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From: STAR  (Original Message)Sent: 7/21/2008 3:33 PM
I let fly the fly
Being busy at the bread bowl
is why I
used my toe
to push open the screen door
 
To her goggle-eyed brethren
who see their kind die at war
of bat and spray and papers
was it an act of their god
their miracle, then?
 
How odd
it could alo be this way with men
a seeming miracle but one mindless act
of a too busy god


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From: MSN Nicknamegr_and_funkSent: 7/22/2008 4:48 AM
Starry....my I ask HOW long was it betwist the time you toe pushed the door...and you posted this???....I gots a reason fur askin...Nice writin's by the by..I've missed them..

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From: STARSent: 7/22/2008 10:51 AM
lol Gr & thx    This was "thinkin on the fly"  on another door in another time. Back when I actually did have initiative enough to make our daily bread.   lol
 
I was reminded by seeing one on this door and letting it out along with me...