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Creative Writing : JUST A SMUDGE
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From: STAR  (Original Message)Sent: 4/19/2008 9:49 PM
JUST A SMUDGE
 
A blob, a smudge,
just a little thing
that sullies the stucco
all white and clean
above my shower's steam.
It's a stain, I mean.
Made of blood now darkened
There's a year's age on it, you see.
I stood there, lathered,
that nice day last year and spotted her..
reached my arm up languidly
and with one finger.. squished her 
as she slept there.
Such a little thing to do
to become a longtime mem'ry
such as this.
Being in there now 
always hauls that pleasant afternoon
right through my mean spiritedness,
to now 
from way last June.
To you, mosquito, a little bow.
Little one, you live on.
 
 
 
 


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From: MSN Nicknamegr_and_funkSent: 4/22/2008 6:38 AM
Got your ASS bit for the first time this year did ya???...I'm sure that brought this one on......Very well said..I thought ya was talkin mold till you was Naked..and spotted her..then I knew..Your Good Starry.. 

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From: STARSent: 4/22/2008 4:39 PM
lol  This is a fun one, in't it?   And, noooooo... lol.... havn't had my arse chewed yet... not yet, but any day now, though!!!  Been dreadin the little buggerers...                                           

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From: MSN Nicknamemonty0007Sent: 4/22/2008 8:11 PM
"Ode to a skeeter I squished dead last June"   would have taken all of the suspense out of it I suppose.
 
...which is why I don't write poetry...
 
Nice one, Star! 

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From: MSN NicknameJust_Jess_tooSent: 4/22/2008 9:17 PM
only star could make art form outa the story of a squished mosquito........lmao...stay ya word wizz you... thanks for the journey into your crazee mind....
JJstill laughing

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From: STARSent: 4/23/2008 10:52 AM
Thanks, Monty
 
Now you, JJ... you gaveth a compliment, then tooketh away... with that "crazee mind"  lolol     ( I know, I know... & I'm j/ing) lol
 
Thx, girls.
 
Monty?  If you did write poetry... what type wouldit be... any idee? 
 
BTW... first mossies showed up in the evening, yesterday & covered our screen door... huge and thrifty breeding females... looking sooooo healthy... appears they had a good season.  I mean, when a skeet is so big the dog barks at it...

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From: MSN Nicknamegr_and_funkSent: 4/25/2008 6:43 AM
Buckshot ....or Move...

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