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From: MSN NicknameBroken_Passion  (Original Message)Sent: 3/24/2008 10:13 PM
I am your shield, your knight, your saving grace...
I am your joy, your laughter, your happy place...
I am your heart, your soul, your piece of mind...
I am the only the thing you can never find!

I am your wisdom, your knowledge, your guiding light...
I am your strength, your hope, your will to fight...
I am your peace, your serenity, your sense of calm...
I am the only one you never meant to harm!

You are my downfall, my demise, my deepest regret...
You are my sorrow, my pain, my reason to fret...
You are my suffering, my torment, my broken heart...
You are the only reason my life fell apart!

You are my shiver, my sweat, my nightmares passed...
You are my demon, my curse, my secret past...
You are my weakness, my shadow, my only shame...
You are the only one, that I truly do blame!

I am your other half, that makes you complete...
You are the one, I can never defeat...
I am the one that you want by your side...
You are the one, from who my heart cannot hide!



Lets never be apart again!! x x


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From: MSN NicknameBroken_PassionSent: 3/25/2008 8:45 AM
Oops. I meant to put this in poetry, not here.

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Sent: 3/25/2008 8:56 AM
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From: MSN Nicknamefrmear2ear03Sent: 3/25/2008 8:59 AM
Broken Passion, that is an incredible poem! Yes, I agree with you, that placing it in our Poetry Section, would be very apropriate.

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