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Creative Writing : Creations
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From: MSN Nicknamelittlespirit08  (Original Message)Sent: 3/25/2008 1:00 AM
Creations
 
 
walking in our world
bare feet upon soft green grass
the life giving earth below
 
as the sun shines down
a shadow drifts over the ground
following footsteps
 
touched by the wind
gently tossing long hair
bringing scents of spring
 
falling to the ground
the shadow lies still
the blue sky shows its beauty
 
white clouds touch the sky
a large hawk circles above
trees reach to the heavens
 
the wind makes leaves dance
and carries prayers above
To The Creator


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From: MSN NicknameJust_Jess_tooSent: 3/28/2008 2:14 AM
loved it littlespirit........very soft...and the outdoors could almost be felt while reading..
 
JJ

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From: MSN NicknameŠourdoughSent: 3/28/2008 7:06 AM
I love the image of the dancing leaves. Well done!

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From: MSN Nicknamegr_and_funkSent: 3/28/2008 9:06 AM
I could SEE the Creation......Well worded!!...

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From: STARSent: 3/28/2008 12:40 PM
Awww..... what everyone else has said

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