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poetry readings : HEREOS REST
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From: bigguy  (Original Message)Sent: 6/5/2004 2:02 AM

HEREOS REST

 

Great moments in time

Magically revisited

With the perfection of hindsight

Analysed, brooded over, criticized

Leaders risen to the occasion

Their flaws now laid bare

Seem as mere ragged mortals

Tossed in the winds of chance

 

These icons from the past

Now sadly tarnished

Performed their will on the world

In the hope of final victory

With blood dripping still from the last order

They moved man and machine

To stop and then defeat

Self proclaimed mortal gods

 

Even as we revisit

Beaches and lands of history

Praises still showered

On our grand fathers deeds

Even as we trod

Our own difficult path

We can not let heroes, leaders rest

In the comfort of their deeds

 

Without the magic’s of today

They dared the lives of many

In the final push to victory

On foreign beaches and lands

Casting might against might

The struggle numbing and deadly

They performed deeds and saw moments

Best never experienced by man

 

Let us learn from the past

The cause for the reasons

So we might avoid the struggles

Of blood, of men, of machines

But let us be hold firm

To our right to freedom

But let us also allow

Past leaders their final earned rest



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From: MSN NicknameCrashDan314Sent: 6/5/2004 6:06 PM
Very well done BG is it one of your own.
                                                                  Dan 3.14 

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From: bigguySent: 6/5/2004 7:12 PM
Yes Dan I wrote that after watching some of these D Day programs.
 
Once again I have an editing error in the 4 th line from the bottom....the word 'be' doesn't belong in the line.
 
bigguy

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From: ValSent: 6/6/2004 7:42 PM
who cares about the spelling, i get it.  thanks for giving me something to think about bigguy.  your words ring true.
 

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From: MSN Nicknamecj_tweety1Sent: 6/7/2004 5:44 AM
Thanks  Bigguy,  was  very  nice,  an  a  good  reminder for all of us

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From: edd-ieSent: 6/11/2004 11:16 AM

BG,

B-4 U file this away for posterity U mite want to check the spelling of the title, as well. My spell-check indicates a couple of vowels turned around. I looked at it several times over the past week before I realized what was bothering me LOL. I don't normally do this but I had a poem in a national magazine once and some "friends" let me submit it with a minor spelling error - - telling me of it only AFTER it came out. I guess the policy for magazines is to NOT change anything?? Spelling is my nemisis in writing(or one of them? LOL) so I really like the friendly,  easy and anything-goes type found in the chat rooms.

MOST important, it is a beautiful poem!!

TY   Ed - 


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