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Creative Writing : She Sleeps
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From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1  (Original Message)Sent: 10/28/2008 1:48 AM

She sleeps

With a face so serene

So beautiful

I cant help but stare

 

She’s warm

Like a down blanket on a cold night

Just want to fold myself in

And stay

 

She breathes

And a raging torrent of desire

Exudes from perfect lips

I must inhale

 

She stirs

And my thoughts do the same

Is this my chance

To kiss her?

 

She snuggles closer

And I close my eyes

Knowing she wants

To be here



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From: MSN NicknameJust_Jess_tooSent: 10/28/2008 2:47 AM
I felt as if I was looking in on  a very private moment...you captured it Heart...
JJ

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From: STARSent: 10/28/2008 11:26 AM
Yes, Tim, you did capture it and I could be enraptured with just the last verse, alone...

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From: MSN NicknameẄỉtçђ�?-©Sent: 11/3/2008 6:24 PM
she's the one that
snipped through
that heart of steel, eh?

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From: RoswalienSent: 11/4/2008 12:28 AM
very intimate; very nice

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From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1Sent: 11/9/2008 4:24 AM
I glad you all liked it... thanx.... yeah, she snipped through allright.... made a sharp little pair of shears with her wit and creativity.... i didnt stand a chance.
 

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