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From: MSN NicknameBroken_Passion  (Original Message)Sent: 3/26/2008 4:18 PM
I am your shield, your knight, your saving grace...
I am your joy, your laughter, your happy place...
I am your heart, your soul, your piece of mind...
I am the only the thing you can never find!

I am your wisdom, your knowledge, your guiding light...
I am your strength, your hope, your will to fight...
I am your peace, your serenity, your sense of calm...
I am the only one you never meant to harm!

You are my downfall, my demise, my deepest regret...
You are my sorrow, my pain, my reason to fret...
You are my suffering, my torment, my broken heart...
You are the only reason my life fell apart!

You are my shiver, my sweat, my nightmares passed...
You are my demon, my curse, my secret past...
You are my weakness, my shadow, my only shame...
You are the only one, that I truly do blame!

I am your other half, that makes you complete...
You are the one, I can never defeat...
I am the one that you want by your side...
You are the one, from who my heart cannot hide!



Lets never be apart again!! x x


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From: MSN NicknameLabrador151smile1Sent: 3/26/2008 4:49 PM
 This is very well written, Did you  write this Passion?
 Almost like Love    Hate

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From: MSN Nicknamefrmear2ear03Sent: 3/26/2008 5:34 PM
Broken Passion this is excellent! Well done!
We look forward to more of your greatness

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From: MSN Nicknamemad_is_onSent: 3/28/2008 4:02 AM
Brilliant expression of your heart and mind needing to be in synch, hence better together..  Enjoyed reading it..
 

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From: MSN NicknameBroken_PassionSent: 3/29/2008 2:24 PM
Yeah labrador, I have a few poems in the archives. I always write my own poems but for the past year I have been unable too. I think for me I have to be in love or heart broken or at least in a relationship. This one however was a memory after me and an ex split and then got back together.

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From: MSN NicknameNamedCandyGirlSent: 3/29/2008 8:52 PM
A brilliant poem, Broken Passion. Truly written from the heart. More, please!
 
Candy Girl

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