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Poetry : Don't Close Your Eyes
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From: MSN NicknameNamedCandyGirl  (Original Message)Sent: 6/27/2008 8:46 PM
Don't Close Your Eyes
 
 
Don't close your eyes to the pain,
Don't let the man drive you insane,
Don't let him use you and abuse you,
Because you are your own person,
Don't follow his "rules",
Don't let yourself be his fool,
Because you are his fool,
You let him bruise you,
You let him abuse you,
By bleeding you dry,
By watching the tears you cry,
And not caring about your pain:
Only caring about his emotional gain,
Because it makes him feel good,
To see you cry,
It makes him feel good,
To watch you take it,
And inside quietly die,
He doesn't love you,
Because he treats you like dirt,
He just watches you,
Hurt, hurt, hurt,
He'll never change,
No matter how many times,
You convince yourself he will,
Because he doesn't love you honey,
And I know you can't leave,
Because of lack of money,
But you have a friend in me,
You have me to help you see,
A way out of this nasty situation,
Where his actions are a mystery,
Where you can only perceive your pain,
But you CAN recover,
You can seek help,
Because you are not his dog,
That gets a kick and yelps.
 
 
Candy Girl


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From: MSN NicknameEarth_KryygreSent: 7/4/2008 10:55 AM
Hi Candy,
 
Just thought I'd let you know that - right now - this poem means a lot to me and I'm showing it to a friend who really needs it.
 
So thanks.
 
Stripey.
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From: MSN Nicknamebobsvoiceofwisdom1Sent: 7/5/2008 1:57 PM
OOOOOH, Candy girl. You cannot go round spreading rumour's of that ilk. You must obey men all the time, otherwise you would have mayhem. Nice ryming word's though. Nice poem I mean.lol