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From: MSN Nicknamesabakhwaab  (Original Message)Sent: 11/8/2004 4:54 PM

 

Without You

Without You
my mind stops thinking…
without you
my lips stop speaking…
without you
my night are sleepless…

without you
my eyes stop dreaming…
without you
my ears stop hearing…
without you
my heart beats in distress…

without you
I feel incomplete, Darling!!!



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From: ^~JustLSent: 11/8/2004 6:02 PM
Welcome Aboard, sab...
This piece is...Kinda sweet, but wonder
if it gives the other person too much credit.  ;) 
Or is it thoughts of endearment to one you're still with?
Could do without all the 'without yous'

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From: _susan_Sent: 11/8/2004 11:29 PM
so what's the buzz on your honey?
 
i think i'll call you, sahib -
because your ID is too complicated to spell.
 
oh yes, welcome to the poets' place.
susan