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Creative Writing : Sleep Good My Little Angel
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From: MSN Nicknamepeanut08roach  (Original Message)Sent: 4/27/2008 3:08 AM

<o:p> This is a poem I wrote my  mom awhile back..........I have another I will post later just have to type it out... I wrote one the day she passed.  Hope you enjoy, I am not that good of a writer but it is what I like to do!</o:p>

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Sleep good my little angel..............
On a cold winter evening a child was born, the mother would never know how much of an impact she would make.........
You cradled and nursed me until I could crawl and eat on my own......
You read stories to me every night.........
You were always there for me........
I MISS YOU!
When I stole a piece of gum from the candy store you scolded me and made me bring it back.............
When I was out after dark you searched for me..........
When I was at the bottom of the pool, you dove in after me.........
When I was hurt you were there.............
When I was sick you were by my side.........
I MISS YOU!
You raised me right, yeah we had hard times that made me hate you, but I forgave you
You helped me with my projects.............
You helped me learn to read, write, and fight............
You helped me learn about other races and raised me treating everyone equally.............
You taught me not to discriminate against anyone...........
When I wanted to run away you did not hold me back..........
When I wanted to grow you did not stop me...........
When I wanted to learn you helped.............
I MISS YOU!
We went through a lot of rough times, I know, but deep down I knew I Loved you............
As I sit here crying wanting to be cradled, I cannot because you are gone.......
I left you after thirteen years..............
I left you alone........
I was the only one who could help you, I was the only one there to protect you when you were hurt..............
You made me grow up and I thank you for that,
I learned to protect you and me at a young age, I may have got hurt but I would never let you get hurt...............
I look back at the good times and that is all that I wish to remember, because you are my mother and I will do anything for you……�?
And forever you will always be in my heart.........
Because I MISS YOU!
I went through a lot of hurt growing up, would I trade it for another family, another life?
No, because you have made me who I am today...........
I have learned what not to do and who I do not want to be..............
Mom, I grew up, I realized that I had a life and in order to live it I had to leave.............
But, you know what?  Right now I want you........
I want to be cradled............
I want to be hugged.........
Maybe I want what everyone else has.....
A family.................
Mom, I grew up, I am an adult, no one can stop me, I will not change, I am proud to say I am your daughter because the day I was born and throughout my life you were the perfect mom......................
I am your offspring and I thank you for being there for me whenever I needed you…�?.
You will never know how much I love you and miss you!
Sleep good my little angel


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From: STARSent: 4/28/2008 12:49 PM
I was here, (((Laina)))     Your thoughts are lovely..

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From: mtnwoman45Sent: 4/29/2008 7:50 PM
very nice tribute to your mom! Theres so much pain in your words, but also, so much pride. You loved your mom beyond words, and dont think for a minute, she didnt know it! She did. And she coulda written those same words to you. She was and is special to many of us. ty so much for sharing what she meant to you.
we'll get thru this.
mw

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From: peejaySent: 5/1/2008 4:16 AM
Your words reflect so many mother-daughter relationships.
 
You said it well
 
I miss her too..
 
but not like I know you do now.
 
God Bless you, darlin
 
God Bless you both.

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