a few things Earthy
I finally got it after a wait...it's looking good, but I'm finding the sheer number of names a bit confusing, and the explanation of Emma and the other guy...twice in one line is a bit erm..
I'm sorry if I sound so critical of everyone's writing..I'm just trying to be helpful! I really admire anyone who can write anything really, cos I struggle.
Oh yes and it was lovely having a chat again with you the other evening. We must continue where my cursed phone interrupted us, some time, yes?

