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Poetry : My New Found Friend
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From: MSN NicknameLabrador151smile1  (Original Message)Sent: 3/26/2008 8:29 PM
 Some thing I wrote when I was a  young girl/

   HPIM1302.jpg picture by labradorsunshine  
                                  My New Found Friend 

I LEFT MY HOME ONE EARLY MAY MORNING
WITH  A  PEN  AND BOOK IN MY HAND
THE WIND WAS WARM AND GENTLY BLOWING
ACROSS  THE FIELD OF OUR GREAT LAND

DECIDING TO WALK AGAINST THE WIND
WANDERING THOUGHTS TO WRITE WITH MY PEN
FEW MORE YARDS I CAME TO A CLEARING
WANDERING  SLOWLY  AND NOT CARING

I SETTLED  DOWN ON MY CRYING ROCK
 TO ALL THE CRITTERS I SMILED AND TALKED
JUST BESIDE  ME A PINK FLOWER BED
THERE I DECIDED TO  WRITE INSTEAD

I CLEARED MY THOUGHTS TO WRITE A POEM
WHY I WAS LEFT ALL ALONE
SOON THE MEMORIES FLASHED BACK AT ME
SOME I NEVER WANTED TO SEE

AS MY THOUGHTS WENT BACK IN TIME
 I TOOK MY PEN AND WROTE MY FIRST LINE
"WHY DO YOU NOT LOVE ME DEAR GOD IN HEAVEN,
FOR YOU SEE I AM ONLY ELEVEN

I AM ONE OF YOUR CHILDREN LIKE ALL THE REST
DID YOU  FORGET ME,OR IS THIS A TEST?
FOR A MOMENT I LAY MY PEN DOWN
TO  FIGHT BACK A  CHOKING  SOUND

I CLOSED MY EYES TO FIGHT BACK THE TEARS
I TRY NOT TO  CRY,CAUSE NOBODY CARES
MY LITTLE ARMS REACH UP TO THE SKY
'TAKE ME DEAR FATHER I WANT TO  DIE"

THE FEELINGS I CARRY  TEARS ME APART
SHOULD NEVER COME TO A  CHILDS  HEART
A FEW YARDS AWAY I SPOTTED A LITTLE RABBIT
EATING AND WATCHING ME,A FORM OF HABIT              

I WIPED MY TEARS AND SLOWLY WALKED OVER
WATCHING THE RABBIT EATING A  CLOVER
HAPPY AT THIS MOMENT,ALL PAIN GONE AGAIN
FOR NOW I HAVE FOUND A PLAYMATE AND FRIEND

WITH MY CHILDLIKE VOICE I SING A SONG
"HOP ,HOP,LITTLE RABBIT WON'T YOU COME ALONG"
I MERRILY  DANCE MY WAY  BACK TO THE ROCK
SIT  DOWN GENTLY WITH MY BOOK ON MY FROCK         

THERE I BEGAN TO DRAW MY BUNNY
UNDER THE SKY SO BRIGHT AND SUNNY
THE DAY HAD ENDED ME FALLING ASLEEP
DREAMING OF THE RABBIT I WANTED TO KEEP

 THE PAIN I HAD FELT UPON THAT DAY
ALL FORGOTTEN IN A MOMENT OF PLAY
DUE TO THE RABBIT,MY NEW FOUND FRIEND
SO THIS IS HOW MY STORY ENDS
   

Sunshine
Lab


 
 


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From: MSN Nicknamefrmear2ear03Sent: 3/27/2008 6:59 AM
Lab it is truly good to see, that you began to usher in your greatness at such a young age. For one so young to create as you have, I congradulate you, and graciously look forward to more

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From: MSN Nicknamebobsvoiceofwisdom1Sent: 3/27/2008 5:49 PM
Stop messing about, and get it in the pot. With some onion's , carrot's, and a leek or two.. One clove of garlic and some herb's..EYUP, I'm coming over now, I dont want you to scoff the lot..
 
                  BOB UPTH NORTH. gourmet.

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From: MSN NicknameLabrador151smile1Sent: 3/27/2008 9:15 PM
o H BEHAVE YOUR SELF,
 I PUT YOU IN THE POT  FOR A  STIR FRY SMOTHERED IN GARLIC AND PEPPER...  HA

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From: MSN NicknameNamedCandyGirlSent: 3/29/2008 8:54 PM
A beautiful poem. Truly excellent.
 
Candy Girl

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From: MSN NicknameBroken_PassionSent: 4/3/2008 9:02 AM
Its rare I reply - So be proud in the fact I actually took the time :P

I like one specific type of poetry but despite this I still read many types. To me it is more important what others take from a poem than how it was written, and that causes me to read all types.

Back to the point.

I like this poem, not the type I normally prefer but I like the way it was written all the same. I also like what it was about and the image it sends to my minds eye. Thank you for the great read.

Broken Passion (hoping to read more in the future)

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From: MSN NicknameLabrador151smile1Sent: 4/3/2008 1:41 PM
 Thank you kindly  for taking the time to read,I am no poet.not pretend to  be  one,  these are words written  by child Not adult,  by me of course,
 Now I am a   adult,I donot  write so good,But still enjoy  it anyways , I write stories of my life.
 again thank you
 Lab Sunshine

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