd landed
on a different bank
(to talk)
and he said...suppose he told me this
(he...) died last life
after an alcoholic spree
suppose he'd come again
come back again
different with a name the same
suppose i met him on a walk
and stopped momentarily (though these lives);
i have known the rapture of many,
[and] brought
[a] little bliss,
[a passionate] kiss.
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or something like that.
susan