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From: MSN NicknameScatcat_kev1  (Original Message)Sent: 8/21/2006 2:19 AM
Brain: Wierd, I know I am wierd and I know I stray so far from reality sometimes I should get locked up in a padded cell but I can't help it.
 
Heart: yeah well, I stray from the life we are in but I stick in reality.
 
Brain: You are one complex person you know that? it's no wonder no-one can figure you out.
 
Heart: What you sometimes fail to realize is that when you venture off and think of those strange mad things it's because of me... The emotions I fill this body with carries you off to places.
 
Brain: Can I have an example?
 
Heart: Okay. You know when you strayed off imagining you were watching the soul dance amongst the clouds?
 
Brain: Yes, of course... I am very fond of that thought and I think of it often.
 
Heart: Well anyway...That's because of me, I was so joyous of everything with Rachel I couldn't resist dancing around like ... well I dont know what like... but you knew I was off galavanting about and in my excitement it created a feeling of bliss and perfection, like the body was floating...
 
Brain: Yeah that makes sense... I mean, sorry for interupting... but it all makes sense... everything I think about is because of things you make the body feel.
 
Heart: You know what is wierd?
 
Brain: That we are all part of the same one person and we interact with each other as if we are not one?
 
Heart: Okay smart ass.. yeah thats what I was going to say.
 
Brain: I know most of the time what is going on with you... and whats going on in the body etc...
 
Heart: You are the traffic of information... I cant even skip a beat without you knowing.
 
Brain: Yeah - and ever since we met Rachel I have found it hard to keep control of some of the body... OI now.. no dirty thoughts I didnt mean that piece of the body... then again I never had control of that he always had his own mind...
Shush dont make me laugh before you say anything...
I am always thinking so much on Rachel I forget to keep breathing.
... thats how I effect you isn't it?
 
Heart: You mean when I start racing so fast I skip beats or stagger and jolt?
 
Brain: Yeah.
 
Heart: All I know for sure... is that since we met Rachel this body has been a glorious thing to be a part of.
 
Brain: -Sigh- Yeahh.... When you say you stray from life but stick to reality what did you mean?
 
Heart: Haha... Before Rachel all I did was my Job... Since we met Rachel I have had an Identity. That's why you try so hard to protect me.
 
Brain: Oh?
 
Heart: Without wanting to sound wierd... you might as well call me Rachel... I am consumed by her, I am her... without her I dont exist I am just a frozen organ.. working to the point of complete basics, you will be emotionless, but you enjoy this emotion and it keeps you and the body going. That's why you fight so passionatley for it, for me... for Rachel!
 
Brain: I ... Talk to you later... ... No man can understand a woman... so it's not surprising we cant understand fickle hearts!
 
Heart: OK later... and its not that we are fickle... its just sometimes you get confused with the emotions we send out and fuck things up and then are confused by misery for heartache, but listen before you go... This is "Love!" Dont fuck it up!
 
Brain: ok


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From: MSN NicknameIced-Gem�?/nobr>Sent: 8/21/2006 9:36 AM
 
 
I love this Scatcat, more please
 
 

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From: MSN Nicknameio_sono_SandroSent: 8/27/2006 12:29 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely!
 
>>  Heart: Haha... Before Rachel all I did was my Job... Since we met Rachel I have had an Identity  <<
 
Rarely I've read a nice description of love as this one.
 
Thank you, reading your words I felt lighter.
 
Ciao

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From: MSN NicknameScatcat_kev1Sent: 8/31/2006 7:15 PM
Thanks
I dont get much time online but I do my best to visit the site when I do.

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From: MSN NicknameScatcat_kev1Sent: 8/31/2006 7:18 PM
Oh and Sandro - Your welcome.
 
I like anything I write to have a positive effect on atleast one person. =]

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 Message 7 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamemad_is_onSent: 3/6/2007 7:22 AM
Fickle hearts? A heart is a victim to the mind.
Follow your heart has always been your advice.
Follow yours.. follow mine.
The brain (mind) has a way of being our demise.
Yet some things can't be ignored.
Why are you always on my mind?
Why can't my heart let anyone else in?
Why, as time goes by, does it run deeper?
Why do I just want to cling to you and never let you go?
The Brain may have logical answers but the Heart knows the truth.
I will follow you if you follow me..
 

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From: MSN Nicknamefrmear2ear3Sent: 3/18/2007 11:28 PM
Well done Scatcat.
 
It is, when we truly feel it, those thoughts and feelings passed between mind and heart, love.
 
Our wish, a beginning, without end
 
 

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From: MSN NicknameBreathstrokes_Sent: 10/18/2007 5:37 PM
OH the conflict between the heart and mind!  And the distraction when they unite...sometimes good sometimes not.  Like fire and Ice... and oceanic overflow.  " this is LOVE, don't fuck it up!"  I really enjoyed  this... I understood it.  BRAVO to you!
 
xo
Breathstrokes

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From: MSN NicknameNamedCandyGirlSent: 11/21/2007 2:32 PM
Brilliant.
 
Candy Girl

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From: MSN Nicknamefrmear2ear03Sent: 11/22/2007 1:01 AM
Just read it once again, and with a smile upon my face, understanding my own personal experience. The communication between what our minds try to express to us, how our heart try it's best to intervene to give it's truth, and what path we end up taking, which ever direction that might be.
 
Once again, Scatcat, WELL DONE!!!  

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