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From: MSN NicknameJust_Jess_too  (Original Message)Sent: 3/25/2008 11:06 PM
he rolls along his boundaries
angry and churning
foam spewing from his mouth
icey fingers sometimes reaching
over the edges there
 
winters wrath has taken its toll
leaving behind this dirty mass
shoving foward ever forward
to empty into nothingness
 
when will the season come to calm
this loved one into serenity
our favorite place to sit and ponder
upon his banks in spring
that we may come to love our river once
again.


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From: MSN Nickname_PenylaneSent: 3/25/2008 11:19 PM
Oh, you are longing for spring!   I've never seen a cold river...I can picture it.   This one makes me shiver!   Good writing, Jess.   I think I might be inspired to write again.  Thank you!

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From: MSN Nicknamegr_and_funkSent: 3/26/2008 2:15 AM
Spring or a pissed off lover..

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From: STARSent: 3/27/2008 12:38 PM
Oh yeahhhh.... You hit it, dead on.   ...I live within sight and sound of a couple streams that go from raging white water and churning ice outs to demure August tricklets...  they are rather like people...  great write, Jessie... you're decidedly unstuck

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From: MSN Nicknamelittlespirit08Sent: 3/27/2008 7:25 PM
love your writing

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