MSN Home  |  My MSN  |  Hotmail
Sign in to Windows Live ID Web Search:   
go to MSNGroups 
Free Forum Hosting
 
Important Announcement Important Announcement
The MSN Groups service will close in February 2009. You can move your group to Multiply, MSN’s partner for online groups. Learn More
Heritics of Heroin[email protected] 
  
What's New
  
  Welcome  
  Heritics of Heroin Mandate  
  Message Board  
  Junkie Jargon  
  PoliticalRants  
  Poetic Freedom  
  The Prayer Wall  
  ~Shattered Lives~ A Mother's Story By Karen  
  **In Memory Of Meg**  
  **Information Page**  
  The E.R Overdose Video  
  Medical Info~Q&A  
  Treatments  
  Our Fav Movies~Sounds~Books  
  Odds & Ends  
  The Arcade  
  In The News  
  Links  
  Opiates  
  Pictures  
  Member Profile  
  Document Folder  
  Time Zone Converter  
  
  
  Tools  
 
Poetic Freedom : ME
Choose another message board
 
     
Reply
 Message 1 of 11 in Discussion 
From: brickwall  (Original Message)Sent: 7/27/2006 4:55 AM
 

Thoughts provoke us, like wind that blows

Unseen by us, but ever felt,

Nicely warm or bitter cold

Unto us, it gets its hold

Like the weed that never asks

But sprouts before us in our path

So little different from a flower

Yet, hated for its power

The power to latch onto soil and soul

Despite our efforts or human toil

One wanted the other not

Like the focus of our thought

One brings pleasure one brings pain

However, in the end they are both the same

Yet, one needs care to keep it there

The other stays as if to dare

Daring to be stopped, not asked or wanted for, even so

The weed not wanted ever grows

And in our effort to remove it from our soil

We constantly toil and toil

Frustrating our will and our might

It has no concern for our plight

We remove it in the hope

That something else might learn to cope

We plant a flower in its place

Care, tend, and hope for grace

Yet, the flower dies before us

The weed grows on, to ignores us

Both weed and flower come from seed

Whether planted, sown, or born from dust

The results appear the same to us

Yet, the weed gets the blame

Because unwanted, it gets the shame

The guilty gardener accepts the blame

Darkness surrounds us like a fog,

Yet more pervasive, like a mob

The agony of the mind

When the weed turns to a vine

A vine that strangles hope and light

And chokes the flowers from our sight

Kill it kill it

Some will say

But are they with you on that day

The day the weed chokes the flower

And demonstrates its mighty power

Or do they only see the flower gone

And ask themselves what went wrong

Seldom is the choking seen or heard

Without denial always has the final word

Yet sun and water is what they need

To make it from a seed

We water with love or hate

But the flower this will soon dissipate

Yet the weed holds on, to whatever it gets

Its needs, its wants, always met

Plus the weed sets roots very deep

That invades our lives, even in sleep

However, the flower roots are so shallow

Moreover, can wilt within the hour

But not the weed, oh behold

It is ever, oh so bold

It cannot be denied, pulled, or stripped

Even apparent death won’t loose its grip

The flowers beautiful yet so trite

But the weed is there every night




First  Previous  2-11 of 11  Next  Last 
Reply
 Message 2 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameEXSent: 7/27/2006 6:33 AM
 

Reply
 Message 3 of 11 in Discussion 
From: brickwallSent: 7/28/2006 5:10 AM
Thanks EX, never share my porms for rear of peoples reaction i.e. he's crazy, lol
nice to have a place to share with those who might understand.
Sorry about format couldn't figure out how to get rid of spacing.
God bless, TJ

Reply
The number of members that recommended this message. 0 recommendations  Message 4 of 11 in Discussion 
Sent: 7/28/2006 5:34 AM
This message has been deleted by the author.

Reply
The number of members that recommended this message. 0 recommendations  Message 5 of 11 in Discussion 
Sent: 7/28/2006 5:40 AM
This message has been deleted due to termination of membership.

Reply
 Message 6 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nickname©ShaSent: 7/28/2006 7:08 AM
I tried to respond earlier today but MSN was not having any of it. Guess they were going through their normal monthly group page problems.
 
Anyway..I wanted to say 'Wow' profound and definitely written from a place of knowledge & experience. You have no cause to be shy about sharing such insightful and talented work TJ..really.  It's often the norm though..addiction often ciomes with low self-esteem problems. Poetry is art..as such there is no good or bad imho.
 
Be well..and please keep writing (and sharing).

Reply
 Message 7 of 11 in Discussion 
From: brickwallSent: 7/28/2006 6:51 PM
Sprained, yes I wrote it. Need to come up with different title just called it "ME" because that's what I wrote on the floppy disk I put it on. But here's the crazy part. I said in one of my first posts that I would put up a poem and that was the one I was thinking of, went to look for it on computer (where I thought it was) GONE!! I was really bummed because I had already lost alot of my poems a few years before. People who answered my post said they were waiting for me to post poem,  last weekend my brother was going through some of my crap from recent move back home and came walking downstairs with a box of misc. computer crap and said "here dude thought you might need some of this shit" and in the box I found a floppy disk labled ME ???????? put it in comp. and there it was! Crazy.
Till next time, TJ

Reply
 Message 8 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nickname©ShaSent: 7/28/2006 8:14 PM
Some say there are no coincidences...others say everything is random. Depending on the situation I seem to go back and forth on this..but I have  noticed..when I put in...I get back out.  Simple as that.
 
Just like your effort of wanting and looking for the poem you wrote produced a positive result.
 
I don't think it coincidence..,,can you imagine if we really applied ourselves..like if we used the effort we put into staying high on creating a decent life for ourselves.
 
I've heard people say that when they try and get clean nothing goes their way..maybe it's because the 'desire'  isn't really there yet..we often don't put our whole hearts into it. Maybe that's why it seems so hard.
 
The answers seem so simple on a logical level..it's the emotional shit that seems to get us every time.
 
So I guess the way around that one is to learn how to handle our emotions...
 
Ahhh..
 
 

Reply
The number of members that recommended this message. 0 recommendations  Message 9 of 11 in Discussion 
Sent: 7/29/2006 1:36 AM
This message has been deleted due to termination of membership.

Reply
 Message 10 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSuziblues2Sent: 7/29/2006 8:22 AM
TJ: 
 
VERY nice poetry!  I love it.  I sure can relate.  I sure can feel it too.
 
luv,
sue

Reply
 Message 11 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamejoesmom7Sent: 7/29/2006 2:23 PM
TJ
 
You have quite the talent.  I hope that you post more of your work.  Writing is alot easier than talking sometimes.......the paper does not talk back and will always agree on whatever you say.........
 
Loved it
Jackie

First  Previous  2-11 of 11  Next  Last 
Return to Poetic Freedom