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| | | From: mtnwoman45 (Original Message) | Sent: 7/22/2008 6:26 AM |
CLOSURE Its a right You know-- A right Not A privilage- To go thru The door-- The door Of endings, Seperations, The finality Of it all. Its a right Of Passage- Only to be Experienced By the Participant- Closing this door And that door To find it opens Another-- One must go Thru it Alone And experience the Pain Of it, First hand, To put it to bed For another long Hard Winter alone. mw |
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| | | From: STAR | Sent: 7/22/2008 4:14 PM |
This one is a `thinker` type... puts the reader in motion, going through the doors... experiencing the pain of each. |
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I counted ''ten doors'' in that one...thats a Rough Road... |
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I wonder myself, if that closure ever truely comes. Each experience brings the oppertunity of more, and more, so many doors thsat it can become a maze. Do we go back, to see that they all have closed? Do wait at the threshold of each one before moving on? Thankfully some have those springy hinges that close all on thier own! Anyway, A very well sounded piece MW! Cant help but go into thought over it. Just the way I like it! |
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thx you guys! Yea, the revolving door of pain, and the ending of one experience and the beginning of another. Cant help but to grow, but only pain makes you learn this way. mw |
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